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Submission Name: Point Nadir
Link to Submission: Point Nadir
Summary of Modification: Adding defenses / expanding the sub with N-1 Orbital station + updating to 2.0 template
Reason for Modification: Bringing up to 2.0 standard, updating with new location development
Modification: Since I intend on modifying the whole formatting and adding a bunch of text, probably easiest if you move this to Pre-codex for edits.
 
Submission Name: House Thul Scouts
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: adding a speeder bike, and updating to new format
Reason for Modification: Speeder bike approved, as well as removing sniper rifle, as well as increasing their role.
Modification:
[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Intent: To have scout unit[/SIZE]
  • Image Credit: na
  • Links: na
[SIZE=9pt]GENERAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Unit Name: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]House Thul Scout [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]House Thu[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]l[/SIZE]
  • Classification: recon
  • Equipment:
  • Scout Armour
  • Scout Carbine
  • 2x Grenades
  • H.T.E Outrider Bike
  • Binocluars
  • Comlink
[SIZE=9pt]COMBAT INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Availability: UnCommon[/SIZE]
  • Deployment: Minor
  • [SIZE=9pt]Strengths & Weaknesses: [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]+[/SIZE]Good Shots
  • +Can get round Battlefield easily, if mounted
  • +Make artillery strikes hit harder
  • + Can hide if dismonted
  • - Easy to target and kill if on their bike
  • - Slow if not on bike
  • Description: Scouts units job was to get in front the main infantry column, and check out potential threats. Though once nearing the area, they tend to dismount and make the last the of the trip on foot. As the bikes would give away the position. Though they had other duties as well, they picket lines to check for people coming into camp. They also set up ambushes, if the enemy route is known. They run dispatches if the com links are being jammed, and relay enemy positions to artillery units. They can also call in airstrikes if need be, to destroy a high value target. They also sometimes use their, bikes to resupply front line infantry, if the supply lines get stretched. Though they did have one major issue, once they where mounted on a bike, and if zipping around out of cover, they where easy to spot, and could easily be targeted by enemy troops.
 
Submission Name: Nadja Keto
Link to Submission: x
Summary of Modification: Submission Archival
Reason for Modification: This NPC is now a PC
Modification: Please archive this submission as it is now a PC.
 

Zeradias Mant

Democracy Dies in Darkness
Updated.

[member="Darth Carnifex"] - Provide the images you want to replace them with or the entire subs with the working image in spoilers and we'll get the subs updated. Additionally, for future reference, per the modification rules found in the OP, you may only make modifications to one submission at a time, per request.
 
[member="Mahet"] said she would move those all to the pre-codex and allow me to edit them.

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[member="Zeradias Mant"]
 

Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
Submission Name: Ancora
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/111154-ancora/#entry1585067
Summary of Modification: Image changes + spieces addition
Reason for Modification: one of the links had broken and i found a diffrent images that suit my vision of the world in important places. Also i wanna add a spicies
Modification:


Migrated spieces:
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Porg
Porg

broken image
(Arx Luss -Royal Building)

image change
(luss - Capital city)


image change
(Inqusition Space ring)
 
  • Submission Name: Fort Aurbis
  • Link to Submission: [Here]
  • Summary of Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.
  • Reason for Modification: Need to update the template to be in line with changes to the codex and overhaul the location's description.
  • Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.
 

Tegaea Alcori

Back to Square One
Submission Name: Aegis Base.
Link to Submission: Here.
Summary of Modification: Archival of submission.
Reason for Modification: Firemane pulled out of these bases, and now SJO is planning to abandon them, the fortresses are going to be abandoned and slighted so that they cannot be used by invaders.
Modification: Please archive submission.

Submission Name: Sanctuary Base
Link to Submission: Here.
Summary of Modification: Archival of submission.
Reason for Modification: Firemane pulled out of these bases, and now SJO is planning to abandon them, the fortresses are going to be abandoned and slighted so that they cannot be used by invaders.
Modification: Please archive submission.
 
  • Submission Name: Fort Aetherius
  • Link to Submission: [Here]
  • Summary of Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.
  • Reason for Modification: Need to update the template to be in line with changes to the codex and overhaul the location's description.
  • Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.
 
To boldly alchemize what no one alchemized before
Submission Name: Griet van Vliet
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/114995-griet-van-vliet
Summary of Modification: Addition of a Force-power and modification of historical information
Reason for Modification: Griet has actually been used for different ends in RP; she was used to imbue drill bits, among other items
Modification:

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Griet in her desert clothing, wearing bracers with shoulder plates

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To provide a wingman for Janick in large-scale engagements
  • ​Image Credit: https://zyunkamukhin...splay-406989556 - Diablo III Enchantress Eirena by artist Zyunka Mukhina on DeviantArt
  • Role: She is a fighter pilot on patrol as an ORC Judge, and also one to alchemize items
  • Links: N/A
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 31
  • Force Sensitivity: Knight
  • Species: Human
  • Appearance: Griet has blue eyes, dirty blond hair, standing 1.75m tall for 60 kg. Due to past shoulder injuries, she will sometimes wear special bracers with shoulder plates, when off-duty; that's especially true immediately after a flying mission, where high-G maneuvering will cause her to be cautious with her arms for a few hours at a time.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Griet van Vliet (also flying as Enchantress Actual)
  • Loyalties: Outer Rim Coalition
  • Wealth: Has about 200,000 credits to her name
  • Notable Possessions: One flight suit, several sets of clothing, a teal lightsaber, one collar with five crystals on them. The collar is a family heirloom that does not otherwise possess any special Force-properties.
  • Skills:
    ​Non-Force skills:
    ​Attack craft piloting (Veteran)
  • Starship repair (Trained)
  • Sewing (Trained)
  • Soresu (Padawan-level)

[*]Force-powers:
  • Telekinesis (Knight-level)
  • Force-wave (Padawan-level)
  • Mind trick (Knight-level)
  • Force-speed (Padawan-level)
  • Force-stasis (Knight-level)
  • Force-sense (Knight-level)
  • Precognition (Padawan-level)
  • Instinctive Astrogation (Padawan-level)
  • Force-shield (Padawan-level)
  • Imbue Item (Knight-level)


[*]Personality: Griet is, simply put, a flirt and will often attempt to use her charms and the Force to seduce unsuspecting people. She is conscious that it may not always work, but she will often prefer to seduce people with some intellectual substance, often perceiving the more intellectually-challenged as to be best left to their own devices in a romantic relationship, especially since she regards her intellect as crucial to her on a personal level. She never seemed to care that much about Force-alignment, but she will, within reason, fight given enemies or protect the innocent. Even so she is adamant about setting inertial compensators at full power to prevent health problems from spaceflight.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: The Force
  • Combat Function: She would be a liability within an area with Force-nullifiers, if she is made to enter a situation where ground combat is the order of the day, since she relies a lot on the Force in several manners in combat, such as Force-stasis, Force-wave, Force-shield, mostly in a support capacity, much more than her lightsaber, whom she will draw as a last resort. In starfighter combat she will often attempt to attack enemies from the flank or from the rear, often not firing missiles until she is within visual range of the target except when fighting capital ships.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Griet was born to, and raised by, a family of couriers and soon found herself attracted to the spacer lifestyle, which afforded her the freedom to travel around the galaxy, but also such life was not without its ups and downs. As a child, while she was being tested for infectious diseases, she was found to be a Force-sensitive, and taken under the service of the Galactic Republic as a Jedi. Naturally she was more drawn into the piloting side of things, of Jedi business, it was natural for her to be at the forefront of the atrocities committed by the One Sith as a padawan tasked to fight off the One Sith aircraft, getting progressively higher responsibilities as time went on, due to the intense demands of warfare. Even then she did not neglect her non-flying studies as a Jedi, in both the Force and secular topics, where she was able to become a more rounded Jedi, made possible by her intellectual prowess. In the process, she chose to focus on mining engineering. She ended up becoming more adept at the support aspects of Force-usage over time. By the time the Galactic Republic collapsed, she was in charge of three fighter squadrons.

After the collapse of the Republic, she went into exile into the Kathol Rift, while she took a break from the life of a Jedi and developed a more hedonistic outlook on life after settling on Adarlon, where she proved popular among the spacers that came there due to her charisma. She then took on various assignments of piloting for hire with a variety of clients, enamored with the life of a carefree fighter pilot as well as the ability to flirt whenever she felt like it. Also she gained some insight into the more unsavory aspects of such a hedonistic lifestyle as she was often targeted by the more unsavory elements of Wild Space society, some of which wanted nothing better than to be in the sheets with her.

She quickly found herself in the thick of starfighter combat once again, among the Outer Rim Coalition. During a combat mission on Ancora, she was forced to eject from her craft after the Qektoth shot at her craft, leaving her with shoulder pain in the aftermath of the ejection; as a measure to help relieve the shoulder pains, she wears special bracers with shoulderguards, enabling her to limit the amount of pains while wearing those bracers, especially after a starfighter combat mission. In any starfighter mission since, she always makes sure that the inertial compensator is at full power before a flight since she feels g-forces can hurt her if she is exposed to too much of it, and she'd rather not live through that sort of problems again. After she became the executive officer of Janick onboard the Verdict's fighter group, she also became a pillar among the Utai Magic Circle.
 
Submission Name: The Hand of Sieger Ren - Caehl Ren.

Link to Submission: Click Here

Summary of Modification: Please Delete/Archive.

Reason for Modification:
Retconning this Submission and all would-be changes to [member=Brennan Cabrol] due to realized conflicts to related arcs.

Code-Name and Identity will remain part of Character Account as was prior to Submission.

Modification: Archival.
 
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