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Submission Name: Fort Galderra

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/104835-fort-galderra/
Summary of Modification: Name Change, add Platinum Mine, add Monastary
Reason for Modification: Growth of the town into a city, platinum discovered, monastery restored
Modification: First, change "Fort Galderra" to "Castle Galderra" - leave tags and mention of Fort Galderra in the post so it can be searched

Secondly, these items are meant to follow immediately after "Galderra Royal Treasury Headquarters"




High Neyhral

[url=https://pe-travers.deviantart.com/art/Old-Monastery-552986730]Old Monastery[/url] by PE-Travers

High Neyhral is the ancient Monastery that holds the Order of Neyhral, who practice the Force Philosophy "Galderra Magic." They do not teach anyone how to use this Force Power but the chosen one, and there can only be one each lifetime. There are very few of them left, and they stay solitary within their monastery. The town frequently supports them with food, and the government does not tax them.

[u]Defenses[/u]
1 Local Militia[/spoiler]

[color=#20b2aa][b]Mining Facility Gamma-12[/b][/color]
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[url=http://www.spaghettiandmeeples.com/tag/sci-fi/]scifi miniature[/url]

Mining Facility Gamma-12 is the newest mining facility as it was just recently it discovered a deposit of [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Platinum]Platinum[/url]. The King has made an order that it will not be used for construction or hoarded by the government, instead it will be used as currency and also sold as an export to boost Galderras Economy. Advisors suggest this could help pay their resource problem and have a stable, natural income of necessary resources. It uses galaxy-standard mining equipment. It is not located within Galderra Walls

[u]Defenses[/u]
15+ Soldiers[/spoiler]

[COLOR=#20b2aa]Previews of edits:[/COLOR] [URL="https://i.gyazo.com/f52fb112ac47e9a523b34e677e7978ad.png"]High Nehyral[/URL], [URL="https://i.gyazo.com/c9f6180f0df17df1e89d7e5b30e4bb73.png"]Mining Facility Gamma-12[/URL]
 
Submission Name: The Force Enclave of Svivren.

Link to Submission: Click here.
Summary of Modification: Name Change to: "The Silent Enclave".
Reason for Modification: A simple name request to better fit the running theme around the Je'daii Order and their similar location submissions.
Modification: Requesting a rename of the Submission Title itself to match the above Summary.
 
Submission Name: The Standing Stones of Bakura
Link to Submission: Link
Summary of Modification: Change name from "The Standing Stones of Bakura" to "The Silent Stones of Bakura", as well as any other areas in the submission where it is referred to as "Standing Stones" instead of "Silent Stones"
Reason for Modification: To bring the name of the Temple in line with other Je'daii structures, allowing them to be more cohesive
Modification: See Summary of Modification; Altering all mention of "Standing Stones" to "Silent Stones"
 
Submission Name: Vero
Link to Submission: link
Summary of Modification: Change of Coordinates from M-52 to N-51
Reason for Modification: The planet was subbed with the intention of being used for a Galactic Alliance dominion, but the coordinates were accidently selected as the location of an ORC dominion prior to the map update.
Modification: Change of Coordinates for the planet from M-52 to N-51
 
Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Enforcers
Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Updating image and description.
Reason for Modification: To reflect changes in the Helix Syndicate.
Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.
 
Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Shock Troopers
Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Updating image and description.
Reason for Modification: To reflect changes in the Helix Syndicate.
Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.
 
Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Rangers
Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Delete/Archive.
Reason for Modification: They will be replaced by something better.
Modification: Deleting the thread entirely would be preferable, but if that isn't an option, please have it archived.
 
Submission Name: Thyrsian Sun Guards
Link to Submission: [ Linked Here. ]
Summary of Modification: Updating Equipment to reflect newly approved Factory submission.
Reason for Modification: Updating Equipment.
Modification: Please replace the link and text from the Military Mobility Shield with the following, VDS-01 “Aegis” - Pattern Military Mobility Shield, and thanks!


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Submission Name: Deglarch
Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Template needs to be updated and reorganized, change tags.
Reason for Modification: Trying to keep things up to date and uniform.
Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.
 
Submission Name: Rahgot
Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Template needs to be updated and reorganized, change tags.
Reason for Modification: Trying to keep things up to date and uniform.
Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.
 
Submission Name: Didact Cyclone Troopers
Link to Submission: X
Summary of Modification: Swap out images and update image credit.
Reason for Modification: To keep everything nice and consistent.
Modification:

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Submit the rank-and-file of Didact.
  • Image Credit: Altered Carbon Netflix series. Header #1 | #2
  • Role: Infantry.
  • Links: Didact Defense Solutions.
GENERAL INFORMATION
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Availability: Common.
  • Deployment: Mass.
  • Strengths & Weaknesses:
​[NUMBERS] - There is a certain strength in numbers and it isn't any different here. If you see one Didact Cyclone Trooper, be prepared to find a dozen more around the corner.

[CYBERNETICS] - Less extensive and enhancing than the ones carried by the Didact Heavies, the Cyclone Troopers are still outfitted with mild augments to give them a slight edge against unaugmented opponents.

[CYBERNETICS] - Even though the cybernetics aren't as invasive and extensive, they are still a point of weakness here. Ion and similar weaponry have a chance of disabling the benefits, leaving the troopers without their keen advantage. Seeing as they were trained to fight with it, suddenly finding themselves without this edge in the heat of battle would be kind detrimental to their efforts.

[NUMBERS] - The Didact Cyclone Corps are made up out of mercenaries, outlaws, those individuals hungry for coin and glory. They aren't as well-trained and professional as Tash's Words or the Didact Heavies.
  • Description: The Didact Cyclone Corps are the rank-and-file of Didact Defense Solutions. The more the organization grew, the more contracts it accepted, the more bodies it needed to cover all the jobs they were executing throughout the Galaxy. The Cyclone Troopers were the answer to that: drawn from all around the Corporate Sector and beyond their purpose was to buff the numbers of Didact in a quick and efficient way.
​If Didact is operating somewhere, it is very likely that the Cyclone Corps is involved in one capacity or the other. Instead of the usual specialized strike force, the Cyclone Troopers are focused around their numbers. Each one of them has had past experience and history with combat, ensuring that they only needed a quick crash-course served by Didact.

These are the bodies that Didact Defense Solutions offers when the job doesn't need a fine hand or when the operation isn't as crucial that it needs the fist of the Heavies.

The Cyclone Corps are proficient in manning numerous vehicles and ships, have been trained in battlefield medication and were trained to be largely self-sufficient in the field. This ensures that they are not reliant on a single commander, to prevent a collapse of structure once the battlefield shifts.
 
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