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Technology Submission Modifications

Submission Name: Deus

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...pic/24181-deus/
Reason for Modification: It was a terrible idea to change the original the way I did. I simple with to revert it back to it's original state.
Modification: The spoiler is the original submission. I'd like it changed to that instead of.. What ever it is I made through bad decisions.




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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Krest
  • Model: Jedi Sword
  • Affiliation: Krest
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Manipulated Desh-Terenthium (Sword and Sheath), Corellian Hardwood (Sheath)
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Sword
  • Size: Hand-and-a-Half
  • Length: 120 centimeters
  • Weight: 1.5 kilograms
DESCRIPTION

Deus is the name Krest gave a blade he made himself. Between the teachings of Josiah Denko and Lord Daemos. He began his journey after reading up on the ancient Je'daii's weapons. Force Imbuned Blades. Lightsabers cut better. Deflected laser bolts. But their blades had no weight, a flaw in the Zabraks mind. He was trained at a young age to use metal blades, and after his shift to sabers he felt it was never the same.


Krest found himself on Val'hala, meeting with CEO Sno Wyte. She was the leader of a weapons company, and he had heard she knew the art. The trip turned out to be a profitable one, Krest learning from Lord Daemos how to channel the force and shape his blade at the same time. He failed multiple times after learning from the lord, and eventually had the skill well enough to make a decent blade.

But it was the Art of the Small Josiah Denko showed him and Hayato that proved the most effective. It allowed Krest to alter the metal in such a way similar to Sith Alchemy without the Dark side presence. Or at least just the Dark side. With Krest's quest to find pure balance in a similar fashion to the Je'daii his blade had both Light and Dark infused in it's blade. It is neither a Sith blade nor is it like Frostfall, the blade made in a similar way to Deus. The steel can still deflect blaster bolts, but it can also absorb lightning. The charge however is temporary, dissipating seconds after absorbing instead of staying adsorbed until the blade struck. On top of that it allows the power Force Weapon to be easier to accomplish, though not as well as the Frostfall counterpart.

The blade lets off a purple hue, almost in a flame like wisp smoking off the metal. The sheath is made of the same metal, allowing Krest to deflect sabers with it in his offhand. The sheath and hilt of the blade are also covered in Corellian Hardwood, only to prevent the wispy flame from giving his position away. The blade extends longer then most blades, giving Krest a longer reach, and in his mind the advantage.

Deus is a blade perfect for the Zabrak, allowing him to use blades he views as superior.
 
Submission Name: Sith Magnus armor
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/14889-sith-magnus-armor/
Reason for Modification: Several IC situations have caused battle damage and other changes to the armor. Renaming is also in effect, since Xardus (then known as Sadrion) never officially joined the Sith.
Modification:
- Removal of the mask
- Removal of 'optional cloak' section toward the end of the physical description.
- Removal of any mention of Sith, eg:
- Title changed to 'Magnus armor'
- Intent changed to 'To create a set of armor used by Sadrion, and Xardus later on'
- Model changed to 'Magnus armor'
- Additional information: A hole is located just below the left shoulder where a lightsaber was impaled under much pressure.
 
Submission Name: Kyr'vhetine - The Harvester
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/47288-kyrvhetine-the-harvester-personal-beskad-for-ijaat-akun/
Reason for Modification: To better equip Ijaat for going toe-to-toe w/ Force Users and cement his alliances with fellow craftsmen throughout the galaxy, specifically in this instance the Jal Shey craftsmen on Dantooine (for refrence of their work see here)
Modification:
  • Resist Mental Influence of the Dark Side
  • 'Battle flow' - When in combat with this blade, the quicker Ijaat is able to read his opponents moves and actions and react even quicker than they, effectively staying a step ahead
  • Enhanced reflexes
Additional Dev Thread: To Build a Better Mousetrap
 
Ok so this is an extensive list of tech created by unused characters of mine. I'd like to consolidate it all under my company with this char. Here goes

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/8102-raider-defense-industries-thor-class-mk-i-armor/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification:
Change production company to Ticon Defense Industries

Submission Name: Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10036-f1-field-medic-droid/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification: Change Affiliation to Ticon Defense Industries and Black Imperium

Submission Name: Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10861-dreadhawk-gunship/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification:
Change Affiliation to Ticon Defense Industries and Black Imperium

Submission Name: Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10196-rdi-smartpack/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification: Change Affiliation to Ticon Defense Industries and Black Imperium

Submission Name: Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/42568-privateer-class-armadillo/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification: Change Affiliation to Ticon Defense Industries and Black Imperium

Submission Name: Link to Submission:http://starwarsrp.net/topic/42568-privateer-class-armadillo/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification: Change Affiliation to Ticon Defense Industries and Black Imperium

I have noted that the one created by RC 212, my alt have been reposted since the crash. Do I have to resub these?
 
I would like to remove the affiliation (and subsequent mention in the intent) of the Shadow Dynasty from several designs:

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/47646-ii-eea-phobium-based-powercell/(Affiliation)
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/48983-akurojinnohi-class-heavy-repeating-blaster/(Intent and Affiliation)
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/47643-kiyohime-class-blaster-rifle/(Intent and Affiliation; ALSO, if the manufactuer's name could be corrected from Izanmi Ironworks to Izanami Ironworks)

Thank you.
 

Jsc

Disney's Princess
Fondorian Katan Sub Modification

Please replace this sub's profile with this new one. Changes are purely cosmetic. Easy as Copy/Paste. Thx. :D

Fondorian Katan Suit - (Netherworld Shift)

Intent: Personal Protection, Hostile Environment Combat Suit
Development Thread: None

Manufacturer: OPSAAT R&D Corellia
Model: Fondorian Katan Suit Mk V
Affiliation: Any
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Agrinium Armorweave, Synthetic Fibers and Plastics; with Titanium, Kinetic Gel, and Glasteel Components

Description:

Prototyped on Corellia and field tested at Firebase Phoenix Fondor, the Fondorian Katan is an improvement over earlier Cinnagarian EVA designs. The suit was created specifically for Extra-Vehicular Activity in deep space as well as deployment in hazardous terrestrial environments during war-time conditions.

The layout is composed of an Agrinium Armorweave overlaying an insulated, synthetic black body-glove. Reinforced Titanium plates with insulated Gel layers are applied throughout the design to facilitate moderate kinetic protection and to ensure high combat durability ratings. Titanium is also applied in the construction of the helm, the exotic filtration attachment, and the powered backpack. Glasteel is molded and opaqued as the visor to counter deep space flare mitigation. The crowning achievement of the EVA design however: the Powered Backpack now offers Jetpack compatibility.

Netherworld Description:

Shifted by the dark powers of Akala's Realm, this suit of armor has taken upon itself a wild and completely alternative decoration. Melting from bronze to an ethereal silver hue. However, this twisted sister's prowess is purely cosmetic. The armor somehow retains all the former suits traits, materials, and integrity. Whatever strange powers created that twisted nether and this memorizing new battle armor, no one may know for sure.


Classification: Hostile Environment Combat Suit
Weight: ~ 16kg (w/o Jetpack)
Quality: 6

Armor Features:
  • Insulating Synthetic Body Glove provides outstanding displacement against hazardous chemical substances and the vacuum of space.
  • Titanium Plates and Agrinium Armorweave provide excellent protection against energy weapons.
  • Powered Backpack offers 8 hours worth of a breathable bio-air mixture as well as powers many of the suit's components.
  • Mag Boots incorporated into both boots.
  • Power Gloves incorporated into both palms.
  • Steel tethering cable incorporated into right forearm bracer. (~ 5m)
  • Jetpack compatible.
Helm Features:
  • HUD display
  • Audio-Visual Transmitter and Recorder
  • Light Amplification Interface
  • Rebreather Attachment
  • Exotic Filtration Attachment
  • Wireless Attachement
Trivia:
  • The suit is named after Mandolorian Champion Bo Katan
  • The suit received a new cosmetic design during the Netherworld Galactic Event.
Gallery: - Image Credit: - Masateru Ikeda of Japan. Warframe. Photoshop.

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Colap Ticon said:
Ok so this is an extensive list of tech created by unused characters of mine. I'd like to consolidate it all under my company with this char. Here goes

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/8102-raider-defense-industries-thor-class-mk-i-armor/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification:
Change production company to Ticon Defense Industries

Submission Name: Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10036-f1-field-medic-droid/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification: Change Affiliation to Ticon Defense Industries and Black Imperium

Submission Name: Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10861-dreadhawk-gunship/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification:
Change Affiliation to Ticon Defense Industries and Black Imperium

Submission Name: Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10196-rdi-smartpack/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification: Change Affiliation to Ticon Defense Industries and Black Imperium

Submission Name: Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/42568-privateer-class-armadillo/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification: Change Affiliation to Ticon Defense Industries and Black Imperium

Submission Name: Link to Submission:http://starwarsrp.net/topic/42568-privateer-class-armadillo/
Reason for Modification: Consolidation
Modification: Change Affiliation to Ticon Defense Industries and Black Imperium

I have noted that the one created by RC 212, my alt have been reposted since the crash. Do I have to resub these?

Your first four requests are Fringe Tech, you cannot take them away from the faction without Permission from the Factory Admins. Also changing the company without having solid IC rationale and development isn't allowed. [member="Colap Ticon"]
 
Submission Name: Nightshrike Armour
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/35524-nightshrike-prototype-stealth-armour/
Reason for Modification: To include the modular system from the new obsidian armour on a much lighter base for those who prefer stealth.
Modification: Add the following:

Modular Components:
The armour suit has data and power running through it in the same manner as Obsidian Armour, and has a standard fit for adding new components. Those components available or optional are shown below, but Knights may submit new components separately and list where they fit.


Helm
Standard:
Macrobinocular Viewplate w/Infrared Scanner
Encrypted, Internal Comlink (voice controlled)
Augmented Reality HUD: this is able to project information onto the user’s view. For example it can interface with tactical and comm systems to show where an approaching drone is in the sky, or another Knight is through a wall. It could interface with the sighting system of a grenade launcher to show where the round will land and approximate radius.
Motion/Audi Sensors: can highlight movement, or direction of a blaster shot to the user.
Audio/Visual Recorder
Optional (one):
One optional component [to be submitted separately or taken from Canon]

Back
Standard:
Broadband Antenna
Positioning System (equivalent to GPS)
Oxygen Filtration System
Powerpack for systems
Magnetic Holster for main weapon
Optional (one):
Charger/Carrier for Remotes [to be submitted separately or taken from Canon: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Remote]
Carrier for Droid Mines: http://starwarsrp.ne...-droid/?hl=mine
Turret Dispenser: http://starwarsrp.ne...q-micro-turret/

Forearms
Standard: N/A
Optional (Two):
Command and Control Terminal: Standard Datapad with ACA software for controlling droids. Comes with laser attachment for highlighting targets. Frequently used with Hailfire and Hunter-killer droid backup/
Spynet Terminal: Standard Datapad with Spynet software which includes a package of slicing software.
Wrist Blaster: http://starwarsrp.ne...-wrist-blaster/
Templar Shield: http://starwarsrp.ne...templar-shield/
Splinter knife brace and poison dispenser: Splinter Knifes


Belt
Standard: N/A
Optional (one):
Utility belt: http://starwarsrp.ne...r-utility-belt/
Personal Cloak: http://starwarsrp.ne...loaking-device/
Power Scavenger: http://starwarsrp.ne...ower-scavenger/
 
[member="Ardeo Sophos"] [member="Raziel"] [member="Karen Roberts"] [member="Mordecai Zambrano"] [member="Aaralyn Gyndar"] [member="Alric Kuhn"] [member="Ijaat Akun"] [member="Sanya Val Lerium"] [member="Sanya Val Lerium"] [member="Xardus Folidaar"] [member="Darth Ferus"]

Submissions modified.

[member="Vi'kas Mirtis"]

Your submission has been approved specifically without modularity, have you roleplayed changing this?
 

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