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RP Pet Peeves?

RP in the first person.

It irritates me. Unless you actually are the person you are roleplaying, then the only time RP in the first person I find acceptable is when it's a single writer solo-writing, or you're writing a damn autobiography. Otherwise, every single one of your posts just reads like your personal diary to me.
 

Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
Valiens Nantaris said:
It's petty, and there's often good reasons for it...but I cannot stand poor spelling and grammar. This is a mode of entertainment entirely based on text, so jumbles of text with no punctuation or paragraphs does annoy me. I'm not asking for perfection, but for an effort to be made.
Hey some of us have trouble spelling and using punctuation. Like me I do try my best to not make mistakes but dyslexia is a pain in the arse. I know it's annoying but pointing it out can hurt people and I know you do it sometimes :p. You may not like it but if you notice someone is having trouble why not ask them in a pm if they would like someone so read through something and give them help. I know you a busy guy but we are a community and help can be given in more ways than one. [member="Valiens Nantaris"]
 
Spy work that isn't done IC. Joining a faction doesn't mean your character was immediately given a handbook containing all their darkest secrets. Put the work in on the boards. Do the threads, take a chance on getting caught. If James Bond didn't ever get caught, those movies would be boring as hell. Mon Mothma didn't say "Many Bothans were goddamn superstars and picked this up on their lunch break." There are risks to the spy game. Use it as an opportunity to do some great writing that isn't necessarily combat related with those who write your character's IC enemies.
 
*deep breath*

Huhboy.

First, people who nag for posts, or whine about someone disappearing. "The Vanishing Act" happens. I do it all the time. Hell, I've been on this board for three years and I think I might have RP'd with somewhere around two dozen people in that time. There are any number of reasons for someone to drop a thread and not give any justification for it. Maybe it's real life in the way. Maybe they lost interest in you, as a character or as a writer. Maybe it's deeper than that, or maybe it was just because the spark is gone. Whatever the reason for just up and vanishing is, no one on this board owes you anything. Is it bad to write with someone and then vanish? Probably. Is it worse to condemn them for not wanting to keep playing pretendy fun-time games with you? Absolutely. Get off your high horse and find someone who posts at your speed.

Second, dueling. Chaos dueling is...not my speed. Or at least it isn't any more. I used to have a lot of fun with it, but now everyone's far too concerned with winning, "realism" with laser swords and psychic powers, and their fancy tech bullcrap to be fun any more. It's a big part of the reason I'm pretty absent right now.
 
when someone goes through paragraphs, describing an attack of some sort and the person they're fighting against only briefly describes their reaction as " XXXX simply dodges the attack with little effort."

I've done it before without thinking about it and it makes me feel so edgy. Which is why I have only PvPd in one thread with a different character on this site. Even then it was against NPCs. The actual character was taking potshots while I was trying to be kind of sneky.


[member="Fabula Caromed"]
Totally agree with the dueling part. Once it becomes about getting the most powers or being as strong / fast as possible so that you can win the edginess contest it isn't fun anymore.
 
When I miss something in a post. - This is for me :D, I honestly didn't do it on purpose, so by all means give me a literal kick. Probably just only had a limited time to post that day and should have left it ;)
Typo's - again for me, see above.

^ I don't care so much about these in other writers, I just run with it, but you'll see me make edits, then another edit, then re-edit somedays because i've fixed a typo, then made another one heh.

That answers some of you, about people not posting for a day or two, (or even a week+ if you need time with me) better they have actual time to devote to your thread together!

What bugs me in others:

Nothing really, aside from OOC nonesense, or someone bringing OOC into the IC overly much. I think i'm past the stage of wanting other people to be anything but enjoying their posts, when I put limits on them, its going to cut into that. - That's my meh with FvF with a personal duel I can just say cool whatever, and let it shape the story, but with a large FvF its harder because you need to see more back and forth for the faction as a whole.

I do find it harder to write with people that pull things too far out of left field to derail a plot someone has setup for a group, but that's more a concern for others around me, than me personally.
 
I am guilty of so many things in this thread, but we all do try our best.

Anyway, my pet-peeve is needlessly large/elaborate/fluffy/cluttered post in interaction between characters.

I've always held that the first and foremost purpose of writing is to convey a message. Flavour is important, but it is secondary to clarity. If I write descriptions or thoughts, generally things that won't impact other characters directly, then I'll flavour away into the sunset. However, in such matters as a duel, there have been times where I need to read, re-read, and re-re-read a post just to understand the outline of the action that is taken. If I look back to the post, it is sometimes swamped up in unnecessary clutter and hogwash which I must then skim to find the part I need in order to reply.

If the bits I need are easy to find, then I have no problem with it, but if "threw a straight punch for her face" was jammed into the middle of a ten-line paragraph detailing the character's tragic backstory, I get a bit miffed.

I'm not saying the shorter post is inherently good and the longer post is inherently bad, but sometimes there is clutter just for the sake of an appealing size. It's not inherently wrong, but it does bug me endlessly. That is my pet-peeve.
 
Not having a laptop to write my good posts.

I mean, I can't write my fancy fancy posts on my phone. No chat box, no options to edit stuff. Personal peeve.

What I don't like is punishing a writer because they misread a post. I've seen it so many times, and its happened to me endlessly. You misread a post in a duel (usually where it happens) about someone moving in one direction when they actually moved in another, and instead of telling you for the sake of the story, your opponent posts that everything you did in your post is wrong because you misinterpreted the post.

It's needless, and rude at the end of the day.
This place is to write stories, not punish people because they didn't see the part that you pulled your arm back instead of leaving it out or something.
 
*does his best attempt at making the most pet peeve ridden thread of all time*


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I karkin hate the jungle, he mused to himself, the thick, humid, jungle, air wrapping the group in a blanket of stickiness that even the galaxies most durable tape would struggle to rival. There destination lay off in the distance, over their, behind a temple that was many generations older than either Patches or [member="Zoltan Rarsk"] , though to be fair, Patches wasn't certain about the ladder.

It had taken far longer than originally anticipated, with a number of good -and not so good - souls lost along the way. The group was rattled, having recently lost [member="Corey's OOC"] to battle with a wizard, the flames from which the battle were so intense Patches swore he lost an eyebrow. Whom had fired the first shot, no one was certain; but if one thing was certain, it was far from over. In fact, Patches suspected that battle would carry over into other battles, expeditions, and random threads about whether someone was single.

Patches shook his head for a moment, clearing his mind after such an odd thought. An odd thought in dead, one he needn't concern himself with at this moment.

Ahead was a checkpoint of guards, some thirty or forty of them; nay, it was more like a battalion. There were walkers, men with big guns, shiny staffs, and a menacing look on every one of their expressions. Patches took cover behind a log, eyeing up the obstacle. If he could whistle, he would have, but instead, he just exhaled. "Don't suppose you brought your All-In-One rocket launcher, de-nueralyzer, chainsaw, thermal expander and smoothie maker, did you?" he asked [member="Carten Flaa"] .

Carten merely flashed a grin, joined by three jedi - for show probably, though they did have a habit of being able to take on a four-hundred and seventy eight enemies to one ratio from time to time - and made quick work of the battalion. It was a vibrant display of colours and carnage, as screams echoed through the forest while Patches enjoyed a delicious smoothie made by the very same weapon that was tearing both trees and foes in half. [member="Valiens Nantaris"] gave the crew a nod of approval and brought his cup up to Patches, as their glasses klinked, before resting his hand on his waste.

[member="Ashin Varanin"] tried to join in on the smoothie celebration, but Patches and Valiens were too busy enjoying their delicious-frozen-strawberry-treat to themselves to notice.

[member="Ijaat Akun"] was to circle around the temple to the back with a group of commandos, and provide a distraction for the main task force, but for whatever reason, his squad was still stuck at the planning stages, and had not been heard from for quite some time. Patches feared the worst, but wouldn't voice his concern... poof... gone, he mused to himself.

Thankfully, [member="Patricia Susan Garter"] had stepped up to fill the void, with her Mandalorian squad of commandos. Patches couldn't recall all of them, but that Jatne Naast Cuyir fellow she was with seemed menacing. Some would even say he was Best Destroyer to Exist... though only some would say that.

A quick radio call to [member="Lorelei Darke"] went unanswered; apparently she still hadn't made up her mind on whether what they were doing on this planet was moral or not. Wish she would just take a stance and stick with it, he thought to himself.

As Patches finished off his smoothie, the sound of a straw struggling to grasp at the last bits of frozen treats, he tossed the empty cup to the jungles floor, which did not appear to amuse [member="The Revenant"] , as Patches could feel his glaring gaze.

"Oh, what, you're one of those tree huggers, aren't you?" asked Patches, as Revenant glared at Patches. If his eyes could shoot lasers, Patches would have lost his head.

"I was GOING to come back and pick it up later..." said Patches, though Revenant wasn't having any of it, the glare quickly turning to anger. It was as if he was holding his breath, as his face began to turn red.

"FINE!" exclaimed Patches, picking up the empty cup, "ARE YOU HAPPY?" yelled Patches, grabbing the cup, and throwing it into his bag, "No everything in there is going to smell like strawberries!" he said, slinging his bag over his shoulder.

Patches was momentarily distracted, as he heard [member="Darth Vornskr"] say "I got this one," as he peeled off from the group to intercept a straggler from the battalion. [member="Kira Corsai"] followed suit to assist in the interception of any stragglers from the main group, her weapon drawed and ready to do battle with any that would dare cross her path.

As they neared the temple, Patches noticed the group was thinning, as everyone appeared pulled in different directions. Another patrol lay between them and the temple. "You have got to be kidding me," said Patches in a whisper, not wishing to draw their attention. [member="Draven Carter"] moved to the front of the pack, volunteering for this group.

"I've got this," he said, and Patches wasn't going to argue. Though his tactics did prove to be a bit odd, as Patches had never quite witnessed a duel on a teeter-totter before. It was a sight to behold, if not a bit lacking in both balance and grace.

An explosion in the distance only confirmed their worst fears; [member="Gulliver Foyle"] had discovered the landmines surrounding the temple of [member="Vitor Imperieuse"] . They had heard rumours of such traps when they planned this invasion, but they were just rumours... until reality sunk in.

Sithspit, cursed Patches under his breath, having never been to fond of explosives because of past events that he will not get into and leave you all hanging.

However, the dress [member="Cira"] was wearing as she entered the ballroom left little to the imagination, as Patches remarked to @Sarge Poetteiger , "close your mouth mate, they don't like that," though Sarge paid Patches little mind. It wasn't until [member="kendopanda"] pointed out that his was from a completely different thread, that both Patches and Sarge got back on track to the mission at hand.

Thankfully, [member="Karrus Zorathi"] and his brother had removed any potential civilian casualties from the battle field prior, in particular ensuring both the children's and their parents safety; though Zarack and Karrus had spent half the time bickering of whom would be lead. Regardless, their actions was one less distraction for [member="Avadreia Lacroix"] , which was a in everyone's best interest.

As they neared their target, keeping low to the ground to remain undetected as long as possible, the snap of a twig broke the silence... followed by the rustling of a bush, the rolling of a boulder and the falling of a tree, several yards from the main group. Patches cast a glance to his left, looking straight at [member="Gav Arwell"] , making the hush sign with his index finger against his lips.

Really? he thought to himself. A Bantha would draw less attention.


As a result of the boulder rolling down a hill - or was it the falling of a tree - there was no element of surprise any more. Both sides opened fire on each other, as [member="Cyril Grayson"] led to the charge on the right side, swinging his saber wildly, hitting everything in his path... except for the twenty seven blaster bolts that went his direction, and now littered his chest. The glow of the saber vanished as he fell to his knees, an almost smile on his face, as he fell forward. A lone, single tear began forming at the side of Patchs eye... but before the tear could reach his chin, the mighty Jedi lept from his previous position of being face first in the mud and considerably dead, only to resume the wild slashing of his lightsaber.

It was at this point, that Patches had decided he had enough of this, and wasn't sure if he wanted to continue. His feet froze as blaster fire passed from both sides. Patches heart wasn't into it anymore, and he just wanted to go home, drink some Corellian Ale, scour the holonet for a good flick and get off this flea infested planet.

So he did what any good smuggler would do. He fell to the ground and star fished, closed his eyes, and thought happy thoughts... never to be heard from or seen of again.

Oh, and remember those stragglers [member="Darth Vornskr"] left to go take care of, a long while ago? He finally killed ONE of them... just now. Took him forever.



THE END.


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Please do not be offended if your pet peeve did not get written in... It's tough to God Mode in your own post with no foe, or post out of turn... when it's all one post.


I wanted to write more pet peeves... but this took longer than expected. Hopefully you can find the humour in this that I did.


Oh, and MY pet peeve? Completely cosmetic and not relevant at all... but those whom don't colour code their dialogue. Which is why I found it very painful to write and read the above!
 

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