Codex Denied Bryn'adûl | Military Installation 01A

[Tathra Khaeus]

The Bryn'adûl | Military Installation 01A

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create an installation for the Bryn'adûl on various planets.
• Image Credit: X
• Canon: N/A
• Links: Provided Throughout Submission

SETTING INFORMATION

• Military Base Name: Military Installation
• Classification: Military Installation Type 01A
• Location:

​- Sraeljoarsk
​- Caradim
​- Edemar
​- Lowick
​- Hurikane​
​- Tund

• Affiliation: The Bryn'adûl
• Population: Heavy | 10,000+ Active Duty Combatants​
• Demographics: Draelvasier Military and various Beasts
• Accessibility: Heavily Guarded, the Military Installation is a fortress protected by Ra'mak War Beasts, M'gaelak patrolling the territory and Syphons using their vampirism to find and sense alien technology.
• Description: The size of a large city; the Military Installations of the Bryn'adûl are incredibly impressive. Acting as a centralised home for Draelvasier on each planet taking by their encroaching military. Following extensive terraforming, the Bryn'adûl Instillations are built with an above ground and underground element. The installation facilities above ground are primarily housing for response forces & planetary defences. Those below ground are primarily cloning and training facilities.

POINTS OF INTEREST

​​- UNDERGROUND FACILITIES:

• Cloning Facilities: Deep underground, bioorganic cloning facilities operate day & night to create new Draelvasier. Baedurin, Aeravalin and Sraelvun are all created in these cloning facilities. There are a total of two, cloning facilities. Each generate a total of six-hundred clones per day.
• Ra'mak & Skirmisher Bays: Near the upper levels of the Underground Base, are a series of four Bays, each holding a total of two Ra'maks and ten Squadrons per bay.
• Sentinel Placement Craters: Dotting the several kilometre stretch of the Instillations outer defences, there are a total of ten Sentinel Planetary cannons. These cannons are heavily fortified and protected by Skirmishers.
• ​Beast Chambers: A large area of the underground facilities are separated containment facilities built to maintain and nurture many of the beasts typically kept at the Instillation.
• ​Central Command Facility: The Central Command facility is located underground, and can control all security systems above and below ground. Additionally, can withhold defence controls from the Surface Command Centre.

​- SURFACE FACILITIES:

• Drone Barracks: Living areas and deployment zones from Drone Forces. These Drone barracks are directly connected to the Ra'mak's bays, allowing for Drones to quickly be deployed by Ra'maks.
• ​Brute & Zealot Barracks: Living areas and deployment zones for Specialised Forces. The Brute and Zealot forces are linked to an Orkale deployment station, allowing for speedy delivery of various special forces across the Instillation.
• ​Syphon Patrol Areas: Encircling the Installation on various levels and layers of the facility are Syphons, their ability to cover great distances with their senses affords the Bryn'adûl an acute advantage of having almost no blind spots.
• ​Secondary Command Facility: The secondary command facility is station above ground as a quick response failsafe, able to control various defence mechanisms and security systems pertaining to the outer defences and surface elements of the Bryn'adûl forces.
• ​Shaman Temple: In the lower central area of the Surface Base, the Shaman temple stands as both a training area and a place of meditation and entrustment. This temple trains new beasts and Shamans, but its inhabitants can also provide battle meditation to those within the vicinity of the Instillation.

SECURITY: ​MAXIMUM
​​Assets-
​x10 Sentinel Planetary Cannons
​x40 Skirmisher Squadrons
x50 Sirracus Wyrms
x12 Drone Battalions
x4 Reserve/Training Battalions
x6 Brute Companies
x​4 Zealot Squads
x10 Shamans Adepts
x20 Kadesh Sentries
x30 Brumaks
x60 Rhivaks
x6 Obaliscs
x4 Ra'mak Units
x2 Patrolling M'gaelak
x20 Syphon
Draelvasier Technology; Security Systems

HISTORICAL INFORMATION:
​In 857ABY, the Bryn'adûl began the production of new facilities. Facilities designed to encompass large forces, concentrated in a heavily defended area of a recently decimated planet. These Instillations are built to hold forces always prepared for warfare, whether through the arrival of Conquesters and deployment ships to ferry them to far flung battlefields, or to fight tooth and nail for their newly cemented Home planet.

 

[Elpsis Kerrigan]

[member="Tathra Khaeus"]

Image Credit: x

Seems you forgot to link image credit. Please add the source link of the image.

Demographics: Draelvasier Military and various Beasts

Since they're a Chaos Canon species, please hyperlink Draelvasier.

Military Base Name: Military Instillation Classification: Military Instillation Type 01A

It would be Installation, not Instillation.

Affiliation: The Bryn'adûl

Please hyperlink The Bryn'adûl.

​Draelvasier Technology; ​Access Codes, Scanning Equipment, Force Imbued Defence technology [High Security standard tech equivalent]

Could you please elaborate on the Draelsavier Technology a bit? How does it differ from galactic standard? And provide hyperlinks to tech subs where appropriate, if there are any of note.

Also could you explain what you mean with Force Imbued Defence Technology?

x4 Servitors

Per the unit sub, this unit is Unique/Small and only has 4 members in total. Is this unit stationed in every incarnation of this base? That would be a bit contradictory, since there's several of these installations, but only a single unit with a total of 4 members. Please clarify.

The Instillation typically houses; ​x12 Drone Battalions ​x4 Reserve/Training Battalions ​x6 Brute Companies ​x​4 Zealot Squads ​x10 Shamans Adepts ​x20 Kadesh Sentries ​x30 Brumaks ​x60 Rhivaks ​x6 Obaliscs ​x4 Ra'mak Units ​x2 Patrolling M'gaelak ​x20 Syphons x4 Servitors

Since these are all combat units, they should be listed in the Security field.

You've written a base has +10 thousand active duty combatants. While hard numbers are welcome (though optional), Population requires a rating per the Base Template. So pick one of the following.

Population: [ Choose from: Uninhabited, Insignificant, Sparse, Moderate, Heavy, Crowded. How large is this Military Base? How many armed units? If your military base is generic, you may separate this population into Army Personnel, Navy Personnel, etc. ]

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

[member="Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori"]

-Image Credit given
-Instillation switched to Installation
-Linked Draelvasier technology submission [should help clarify the tech, as it operates similar to standard technology however through a different manner]
-Linked Bryn'adûl Faction & The Species
-Selected a Population

On the note of the Servitors, it states the unit is small, not unique. Additionally, the submission notes that only 4 can be deployed at once. That does not mean that 4 only exist at one time ICly. This is OOC balancing, not relative to what can be stationed in a particular area.

 

[Elpsis Kerrigan]

[member="Tathra Khaeus"]

Thank you for making those edits.

On the note of the Servitors, it states the unit is small, not unique. Additionally, the submission notes that only 4 can be deployed at once. That does not mean that 4 only exist at one time ICly. This is OOC balancing, not relative to what can be stationed in a particular area.

This is a quote from the Servitors' submission.

• Unit Size: Small [Contains four in total]
• Unit Availability: Unique [Only one able to be deployed at a time]
• Unit Experience: Veteran

This is from the Codex Unit Template:

• Unit Size: [ This is how many individuals make up a single unit. Choose from Small (each unit is small, comprising a dozen members or less), Medium (moderately sized units, often specialized), Large (many individuals, often compromising the rank and file). ]
• Unit Availability: [ This is how many units are available for deployment. Choose from Unique (only one), Rare (very few, difficult to replace, may have long training times), Uncommon (some, replaceable, enough to support), Common (many, easy to replace, likely with more always in training). ]

Discussed this with Codex staff and it's as I outlined. Size means how many individuals make up a unit, Availability how many units exist (e.g. X number of squads, platoons, companies etc.). A Small unit has twelve members at most and a Unique/Small one is just that one team/squad/squadron (e.g. Rogue Squadron would be a Unique/Small unit). So per your sub's ratings, there is literally one unit composed of four Servitors. A Rare/Small unit would have multiple small teams, but a Unique/Small one only has a single one. You have 6 planets here, so the Servitors cannot be on all of them. Even if you deployed a single Servitor to each planet, it would not be enough. The unit could be at specific base X on planet Y, but it cannot be everywhere else.

​Access Codes, Scanning Equipment, Force Imbued Defence technology [High Security standard tech equivalent]

Still need to clarify what Force Imbued Defence Technology means.

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

[member="Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori"]

Looks like I'm gonna have to edit the Servitor submission, as available for deployment isn't the same how many exists and Codex Staff should probably clarify that in the Template. As, available for deployment is not indicative of how many exist.

Seriously, you guys should change that.

I'll make a separate submission of tech, regarding some specifics for the defences and security measures.

 

[Elpsis Kerrigan]

[member="Tathra Khaeus"]

If you would like to submod the Servitors' sub and do a quick sub for the Force Imbued tech, I can pause the judging.

Tag me once you're done and I'll continue reviewing this.

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

[member="Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori"]

Well there already is a sub for the force imbued tech. X
But I figured you'd want a separate submission for security systems?

 

[Elpsis Kerrigan]

[member="Tathra Khaeus"]

If the security systems are just generic Canon stuff, no sub is needed.

If they're something that use the Draelvasier tech you linked in your post, I'd like a submission since it seems to be an unusual piece of tech that's unique to your custom species. That way there's a frame of reference of what the security systems do and do not do, especially if any of these bases become a setting in PvP threads.

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

[member="Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori"]

Okay, I'll get on that sometime tonight or tomorrow.

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

[member="Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori"]

Removed the Servitors, and made a new submission detailing the Security systems of Draelvasier Tech, hyperlinked in 'Security Systems'.

 

[Elpsis Kerrigan]

[member="Tathra Khaeus"]

Approved.

 

[Srina Talon]

Submission Name: Bryn'adûl | Military Installation 01A
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/brynadûl-military-installation-01a.130688/
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Needs updates

Don't forget to include a list of changes and tag a member of Codex Staff when you're done. Thanks!

 

[Srina Talon]

Tathra Khaeus

Still working on this?

If I don't hear anything back in a few days it will be archived due to inactivity. If you would like it pulled back out of the archived so that it can be worked on - Please make the request in the Submission-Modification Thread.

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

Srina Talon

Not still working on this. Archive away