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Technology Submission Modifications

Kami Meran

I am the sapper
Kami Meran
Character Bio
Submission Name: TC-777
Link to Submission: TC-777
Summary of Modification: edit risistances to.
8 vs Slashing
8 vs Lightsabers
7 vs Piercing
8 vs Blasterfire
4 vs Blunt Force
4 vs Slug Throwers

Reason for Modification: Have been informed my resistances were wrong due to materials involved
Modification: alter too
8 vs Slashing
8 vs Lightsabers
8 vs Piercing
8 vs Blasterfire
8 vs Blunt Force
8 vs Slug Throwers
 
Major Faction

Jessica Med-Beq

Bombshell Genius
Jessica Med-Beq
Character Bio
Submission name: Volksgrenadier heavy MIRV missile
Link to submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/99305-volksgrenadier-heavy-mirv-missile/
Summary of modification: Addition of a light version, which launches normal capital-grade concussion missiles rather than heavy proton torpedoes
Reason for modification: The original version has been found on Kaeshana not to be the most practical
Pertinent development thread: Casus Belli (Tygaran Alliance/Galactic Alliance vs First Order Rebellion of Kaeshana) (posts # 55, 85, 98, 146, 222, 231, 260, 387, 417, 434, 491, 521, 612, 664, 679, 687, 813, 832, 848, 882, 922, 929; 22 posts)
Modification:

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A Volksgrenadier on a ground-based test rig prior to launch

Image Source: Defense Update
Intent: To provide a long-range cloaking assault concussion missile
Development Threads:
53 posts total
Manufacturer: Ringovinda Systems
Model: Volksgrenadier long-range MIRV assault missile
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: No
Production: Minor
Material: Durasteel, stygium, electronics, detonite, ion drive
Classification: MIRV assault missile
Size: Ship-mounted
Length: 7 meters (light version) 20 meters (regular version)
Diameter: 533mm (light version) 1700mm (regular version)
Weight: 2 tons (light version) 50 tons (regular version)
Ammunition Type: High explosive
Ammunition Capacity: 1 (7 clustered proton torpedoes)
Effective Range: Long-range turbolaser equivalent
Rate of Fire: Single action
Special Features: Cloaking device
Strengths:
  • Can target multiple ships at once (or multiple systems on the same ship)
  • Increased survivability due to the cloaking device
  • Can bypass ray shields
  • Capable of evasive action
Weaknesses:
  • Even when cloaked, its magnetic signature can still be locked on
  • Cloaking device is ineffective against Force-sensitive pilots/gunners
  • Should not be used on targets smaller than 100 meters
  • Can only be launched from a specialized assault concussion missile launcher capable of activating cloaking devices on missiles
  • The secondary vectors, upon deployment, are not cloaked
  • No more than a quarter of a launcher's warheads can be Volksgrenadiers
Description: Born from a gap in the missile arsenal of the then-Techno Empire, the Volksgrenadier heavy long-range assault missile allows a missile to target multiple ships at once, thanks to MIRV technology, which allows it to deploy multiple secondary vectors that can target multiple ships at once, while the bus carries a cloaking device capable of enhancing survivability, as well as a guidance system, making it capable of tracking targets. As with all MIRV-based missiles, the Volksgrenadier have a bus, which contains all the warheads that will ultimately be fired, and several secondary vectors. Seven Morcus heavy proton torpedoes placed in an hexagonal formation form the basis for the Volksgrenadier's secondary warheads. Once the bus is within the warheads' range of their targets, the bus will deploy the secondary vectors, that is, seven proton torpedoes, all at once. That is, when the bus is within standard capital proton torpedo range of the target furthest away from it (in the case of the proton torpedoes being aimed at different targets). The bus, which is simply used as a means of transportation for the proton torpedoes, contains enough fuel for allowing maneuverability within standard long-range turbolaser range, after which point it becomes "dead-stick" and loses any ability for maneuvering.

However, because of the cloaking device having two blind spots, that is, the bus' magnetic signature would still be visible, and that it does not protect against Force-detection, the missile's survivability is not perfect. Also, whereas the bus can be cloaked, the individual warheads, unfortunately, cannot. Due to the long-range nature of the missile and the firepower of the secondary vectors, it should not be used against ships below 100 meters in size. Also, due to the difficulty of manufacturing the cloaking devices in these missiles, no more than a quarter of a launcher's warheads can be Volksgrenadiers.

In the wake of the lessons learned on Kaeshana, two versions are made available for the Volksgrenadier warheads: one carrying seven standard capital-grade proton torpedoes in one bus, dubbed the light version, and one carrying seven Morcus heavy proton torpedoes, dubbed the regular version.

Important notes:
  • The light version counts for 15 normal capital-grade warheads or 3 heavy capital-grade warheads
  • The regular version counts for a large number of normal warheads (70 normal capital-grade warheads or 14 heavy capital-grade warheads)
Primary Sources:

Morcus heavy proton torpedo (the secondary warheads mounted inside the Volksgrenadier)
Volksgrenadier assault concussion missile launcher (its delivery system)

Submission name: Volksgrenadier assault concussion missile launcher
Link to submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/99302-volksgrenadier-assault-concussion-missile-launcher/
Summary of modification: Addition of a light version worth 3 heavy launchers
Reason for modification: The original version has been found on Kaeshana not to be the most practical
Pertinent development thread: Casus Belli (Tygaran Alliance/Galactic Alliance vs First Order Rebellion of Kaeshana) (posts # 55, 85, 98, 146, 222, 231, 260, 387, 417, 434, 491, 521, 612, 664, 679, 687, 813, 832, 848, 882, 922, 929; 22 posts)
Modification:

Image Source: N/A
Intent: To provide a delivery system for assault concussion missiles
Development Thread: Casus Belli (Tygaran Alliance/Galactic Alliance vs First Order Rebellion of Kaeshana) (posts # 55, 85, 98, 146, 222, 231, 260, 387, 417, 434, 491, 521, 612, 664, 679, 687, 813, 832, 848, 882, 922, 929; 22 posts)
Manufacturer: Ringovinda Systems
Model: Volksgrenadier assault concussion missile launcher
Affiliation: Open market
Modularity: Yes: can swap out the missiles being fired from it
Production: Minor
Material: Electronics, quadanium steel tube, durasteel frame
Classification: Assault concussion missile launcher
Size: Ship-mounted
Length: 15 meters (light version) 50 meters (regular version)
Weight: 500 tons (light version) 6000 tons (regular version)
Ammunition Type: Missiles
Ammunition Capacity: Depends on the mount ship and the version. Light version:
  • Frigate: 25 per launcher
  • Cruiser: 50 per launcher
  • Star Destroyer: 100 per launcher
  • Battlecruiser: 150 per launcher
Regular version:
  • Cruiser: 10 per launcher
  • Star Destroyer: 20 per launcher
  • Battlecruiser: 30 per launcher
Effective Range: Depends on the warheads
Rate of Fire: Standard assault concussion missile launcher firing rate
Special Features: Auto-loading system, variable missile loadout
Strengths:
  • Can fire both the Volksgrenadier MIRV missiles and regular assault concussion missiles
  • Capable of activating cloaking devices on warheads in the launching sequence if so loaded
Weaknesses:
  • Low capacity
  • The regular version can only be fitted on heavy cruisers and larger
  • Counts for a larger number of launchers than on regular assault concussion missile launchers (15 standard launchers, or 3 heavy launchers for the light version, 70 standard launchers, or 14 heavy launchers for the regular version)
  • Ammunition-dependent
Description: The then-Techno Empire launched Project Volkswagen in an attempt to create a long-range assault concussion missile capable of being cloaked, with multiple warheads. It became clear that the resulting missile was going to be compared to assault concussion missiles, and that cloaked long-range assault concussion missiles were going to require to be cloaked at launch. Hence the need for a proprietary assault concussion missile launcher capable of activating a cloaking device on warheads prior to launch. Equipped with an auto-loading system, it allows the launcher to be manned with a skeleton crew of five. It is capable of launching assault concussion missiles, regardless of whether or not they can be cloaked. In the wake of the lessons of battle learned on Kaeshana, it was found that the regular version wasn't the most practical to use. So a light version was developed, firing warheads that are either standard assault concussion missiles or light Volksgrenadier MIRVs, worth 3 heavy launchers for shipbuilding purposes.

That said, the sheer size of the regular version of the Volksgrenadier launcher limits the number of regular launchers that can be mounted on ships: ships below 1000m long can only mount one, ships between 1000m and 2000m can only mount two, and ships over 2000m long can only mount three.

Note:
  • The light version counts for 3 heavy launchers
  • The regular version counts for 14 heavy launchers
Primary Source:[SIZE=12.2222px] [/SIZE]Volksgrenadier heavy MIRV missile
 
Major Faction

Jessica Med-Beq

Bombshell Genius
Jessica Med-Beq
Character Bio
[member="Braith Achlys"] It was tedious to track down exactly which posts were directly plot-relevant to the character using the item in the submission modification request, but I nevertheless attached the rebellion of Kaeshana to the request.
 

San-Ji-Yan

Character
San-Ji-Yan
Character Bio
Submission name: Nagai Staff
Link to submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/53771-nagai-staff/
Summary of modification: Added link to species, fixed lists
Reason for modification: he broken lists always annoyed me
Modification: Links added and lists fixed

Material:
  • Wood
  • Crystal
Classification: Staff
Size: One Handed/Two handed
Length: 1.5m
Weight: .5-5kg (lower weight is when the staff is hollow and higher is when it houses a servant)
Special Features:
  • Can be used as a force weapon (requires skill in force weapon)
  • Can be used to house a Fa-Ut
  • Can be fashioned with a pick like head to pierce
 

GhostOfProtocol

The OOC One
GhostOfProtocol
Submission Name: The Lightsaber of Garnik
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/97628-the-lightsaber-of-garnik/
Summary of Modification: History of the blade added and an added space between paragraphs

Reason for Modification: I always said I would use the submission as a place to detail the history of the blade so. Everything is quoted, all that's needed is for the original stuff to be removed and the new stuff added. It is all present under "discription" and begins from the second paragraph. All that's left to say is thank you and take your time, there's no rush on this.

Modification:

"The blade was created via Meditation, the force creating the blade for Kei. This happened in the Dawn Temple, an old and abandoned Jedi Temple where Kei could be free of distraction when building his blade. The lightsaber would see first use in that room, a simple test to be sure everything was working. The lightsaber however would begin to see discontinued use soon after the bombing of Korriban, with it's first owner refusing to use weapons after witnessing the amount of deaths caused by the Silver Jedi bombing run on the city of Korriban City.

This lightsaber would see it's second usage by Kei upon his leave from Kesh. It would be used by Kei during the protection of the current president of Commenor, Lady Kay. It would serve simply as a tool to deter people however, only being used as a weapon if needed. It would be used again during training with Stardust Raxis before possession of the blade was given up. Kei would cease to use this blade and voluntarily give up possession of it and leave it in the care of Lady Kay, now Sith Lady so that should she ever regain her memories and turn back to the light she had a memory of Kei.

The lightsaber can be used in the hands of other lightsiders so long as they know the location of the activator button. This means that Kei can pass the lightsaber down if he wants to, he designed it that way so that he has an hairloom of his creation to pass down through his family, so one child can earn The Ebon Hawk and another will gain Kei's lightsaber, his prized tool he spent so long on. That's exactly what Kei wants, a tool for any children he might have. The lightsaber should serve them and their children and so on and so on."
 

Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
Sanya Val Lerium
Character Bio
So sorry to do this to you guys
1.
Submission Name: Slam droid
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...138-slam-droid/
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to prevent people using Inquisition products without purchase
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market
2.

Submission Name: Z6-droid brain
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...z6-droid-brain/
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to prevent people using Inquisition products without purchase
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market

3.
Submission Name: z7-droid brain
Link to Submission:http://starwarsrp.ne...-droid-brain/#�
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to prevent people using Inquisition products without purchase
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market
4.
Submission Name: E56-C2
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...c/48865-e56-c2/
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to prevent people using Inquisition products without purchase
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market
5.
Submission Name: ASN-676
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...76/#entry959360
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to allow the product to be purchased
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market
6.

Submission Name: P1-JK7
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...2-p1-jk7-droid/
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to prevent people using Inquisition products without purchase
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market

7.
Submission Name: arm braces
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...677-arm-braces/
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to prevent people using Inquisition products without purchase
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market
8.
Submission Name: M1-NAT Mining laser
Link to Submission:http://starwarsrp.ne.../#entry1485089�
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to prevent people using Inquisition products without purchase
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market
9.
Submission Name: Veru Cannon
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...n/#entry1496526
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to prevent people using Inquisition products without purchase
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market
10.
Submission Name: glop rounds
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...03-glop-rounds/
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to prevent people using Inquisition products without purchase
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market
11.
Submission Name: incitation Jet pack
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...k/#entry1204759
Summary of Modification: change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: to prevent people using Inquisition products without purchase
Modification: affiliation: Closed Market
 

Sunny Lee

Character
Sunny Lee
Character Bio
1)
Submission Name: Protera
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/103534-protera/
Summary of Modification: Change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: To require purchase or permission to use this product.
Modification: Affiliation: Closed Market

2)
Submission Name: Triadex – Tri-laminated Textile
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/103509-triadex-tri-laminated-textile/
Summary of Modification: Change of affiliation
Reason for Modification: To require purchase or permission to use this product.
Modification: Affiliation: Closed Market

Thank you!
 

Jsc

Disney's Princess
Jsc
Submission Name: Gem's Coat
Link to Submission: link
Summary of Modification: Delete the image and the image source
Reason for Modification: Reformatting
Modification: Delete the image and the image source
 
Major Faction

Dax Perl

The Reaper of Won Shasot
Dax Perl
Character Bio
Submission: The Fading Cloak
Summary: Just adding an image to the submission. No other changes
Reason: Just an aesthetic that I forgot to add originally.
Modification:

Description: After the Omega war, and obtaining Darth Moreth's lightsaber, the Dark Side pulled Dax harder than it ever had before. Not necessarily linked to the Dark Side these garments were crafted as he rejected the Order for abandoning him and his master. And yet he still rejects the Sith...
The garments consist of a black tunic, beneath a sleeveless cloak with a hood. The cloak is crafted from armorweave, where it obtains its protective traits from.

In addition, a mask was crafted alongside the cloak. The mask, shaped like a skull, where the jaw was fused to the skull, appears as if the creature had been born with no mouth. Made of durasteel, the mask is resistant to blaster bolts, just like any other piece of the metal.

(Image from DHgate)
 
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