Submission Modifications

[Ugoto Chivaro]

• Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Collection Center
• Link to Submission: [Here]
• Summary of Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.
• Reason for Modification: Need to update the template to be in line with changes to the codex and overhaul the location's description.
• Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.

 

[Quietus]

• Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Collection Center
• Link to Submission: [Here]
• Summary of Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.
• Reason for Modification: Need to update the template to be in line with changes to the codex and overhaul the location's description.
• Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.

Done

 

[Ugoto Chivaro]

• Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Resort Casinos
• Link to Submission: [Here]
• Summary of Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.
• Reason for Modification: Need to update the template to be in line with changes to the codex and overhaul the location's description.
• Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Submission Name: The Blackblade Guard (Resubmission)
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: To update the unit's armory with modern weapons, armor, and vehicles
Reason for Modification: The current sub has old armor and weapon links, they need to be updated to current standards
Modification:

Replace the Equipment and Vehicles on the sub from this:

• Equipment:
  ​Blackblade Combat Armor MK-III
• ACS-205 Blackblade Modular Rifle
• ACS-206 Arrowhead Missile Launcher
• ACS-203 Hellstorm Blastercannon
• P-23 Slugthrower Pistol
• BTI Hex Fragmentation Grenade

[*]Vehicles:

• ​All Terrain Tactical Transport
• All Terrain Forward Scout
• H-MAT Artillery Tank
• FRT-01 Battle Tank
• TIE/s Fighter
• TIE/FO-SK Bomber
• TIE/FO-IN Interceptor
• S90 MAAT Imperial Gunship

To this:

• Equipment:
  Blackblade Combat Armor Mk-IV
• SAR-41 Multi-Purpose Assault Rifle
• SAB-03 Multi-Purpose Sidearm
• BTI Hex Fragmentation Grenade

[*]Vehicles:

• MAAC/iv Dropship
• Teth-class Vehicle Barge
• AT-PAT
• AT-A/RW

(Also, pls try to keep the same font as the rest of the sub so it doesn't stand out too awkwardly pls)

 

[Llkt'tudrin'wyshd]

Submission Name: Uul Dyi
Link To Submission: [Here]
Summary Of Submission: To update the submission to reflect a change in direct for Llkt'tudrin'wyshd and his companion.
Reason For Modification: Due to a change in direct for Llkt'tudrn'wyshd and the fact that Uul is meant to be his trusted companion, I thought it best to update her so as to match.
Modification:

• Please change Role so that it reads: Trusted Companion of Llkt'tudrin'wyshd.
• Please replace Personality with the following paragraph:
  Spoiler

  Brash and loud, Uul does not sway away from speaking her own mind, no matter what situation it is she is in, nor does she sway away from cursing loudly and proudly; often times too much for it to be real, and, indeed, in some situations she will curse simply to see how many reactions she can garner. She is someone who trusts slowly but is steadfast in her loyalty once it has been given, caring for those close to her, even if she does hide in behind insults and punches. Lacking in conventional social graces due to growing up without them, Uul does not pay manners any mind, only being able to be reigned in by those she cares for. She also possesses a unique dislike for many conventional Force Users, Jedi and Sith for example, believing that they are a blight on the galaxy for it was in a fight between the Galactic Alliance and One Sith that she lost her arm and leg.
• Please change Intent so that it reads: To serve as a companion and friend to Llkt'tudrin'wyshd.

 

[James Justice]

Submission Name: Imahalyan
Link to Submission: Imahalyan
Summary of Modification: Change the coordinates
Reason for Modification: So this can get on the damn map and star will leave me the hell alone about it already
Modification: change the coordinates to 19, 4

 

[Valae Heavenshield]

Submission Name: The Silver Circle [NPCS]
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/111541-the-silver-circle-npcs/
Summary of Modification: Added additional information to "links" section, added a bit more to the NPC blurbs.
Reason for Modification: To give the healers additional armor/equipment and additional details to their blurbs (until individual subs can be made at a later time).
Modification:

Under "Links", please replace with:

Spoiler

Ship: Phenex Class Medical Ship x 1.
NPC Armor: Silver Robes, Sigil of Hope, and Light-shield
NPC Equipment: Heavy Blaster Pistol x 1, Sasori Light Gun x 1, Medical Backpack, Medpacs, Lightsaber

Please replace the information under "members" with the following:

Spoiler

Valae Kitra (PC)

Celeste Rigel (NPC – Human – 30 years old): An empath with highly developed sense abilities. She has been with the Silver Jedi since she was a small child. Naturally kind and caring, she finds it easy to connect with others. Celeste is most fond of children, and is most helpful when young ones come into their care. She is tall, slender, with dark hair and eyes.

Lila Arrel (NPC – Mirialan – Late 20’s): Calm and quiet, the Mirialan healer is thoughtful and introspective. She is a bit enigmatic, but generally quite friendly once the ice has broken. She has gained the reputation as the “serious one.” Lila is swift, and moves with a sense of grace. In most situations, she wears a hood, but will reveal her face to those she trusts. She has green-hued skin, and delicate facial tattoos. While she may appear meek at first -- make no mistake, she is quite brave.

Vash Prower (NPC – Human – Mid 30’s): Unlike some of the others, Vash has seen battle many times, and is fairly comfortable with the idea. While he is able to handle a saber, he excels at force protection abilities, and is a great support to his allies. If the members of the Circle or their patients are in danger, Vash is generally the first to act. He is tall and built quite strong; and does not look the part of a typical healer.

Quin Su (NPC – Cerean – Late 50’s): Wise and sage-like, Quin is often sought for advice. Injured during a shuttle crash, he is known for having survived by using the hibernation trance. A gifted healer, he seeks to share his knowledge with others. Quin carries a wooden staff that has been imbued with the force; he uses this for self-defense and leans on it for assistance when walking. He has wispy, white hair and a long beard that he wears braided.

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

Submission Name: Windsor-class Medical Stations
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: To update location submission to reflect the First Order's withdrawal of support for the Order of the Sacred Lotus.
Reason for Modification: Due to recent diplomatic/political changes between the Order of the Sacred Lotus and the Galactic Alliance. The First Order will no longer support the Order of the Sacred Lotus, and as such is withdrawing its technology from the Order of the Sacred Lotus and returning them to First Order space.

Modification:

Location:

Monastery [SLMC Haven] to Quesaya [FIMS Kent]

Affiliation:

First Order (Please remove Order of the Sacred Lotus // SLMC Haven Only)

People: Please remove the following, from both defense force sections.

• 
  92% Lotus Guards [SLMC Haven-ONLY]
  
• 
  8% Automated Defenses [SLMC Haven-ONLY]
  
• 
  72% Lotus Guards [SLMC Haven-ONLY]
  
• 
  28% Automated Defenses [SLMC Haven-ONLY]
  

From the Hangar Capacity please remove:

Extra Ambulatory Space [SLMC Haven-ONLY]

Demographics/Accessibility: Please remove all mention of the Sacred Lotus/Sacred Lotus Medical Center Haven

Historical Information: Please add,

Due to the war between the First Order and Galactic Alliance, and the recent news regarding an alliance between the GA and the Order of the Sacred Lotus. Counselor Elisea Korrado, and all First Order staff/technology were withdrawn back to First Order space until hostilities between the two nations ceased. The SLMC Haven was then transferred back to First Imperial Medical Service and First Imperial Military Control. It's since been rebranded as the FIMS Kent and will now be located in orbit of Quesaya, in the New Balosar Sector.

 

[Amelia von Sorenn]

Submission Name: Akeldama
Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Image Replacement
Reason for Modification: Photobucket now charging $400 for third party linking
Modification: Due to the coding, please move the submission into the Pre-Codex so I can personally handle the code without it getting messed up.

 

[Natalie LaForte]

Submission Name: Carina LaForte
Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Fleshing her out more and updating the coding errors, updated chosen weaponry, updated history, updated name
Reason for Modification: Been a long time since I updated this thread and since she's an important character to Natalie, I felt I could do her some more justice
Modification: (Enclosed in spoiler)

Spoiler

Name: Carina LaForte
Loyalties: The Trade Federation, The Intergalactic Monetary Fund, Natalie LaForte, The Sorority for Liberty
Role: Sister to my character/Companion
Development Threads: Not applicable
Age: 24
Species: Human (Aldeeranian)

Appearance: Carina wears a skin tight lightly armoured suit and has wears gloves covering all but the nails of her hands, which are always painted pink. She has a blonde plat which is always swept to one side along with the other side of her head being shaved and having LED implants which are purple. She weighs around 54 kilograms and is approximately 5"8. Although she wears a full body suit, she always wears semi-blending boots which look like they are attached to the rest of the outfit (but are entirely separate)

Personality: Carina is the ying to Natalie's yang, she is very opposite in her personality. She is calm, cool and collected and almost never lashes out, she is enthusiastic about assisting people and always sees the good in most. With that being said, she will not hesitate to turn her back on good if the situation requires it, especially if her sister is in need of assistance.

Force Sensitivity: Non-Force user

Weapon of Choice:
Mark II pacifier assault rifle (Primary)
Z-Light gun (Secondary)

Skills: Proficient in small arms weaponry, hand to hand combat and slicing/hacking technology

Wealth: Moderate amount of wealth

Combat Function: Although Carina prefers to not partake in combat, she is a good shot. Although she would prefer to settle it in the background or deal with it quietly, she will not be afraid to retaliate with her weapons if she is attacked and is very driven in protecting what she believes in. She does not give up easily. Especially in situations where Natalie or another family member is at risk, she would risk dying to protect them.

Notable Possessions: Not applicable

History: Carina was a bright individual growing up, in comparison to her sister. She excelled in computer sciences and one day hoped to be successful like her father. When her sister and her were disowned, she had no choice but to stay with her, growing an unbreakable bond with her which is what keeps the two together. Her previous history in computers made it easy for her to transition into making a living out of doing small-time jobs and assisting her sister with her criminal activities. She would prefer not to do this, however, since the two have no other way of living, she has very much been forced into this role. Being with her sister often means being involved in combat, although she does not excel in the heat of battle she will not shy away from it if her sister is in danger.

Originally, Carina was concerned about Natalie's involvement with several groups, including The Sith Ascendancy and a certain Miss Blonde, but she quietly accepted this and just tried to keep her out of trouble. When Blonde turned on Natalie, Carina provided her with transport and provided a stern telling off.

Currently, Carina holds a position on the directorate boards of both The Intergalactic Monetary Fund and the Trade Federation thanks to Natalie being the Chief Executive of both companies, though does not exercise any power, particularly because she dislikes corporate entities as a whole.


Intent: Provide a companion and story driver for my main character.

​Image Credit:

Image courtesy of; koyorin.deviantart.com/art/Sombra-645013546

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

[member="Helix Syndicate"] [member="Darth Carnifex"] [member="Llkt'tudrin'wyshd"] [member=James Justice] [member="Fiolette Yvarro"] [member="Amelia Sorenn-Syrush"] [member="Natalie LaForte"]

All done!

[member="Valae Kitra"]

Done, with the exception of the Sasori Light Gun as this is no longer an approved submission.

 

[Ugoto Chivaro]

• Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Maximum Security Prison
• Link to Submission: [Here]
• Summary of Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.
• Reason for Modification: Need to update the template to be in line with changes to the codex and overhaul the location's description.
• Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

[member="Helix Syndicate"]

Done

 

[Ugoto Chivaro]

• Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Debtor Mines
• Link to Submission: [Here]
• Summary of Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.
• Reason for Modification: Need to update the template to be in line with changes to the codex and overhaul the location's description.
• Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.

 

[Elaine Thul]

Submission Name: House Thul Scouts
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Exchanging Light Armour for Scout armour
Reason for Modification: New Scout Armour and they are scouts
Modification:

Spoiler

Name: House Thul Scouts
Intent: To Compliment other forces
Affiliation: House Thul
Availability:Uncommon
Quality: C+ Trained
Type: Infantry
Strength: 36
Description: Scout Infantry were designed to form picket lines, to inform the command when an enemy was approaching. Also to give direction and coordinates, for artillery and air strikes. They are equipped in scout armour, so not to impede their movement. The Armour was always had correct colour for the terrain, as otherwise they would not be very stealthy. In every Platoon, they had one fire team who were dedicated snipers. There job was to help set up ambushes, and shoot down the enemy main assets. They all were chosen for this job for skill to keep quiet and be observant, and being good shots.
The scouts were always set up into five man fire teams, and six man command squad.
The commander squad,
1: Lieutenant
2: 2nd Lieutenant (comms)
3: Sargent
4-6: soldiers
then they had five teams of five plus a five man sniper team.
All the men had
H.T.E Scout Armour
H.T.E Blaster Pistol
Scout Carbine (except for snipers)
House Thul Army Knife
A pair binoculars
A comms kit
five man team had
H.T.E Sniper Rifle rather than Scout Carbine

Links: (Please link all relevant threads here. This can include tech submissions, development threads or previous RP usage.)

 

[Lisa]

• Submission Name: Farium squadron
• Link to Submission: here
• Summary of Modification: renumber unut numbers
• Reason for Modification: unit usunder powered Swarm droids are tiny
• Modification:
• 6 Hyena bombers
• 3 Trifighters
• 3 TIE/D
• 2 Droid Bomber
• 30 swarn class droids
• 2 HMP droid gunship

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

[member="Helix Syndicate"] [member="Elaine Thul"] [member="Lisa"]


Done!

 

[Ugoto Chivaro]

• Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Fighting Pits
• Link to Submission: [Here]
• Summary of Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex. (We're almost done, I promise.)
• Reason for Modification: Need to update the template to be in line with changes to the codex and overhaul the location's description.
• Modification: Unlock and move into pre-codex.

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

Done

 

[Kixi Rajki]

Submission Name:


Braj'tec Qarr (Pronounced Brae-tec Kar)

Kes En'jusek (Pronounced Kes En-you-sek).

Zasalamel Xiz'te'menel


Link to Submission:


http://starwarsrp.net/topic/67467-brajtec-qarr-pronounced-brae-tec-kar/

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/67391-kes-enjusek-pronounced-kes-en-you-sek/

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/68695-zasalamel-xiztemenel/



Summary of Modification:

Images no longer on Photo Bucket site. Moved to imgur.com and links need to be updated on above submissions.

Reason for Modification:

Photo Bucket which I was using to host the majority of my images did a dirty on me. They now charge to use their services if one wants to link images uploaded on their website to somewhere else. Like in my case here on SWRP Chaos. Clearly not something I'm willing to do given there are many other free image hosting sites better than Photo Bucket out there. I've move my images to imgur.com and then relinked most of the images from my pages on SWRP with the new links pointing to imgur.com. However I cannot do it for things that were posted to the factory for example which are locked. Therefore any images on those pages now show a picture that shows like a speedo like picture and the comment saying 'Please update your account to enable 3rd party hosting."


Modification:

Need to modify all picture links on the above listed links to point to the same images that were there originally now on imgur.com