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Technology Submission Modifications

Noah Corek

Cocked, Locked and a Smoking Barrel
Factory Judge
Submission Name: Corek Family Datacron
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/30086-corek-family-datacron/
Reason for Modification: to add something I forgot
Modification: Add this under tenants as a fourth one
Loyalty: The Corek family believes in one thing above else that dwarfs all three other tenants, loyalty. This means either loyalty till the death or loyalty to small things. Though you can count on one thing,a Corek always keeps a promise.
 
Jared Ovmar said:
[member="Darth Tsolan"]: Modified, have fun!
How far back have you gone? Mine hasn't been modified yet. Just curious.


I also needed this one:

Submission Name: Aaralyn's Lightsabers
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: Adjust Crystal in Tyrena to a Hurrikane Crystal that Jorus got from November during a Weekend Raid.
Modification:

It should read like below after change:

[SIZE=10pt]Kor-Vella: [/SIZE][SIZE=10pt]Violet[/SIZE][SIZE=10pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=10pt]bladed Lightsaber. Hurrikane Crystal from [member="November Sinclair"][/SIZE]

[SIZE=10pt] [/SIZE]
[SIZE=10pt]Tyrena: [/SIZE][SIZE=10pt]Blue[/SIZE][SIZE=10pt] bladed Lightsaber. Crystal made from a Adegan.[/SIZE]
 

Saera Willamina Savan

~+--- Skaidra ---+~ Beskarsmith, Alchemist
Submission Name: MMSP-02 "Oleander" ASMS
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/26374-mmsp-02-asms-oleander/
Reason for Modification: Realized the range is stupid-short
Modification: Multiply range by x10, remove CIS affiliation (leave Planetary Defense Market)

Submission Name: MMSP-03 "Electrosphere" LMDS-ES
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/26407-mmsp-03-lmds-es-electrosphere/
Reason for Modification: Realized the range is stupid-short / broken image
Modification: Multiply range by x10, fix broken image with http://i.imgur.com/T5DPXfb.png, remove CIS affiliation (leave "Planetary Defense Market")


Submission Name: RCM-01 "Wispmother" Duplicating Countermeasure
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/28307-rcm-01-wispmother-duplicating-countermeasure/
Reason for Modification: Add image
Modification: Add http://i.imgur.com/9v6is2Z.png, set affiliation to "Open Market"

Submission Name: MMSW-10 "Foxtrot" Vulcan Blaster
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/26709-mmsw-10-foxtrot-vulcan-blaster/
Reason for Modification: Fix broken image
Modification: Fix broken image with http://i.imgur.com/rnqMWC5.png, set affiliation to "Closed Market (Licensed)"

Submission Name: CIS Languor-Class Elite Starfighter
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/29525-cis-languor-class-elite-starfighter/
Reason for Modification: Update tags
Modification: The Confederacy of Independent Systems is now the Abrion Systems Authority.
 
Submission Name: Wraith Vapor Armor
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/36322-wraith-vapor-armor/
Reason for Modification: Niamh took the design with her when she left the Republic and wants to make it available to her new squadron mates, since she didn't actually go through official Republic channels the first time and made it as a personal gift to the Wraiths. Being as she owns the design, and never sold it to the Republic, she retains all rights and wishes to make a set for her new squadron.
Modification: Add Silver Jedi to the Affiliations.
 
Submission Name: Strill Claw Beskad
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/33072-strill-claw-beskad/
Reason for Modification: Making the Strill Claw Beskad available to the Mandalorian Protectors
Modification: Change Production from Limited to Minor; change tag from Personal to Mandalorian. Add Mandalorian Protectors to Affiliations.

Submission Name: Voxyn Mk 1 Beskar'gam
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/32862-anijas-voxyn-mk-1-beskargam/
Reason for Modification: Change in armor class
Modification: After further discussion with several techie people, I'd like to ask that my armor be upgraded to class 9. Reason being:
  • The amount of specialized tech involved.
  • The fact that the Voxyn Armor is improved beskar'gam; based on canon armor.
  • The fact that even the Aliit'gam (for mando NPCs) is of better quality.

Edits Requested:
- Change armor class from 8 to 9.
- Remove "And quick movement" from first line of 5th paragraph.
- change Materials from "Beskar/durasteel Alloy" to "90% Beskar/8% Durasteel/2% Ciridium (for flexibility) Alloy."


Please and thank you :)
[member="Jared Ovmar"]
 
Submission Name: Battery Droid
Link to Submission​: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/35575-suvian-sciences-battery-droid/
Reason for Modification: Due to tiering up, production of this droid has been increased to minor.
Modification:
Manufacturer: Suvian Sciences
Affilation: Open Market

Submission Name: CQC Expert Droid
Link to Submission​: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/36773-suvian-sciences-cqc-expert-droid/
Reason for Modification: The picture is a bad one. So I'll be looking for a replacement. It will also be upgraded to Minor Production.
Modification:
Manufacturer: Suvian Sciences
Affilation: Open Market

Submission Name: Annihilator Droid

Link to Submission​: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/35028-suvian-sciences-annihilator-droid/
Reason for Modification: This droid has production increased. So please up it to Minor Production. I will also be practically rewriting this droid, and changing it's appearance as well.
Modification:
Manufacturer: Suvian Sciences
Affilation: Open Market
 
Submission Name: Besuliik MK II Prototype
Link to Submission: LINKY
Reason for Modification: Prototype was successful on Empress Teta and put into production
Modification: Name Changed to Besuliik Mk II and production changed to minor
 
Submission Name: Silara Vantai's Second Personal Saber
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/36596-silara-vantais-second-personal-saber/
Reason for Modification: Silara's planned use for the saber has change her desire in length of the blade from shoto to normal in size.
Modification:
  • Length: 10cm (Hilt) 77 (Blade) to Length: 10cm (Hilt) 130cm (Blade)
  • "As a shoto blade, it was also made intentionally smaller for various dexterous purposes." removed from Special Features
  • "Created purposefully as a lightsaber shoto, the hilt was less than half the length of the original, with the blade at roughly just under half." removed from Description.
 
Submission Name: TerentAttack Cuffs
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: It's a product we make from our leftovers, and it was approved at Minor two tiers ago. Since then, we've exponentially expanded our terentatek business, twice.
Modification: Minor to Mass Production
 
Submission Name: PSG-Mk.1 'Song of Mandalore' Operator Kit
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: The original sub mentions 'verbal weapons control' yet the armor has none. Besides, it just doesn't feel very Mando-ish without gauntlet weapons.
Modification: Add the following paragraph, proprietary items purchased here. Please also add: 'Magnetized Boots,' 'Two Hour Air-Supply,' 'A Radiation Deflection Badge,' and 'A Thermal Underlay for Comfort in Extreme Environments' to the Other features list.


After several years of use, Domino embedded a miniature 'ARGH' flame-thrower to the back of the right gauntlet's fore-arm and added slots for the trios of fuel-capsule reloads to the right bicep of her armor. A heatbeam was added to the top of the left gauntlet and recharges its capacitor off the armor's jetpack allowing it to fire a short burst every few seconds in flight, or near thirty seconds continuous fire on the ground. The beam was originally a utility addition to provide cutting power, but it serves as an excellent mid-ranged back-up weapon especially since pure heat and light can not be reflected back by a lightsaber. A Baton of Ember is also mounted under each fore-arm where Domino can force-pull them into her hands to either replace her sabers or for non-lethal action. Though some mandalorian designs carried far more weapons, the Twi'lek decided to stop there, both so she didn't go overboard, and so the limits of the armor weren't stretched to the point of compromising its effectiveness.
 

Noah Corek

Cocked, Locked and a Smoking Barrel
Factory Judge
Submission Name: Hekler'Kok P-2
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/40146-heklerkok-p-2/
Reason for Modification: To replace the image that crapped out
Modification: http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20141107212542/callofduty/images/7/7d/Atlas_45_menu_icon_AW.png

Submission Name: Hekler'Kok R-2
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/34897-heklorkok-r-2-assault-rifle/
Reason for Modification: Found a image I like much better than the original
Modification: http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20141103130322/callofduty/images/4/4f/Bal-27_menu_icon_AW.png
 

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