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Technology Submission Modifications

Krayzen Dratos said:
[member="Gir Quee"] stated that I needed to do a 20 dev post dev thread right here to cover have the speed, HIMS, and have it be at mass production.
I completed usage of a 20 post dev thread, and this links to the 20th post in the dev thread.
[member="Braith Achlys"]

This isn't me being argumentative, or trying to start something. Just basing it on what I was told.
Had I saw mass production in your submission when I approved it, I would have told you the same thing.
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
Submission Name: Sasori Glove
Link to Submission: Sasori Glove
Reason for Modification: More funding, additional work
Modification: Production Increase, Duraplast added, Increased weight

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Image Source: [x] Channeling Glove Marvel Avengers Alliance
Intent: To make a base piece for future projects and provide an alternative to a crushgaunt
Development Thread:

Manufacturer: Sasori
Model: Channeling Glove
Affiliation: Private Market
Modularity: Can be used for lightshields, vambraces, forearm shields ect
Production: Mass Production

Material:
  • Phrik
  • Armorweave
  • Duraplast
  • Reactive Fabric
  • Crystal Weave
  • Pontite Crystals
  • Solari Crystals
  • Force Crystals
Classification: Other
Weight: 5.5kg
Quality: 10
Special Features:

  • Micronized Phrik In hand
  • Force Connection
  • Lightside Only
  • Reactive Material
  • Duraplast
  • Force Hardened against Lightsabers
  • Enhance Attribute: Strength
  • Crushgaunt
  • Crystal Weave
Description: Designed as a base glove to armor and constructed off the design of a crushgaunt the Sasori glove is made with micronized phrik in the palm and fingers. Throughout the glove are micronized mephite crystals to help force users connect with it but the common crystals used in saber construction are no where near as powerful as the ones used for calming and force enhancement.

The materials thin and made to be used with protective forearm shields, the phrik in the palms providing the the most saber protection with the ability to catch a saber blade. For the skilled users the glove is made to be attuned with force energies to become stronger but enhancing armor is a Jal Shey and Jensaari technique not often used by jedi.

With work and some exploring the gloves were made stronger, the reactive material to increase the strength and with force enhanced gripping as a thing they could be used to crush heavy and crab armor with ease. The focusing crystals helping to augment the strength and resistance of the gloves as well into the upper levels as the power of it is there.

More so the crystals were upgraded thanks to work with hr family and friends in harvesting the more rare and sought after pontite crystals. The calmness and focus granted by them made for a jedi to become stronger wearing them and the crystals in the palm able to act like a focusing lens for the force energy to channel and send it as a burst.

With additional missions and mining of phrik ore from worlds like Seltos and Gromas the jedi master was able to work with it to get the crystals a better place on the glove itself. Imbuing it with force energy so it could use the crystals weaved throughout to harden the glove with the force to catch lightsaber blades. The phrik working like beskar in crushgaunts providing additional protection.

Overtime as the jedi worked with the equipment they were able to infuse more power into it. Increasing the production of the gloves to give it more use among the jedi and ranger's who could use it. More crystal harvesting like solari crystals and upari that could be used to further enhance the gloves to augment punches that the jedi are able t deliver strikes with the enhanced strength.

Solari crystals to ensure it is usable by jedi while allowing the valor of the lightside to channel to the force user and keep them moving. With the crystals to draw at the the force and generate it the idea of jedi channeling gauntlets for the force to empower the one wearing it and allowing them an even stronger connection on top of the strength enhancement the reactive material and crystal weave give.

More work was done and put into the gloves to build them up, reinforced duraplast in the reactive material to really build it while the micronized phrik remained much the same and the armor weave was weaved with the sasori synthweaving crystal to allow stronger channeling. Production was increased as more locations of crystals were secured for Sasori to use and harvest to augment and construct their gloves.
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[member="Matsu Ike"]
Currently production values in the factory mean the following:
(The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (Only A Handful of Characters), Limited (Only A Select Group Of NPCs/PCs), Minor (Any Character, Only Select Groups Of NPCs), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.))
Per the templates available in the factory.

At mass production this means any PC & NPC across the board would be able to use this, whereas minor means any PC and select groups of NPCs. Putting this at mass would open the possibility for a widespread army of NPCs to wear these, which is quite frankly overpowered.

The other edits have been made, but mass production is denied. I apologize for the inconvenience, if you have decided against having the other changes made please let me know and I will have them reversed.
 
[member="Matsu Ike"]
I also noticed the weight on these gloves are a bit heavy (normal armor, full body, weighs around 10kg, so this weighs about half that). Is the weight per glove? (This is just purely for curiosities sake).

I can adjust the weight for you if you'd prefer, or leave it as-is.
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
[member="Lisette Kuhn"] the weight is heavier as duraplast it a heavier material and having it in there to provide its higher level of protection with the others should increase the weight. Even with a lightweight material like phrik there would and should have been a noticeable increase to justify the increase in quality,
 
Submission Name: SA - 001 Sniper Armour
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/76849-sa-001-sniper-armour/
Reason for Modification: Cosemtic changes (changed model number, added a full stop at the end of 'Affiliation' and reworded part of the production line so that it sounds better) and changed the intent so that it can be sold.
Modification:

Topic title changed to SA - 000 Sniper Armour

Affiliation: Annesley Corps and its customers.
Intent: To make available a lightweight armour suitable for snipers.
Model: SA - 000
Production: Mass-produced. (Private Market).
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
Submission Name: Shatory Glaive
Link to Submission: Shatory Reishūkaku
Reason for Modification: More dev
Modification: Increased Production
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Image Source: Sailor Moon

Intent: To make a special counter weapon from Shatory for bodyguards
Development Thread:

Manufacturer: Shatory Countermeasures
Model: Dampening Weapon
Affiliation: Private Market
Modularity: Can be empowered with the force
Production: Minor Production

Material:
Classification: Glaive
Size: Two-handed
Length: 2.5m
Weight: 3.5kg
Special Features:

  • Lightsaber Resistant
  • Telescopic Hilt
  • Force Infused Dampen Force
    Does not work if untouched by a force sensitive
  • Does not work on worlds without connection to the force
  • Connection to the force within the rules of a dampened user are at the molecular level.
  • Requires Wielders full force focus to maintain

Description: Designed through Shatory with some ideas from Sasori, the weapon is a force weapon. Able to be infused with energies and function at deflecting lightsaber blades. The other main part of it is the infusion of force energies to create when held and utilized a dampening field that can make using the force harder.

The crystal weave within the weapon is designed and made to facilitate the weapons force imbuement, allowing the user to wrap it in frce energy to make it strong with a force weapon or to create the dampening field. However it does not augment the users abilities to use the force or make them stronger. It is to use and strengthen the weapon itself.

The shaft of the staff and force ability of the weapon does not stop the force within the bubble. It makes the force harder to feel and requires knowledge of how to work and use the force at the molecular level. A technique that can be taught with a small handful of skills. Those are not used with the glaive and those wielding it should see with their masters.

The effects of the dampening field on the wielder is more effective requiring their full concentration to maintain and hold the bubble. They can still move around and walk, talk but they can't divide their attention to maintain the force if they wish to keep the bubble up. The ability to fight with the weapon itself falls entirely onto their training as well.

The force effects of the weapon are also subject to the same rules as others. On worlds where the force cannot be felt it will not function with its abilities, however the phrik weave will continue to make the weapon able to resist a lightsaber, If it is caught in a force null bubble created by a Ysalamir it will not function until out of it, a non force sensitive or force dead users wouldn't be able to use the force effects either.

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Dampen Force was a technique used to block the Force powers of others through use of the Force. When used, it was sometimes referred to as a cold, wet, blanket. However, it didn't block the entire use of the Force and was temporary. Hethrir was a known user of Dampen Force, using it to control the children he kidnapped for his Empire Reborn movement. The victim could not control objects bigger than molecules when affected by Dampen Force.
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Submission Name:Sigil of Hope
Link to Submission: Sigil of Hope
Reason for Modification: More work, more funding
Modification: More description, higher production, increased dev threads, thread post count added

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Image Credits: [x]

Intent: Investigation prize
To cash in our Brawl of the Dead investigations reward and have a Ghost Prison within the Apoligia Nebula secured over Teyan
Development Thread:
Phase One
Phase Two
Phase Three
  • [x] - Crystals Gathered: 10 replies
  • [x] - Sigil worked on with force energies: 10 replies
  • [x] - Sigil tested against darkside: 10 replies
  • [x] - Sigil worked on with information from Luka: 44 replies
  • [x] - Sigil Augmented within the Wellspring: 10 replies
  • [x] - Crystals gathered: 44 replies
  • [x] - Crystals Gathered: 17 replies
  • [x] - Breakdancing Bantha's: 104 replies
  • 249 Posts
TOTAL: 1211
Manufacturer: Jedi Master Matsu Ike/Sasori Research
Model: Sigil of Hope
Affiliation: Jedi
Modularity: Chain can be changed.
Production: Mass Production
Material:
  • Aurodium
  • Bronzium
  • Pontite crystal
  • Synthetic tsil crystal
  • Solari crystal
  • Lambent Crystal
Classification: Lightside Jewelry
Weight: 0.3 kilograms
Quality: Class It's A Necklace
Other Feature(s):
  • High Mental Shields
  • Generates force energy
  • Tied to the lightside
  • Allows Jedi to Sense Vong
  • Lambent crystals can communicate with each other
  • Bathes jedi in Harmony
  • Protects from Darkside powers
  • Enhances speed, body, valor and generates force aura
Description:
When the battle of Elrood concluded something happened, the Harvestors plans were enacted and so the message proclaiming "Je'daii" was left unattended until the final battle above Dagobah. Then slowly as the Army of Light tried to regain its footing to fight the sith only a few researchers paid it heed tracking to an unknown world in the deep core. There they found the ruins of an ancient Je'daii ship, inside it was a star map that showed several locations around the galaxy and none of them were Tython the homeworld of the ancient Je'daii.

That raised more questions then it answered as the order set off working their way towards investigation quietly the different worlds. They met some challenges, dealt with the Templars on Ryloth, faced down the dangerous Velok on Ossus, Negotiated with the powerfulSiobhan Kerrigan and suave Ayden Cater on Corellia, fought the Gorax on Iridonia, faced the perils of the Witches of Dathomir, braved the shadowlands of Kashyyyk with the Supreme Chancellor Aleidis Ijet and continued to learn the mysteries of the ancient ruins withJe'daii.

The investigations led them deep into the long forgotten histories and regions of the worlds. The perils were great and in the end little information was gleamed beyond pieces of data from ancient datacrons. The notable precursors to holocrons, with it the jedi copied the information leaving for the ones who desired it the prize and gathered. They made way from the deep core into a vertical hyperspace jump pushing them above the galactic plane enough that they found it. A station, still functioning and lost from the days of the ancient Republic. Going inside they found more evidence of the Black Guard and Harvestors.

The station was a sister of the Prism and had been used by someone with lots of hair, that wasn't what was important. The few notes that were around detailing his alchemical work for the dangerous men. Small bits of data on the amulets he had forged on Mustafar in the forge with some supplies left over. Jedi Master Matsu Ike stayed aboard the station as it was pulled towards the deep core and home. While she was there the droids began to work on restoring the prison to full functionality, she worked to replicate his notes work without the dark taint. The neuranium cores that seemed to be alchemically enhanced were unable to be recreated but the rest she found could be. Using pontite crystals the primary purpose of the amulet was recreated albeit in a lesser extent.

The amulet was fashioned different then the ones of Amulet of Tal'ra'kaar or the Amulets of Tal'ra, it became a Sigil of Hope as she saw it. Something the jedi could wear to protect against the dark influence but there was a cost. Since it wasn't created with the powerful alchemical processes of bending and beating nature, science into what you wanted. The mental immunity became a resilience to attacks and influence. (on the scale of the person, a padawan wearing it is stronger against another padawan but weaker to a knight, a knight is immune to a padawan but stronger against a knight while open to a master and a master is immune to a padawan, susceptible to a specialized knight and master) The crystal made feeling ones connection to the force stronger and instilled a sense of calmness within the wearer making their stamina in the force last a little more.

Not infinite amounts of energy but just enough so they didn't fully tire. Removing the necklace seemed to almost drain the wearer for a time making them feel weaker until they put it back on or rested. The amulets also seemed to react much as their counterparts with the amulet of Tal'ra'kaar making it glow as the jedi Master Synlidwirh showed. Its presence causing the core of that amulet to glow and slowly drain on a barely noticed level. Its mental resilience becoming a part of the other amulet and in the presence of several stacking upon it. This works adversely for mental boost like battle meditation or projected emotions but can allow some wearers to communicate with each other when the bond is strong enough between them.

Slowly over time Matsu worked on improving the crystals, getting more in her travels and journeys as well as harvesting or learnign how to work with force techniques and equipment. A holocron from Rave and her own workings with the Jal Shey brought to her attention the multitudes of skills she could do enhancing and enchanting the necklaces with stronger mental defenses and calming from the crystals.

From Rhen Var with Iella she was able to find and gather Solari crystals to make the sigils work more with the jedi and the lightside. She didn't want those who might abuse the powers of them to be able to use them if they found or got them. Slowly as Matsu worked she found the lambent crystals and with them the ability to sense the vong and communicate between the sigils making a direct mental link like a hive between all of them.

With the improved sigils the jedi master sought more to it, to really work with them and make something powerful the jedi could have for protection given the climate. So she continued her research and work into the sigils to further enhance and construct within them the basic abilities of a jedi. Enlightenment, serenity and harmony states of being that could bathe the wearer within the lightside of the force enhancing lightside force abilities.

It was not an easy feat but as she was getting stronger in the force the jedi master was also getting more and more the understanding that came with age and wisdom. She could do far more to the sigils and she could find ways to make them powerful as well as not become something that consumed others. The effects they seemed to have with the master amulet were still there granting the wearer the ability to drain and empower themselves.

She was only thankful that the amulet was held by another jedi master who protected it and the secrets it had to the necklaces. The other amulet her former padawan Joshua had found which granted the real danger of it. She could study with him and see the mental fortitude as well as enhancement of abilities. Slowly working to make it so force techniques were naturally enhanced such as inspiring those around them and enhancing speed.

Other things like perception and reflexes were easier, the protection with the force against the darkside could be done with sheer force of will as well as inner harmony and serenity. The best funsction she could find and use was how natural force armor to protect from energy and blades could work. The padawan techniques to protect yourself being enhanced to their strongest while the jedi master poured more and more force energy into them.

As the sigils began to see some more use they were worked on and employed. A way for jedi to resist some of the major effects of the darkside and protect themselves was well important and Matsu didn't want to see it go to waste while she was working on some of the things. Notably she didn't want to lose some of the momentum they had building the things up as more crystals were found and added improving the force effects within them.

The more Matsu worked on the crystal the more she found ways to improve it from the crystal weave allowing better saturation of lightside force energy to the collection within infused with as much of the lightside of the force as she could manage. Slowly it became more a symbol of the lightside allowing her to generate force energy like the eye of the sun and be something that would react dangerously to darksiders. The lightside of the force burning when near them to alert the wearer and it would not functin for them.

The mental shielding of the original crystal was also there, stronger then ever as it calmed and soothed the one wearing it allowing them to maintain a cleansed mind while under stress. More then that with her former pdawans amulet created by Velok able to be studied while he wore it she was able to augment it, the sigil grants a very high level of resistance to mental attacks, the biggest danger to getting through and past it is a phobis device as it is the penultimate mental weapon.

The continued infusion of the lightside of the force fed int the crystal allowing it to resonate into force techniques to grant harmony and serenity to the ones wearing it. Slowly infusing their will power into a force shield that could wrap around their body and nullify when they focused attacks within the force coming at them if they had been trained in the skill and how to created the force of will barrier. Their empathy to the pain of the galaxy is also increased as they can feel the hurt and possibly become overwhelmed by it.

Strengths:
  • High Mental Resistance
  • High Force Resistance
  • Increase in stamina and force connection when worn
  • Enhances Force Powers
  • Lambent Communication
Weakness:
  • Taking the necklace off is sapping
  • Interacts with the amulet of Amulet of Tal'ra'kaar the same way as the Amulets of Tal'ra
  • Burns Darksiders
  • Empathy can overwhelm and debilitate the wearer.
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Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
Submission Name: Ori'buyce Kal
Link to Submission: Ori'buyce Kal
Reason for Modification: Company bought
Modification: Change to Open Market
Image Credits: [x]
Intent: A combat knife for the elites in the Mandalorians
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Chai
La Armory
Model: KAL-359
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: No
Production: Minor
Material:
  • Beskar
  • Durasteel
Classification: Combat Knife
Size: One-handed
Length: 33cm
Weight: 0.8kg
Other Features: Compress CO2 ejection system

Description:A specialty knife designed to defend and kills when needed. The handle secrets away a small CO2 cartridge that can be ejected with enough pressure on the hilt of the blade. When squeezed a bubble of gas at 850 psi is released creating a super cold gravball sized sphere that freezes tissue and organs around the knife. Creating inflation and at times explosion depending. When used underwater the stabbed creature or person can float to the surface before blood is released from the body's internal heat thawing the frozen blood and tissue.
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Submission Name: Bev Kal
Link to Submission: Bev Kal
Reason for Modification: Company Bought
Modification: CHanged to Open Market

Intent: To create a new series of smaller armed weapons for the mandalorians
Development Thread: N?A
Manufacturer: Chai
La Armory
Model: Quarter staff
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: None
Production: Minor
Material:
  • Beskar Alloy
  • Durasteel
Classification: Staff
Size: One handed (compacted) Two handed (extended)
Length: .5(minimum), 1, 1.5, 3(maximum) meters depending on level of extension
Weight: 12kg
Other Features: Telescopic, minimum length of .5 meters, maximum length of 3 meters, tri-headed tips

Description: Created for hunting on Dxun and by the Blade sisters. A quarterstaff using Echani style molecular compression telescoping to create a multipurpose weapon. Fashioned after the traditional mandalorian spear and affixed with a tri headed spearhead. The shortest form, extending the weapon to a total of 1.5 meters, was not explicitly meant for combat. In this form, the weapon was meant to be used as a stun weapon., The next form extended the weapon to three meters in length. This form was commonly called the 'quarterstaff' form as that was precisely what it was. At three meters long it was the average length of an Echani Quarterstaff and could be used as such. The spear heads able to pierce light armors normally.

The longest form of the weapon extended the weapon to a length of three meters and acted as a spear. Unlike the other forms which were achieved by the molecular compression/decompression extending the shaft of the weapon outward from both ends of the handle this form extended in only one direction. In this form the weapon was best utilized as a thrusting or wide sweeping weapon. In practice it was like a pike or a spear. Commonly used to keep opponents at bay it was considered a 'short ranged' weapon, instead of a melee weapon. Due to the nature of molecular compression technology the weapon could be utilized to catch an opponent off guard. The strength of the weapons composition and strength it could be used by the user to pole-vault themselves into a higher position or over an obstacle.
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Submission Name: Tal'galar Kal
Link to Submission: Tal'galar Kal
Reason for Modification: Company Bought
Modification: Changed to Open market
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Image Credits: [x]
Intent: A combat knife for the elites in the Mandalorians
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Chai
La Armory
Model: JON-1138
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: No
Production: Minor
Material:
Classification: Combat Knife
Size: One-handed
Length: 33cm
Weight: 0.8kg
Other Features: Minor saber resistance, armor piercing

Description:A specialty knife designed to pierce, there is no sugar coating it. This is a blade made by the mandalorians bladesisters to stab into the plates of beskar armor on each other and deliver fast blows that can go into quality 8 armored plates up 21cm. Platemail and beskar or armor weave thanks to the incredibly fine edge of the weapon. The traditional beskar has been diluted to an alloy to save the resources but it affords at best one good lightsaber block but the alloy will melt from being mixed with a lot of durasteel. The low weight and rarity of use among the bladesisters has made it rare outside of Concordia and Gorgon. The primary performance of the knife is against armor and as its design and materials are put together to pierce personal armors up to some of the higher grades. The monomolecular edge being known to slice through most materials like a lightsaber but becoming very very fragile is handled improperly. Great care needs to be taken with it so the tip and edge don't shatter when being used. The blade isn't made for countering melee attacks, the fine edge of the blade will shatter and the weak alloy cal be broken within 3 blows.
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Submission Name: K'uur jurkadir
Link to Submission: K'uur jurkadir
Reason for Modification: Company Bought
Modification: Changed to Open Market
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Image Credits: [x]
Intent: To create a small alternative to the traditional mandalorian pack
Development Thread: N?A
Manufacturer: Chai
La Armory
Model: Weyland Shoulder mount
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: Yes can have duel shoulder mounts
Production: Minor (PC)
Material:
  • Beskar Alloy
  • Durasteel
  • Internal parts
Classification: Blaster pistol
Size: Shoulder mounted
Status: Military
Length: .5m
Weight: 8.1kg
Ammunition Type: Power cells
Ammunition Capacity: 10
Effective Range: 8m

Special Features:
Description: A small hunters utility, the bladesisters of Dxun when in raiding parties and without an extensive need for supply packs turned to a shoulder mounted disintegration alternative. The rarity of disruptors and the lesser use of the pack has made it fall into somewhat obscurity at least among the clans at large but it is still around and mostly exclusive to the higher ups or scouts.The metal casing of it being fair lightweight and feeling like a back full of ammo. The mounts reach up to about the ears with the weapons following the head when it turns.

The power cells needing to be replaced often while taking up some weight and a secondary mount on the opposite shoulder for balance. The blasters need to be removed from the mounts to replace the power cells attached to the back. It isn't recommended two are used but both can be linked into a standard mandalorian HUD to optimize the optical targeting system. A red "Y" appears from the visor's left side as a sight for the weapon and it requires several seconds to power up before firing. The cool down after each shot can't be accelerated without damaging the internal workings.
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Matsu Ike said:
Slowly it became more a symbol of the lightside allowing her to generate force energy like the eye of the sun and be something that would react dangerously to darksiders.
From the Sigil of Hope modification request: Could you explain what the quoted text means?



Matsu Ike said:
the sigil grant near immunity but not quite to the one wearing it allowing them to resist the strongest mental attacks from even a phobis device.
I need this reworded so that it isn't stated as an absolute occurrence, otherwise I can't pass this through. (Currently this reads that the sigil grants full immunity to all mental powers, as a phobis device is regarded as one of the most powerful mental force artifacts, if not the most.) I quoted the rule from the Character Creation rules as my reasoning below.



Darth Vaildra said:
this photo switched with the revan photo http://cdn.ndtv.com/...tlefront_EA.jpg
I need an image source for this.

All other modifications made.
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
[member="Braith Achlys"] when it was originally made the sigil was allowed to be a force generating battery for the ones wearing it and a powerful mental shield. Second or third depending on how you want to count it to the amulets of Tal'ra and Tal'ra'kaar, both which offered full mental immunity and were made in dark harvest by users of the phobis device. THe sigil wasn't meant to offer full immunity but the highest mental resistance many could get while still being able to be affected by it. Now with time and more dev work it is the same, that has never changed only instead of being neutral it is very much a lightside item jedi can wear and use. The references to the eye of the sun which is a powerful force artifact of the lightside and something Matsu holds gave her more inspiration for how to improve the force enhancing and generating properties.

And reworded it as requested

Submission Name: Amulet of Tal'ra
Link to Submission: Amulet of Tal'ra
Summary of Modification: Restored Submission
Reason for Modification: I honestly thought someone had restored it after the great wipe
Modification: Restored Sub
Intent: Event prize
Development Thread: =
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Manufacturer: Dark Lord Velok
Model: Amulet of Tal'ra
Affiliation: N/A
Modularity: N/A
Production: Minor
Material: Aurodium, bronzium, gems, neuranium

Classification: Jewelry
Weight: 0.3 kilograms
Quality: Class It's A Necklace
Other Feature(s): N/A

The Amulet of Tal'ra is a set of four, resting on aurodium chains. Forged by the Dark Lord Velok in the fires of his homeworld Mustafar, these amulets have a small Sith Alchemy-imbued neuranium core, in amidst their aurodium and bronzium decorations. These amulets, while not entirely spectacular, allow the bearer to completely resist mental-based Force attacks. Conversely, this means that they cannot receive the effects of positive reinforcement such as Battle Meditation, but the benefits outweigh the costs.

Submission Name: Amulet of Tal'ra'Kaar
Link to Submission: Amulet of Tal'ra'Kaar
Summary of Modification: Restored Submission
Reason for Modification: I honestly thought someone else had restored the submission
Modification: Restored Submission
Intent: Event prize
Development Thread: = ^_^=
Manufacturer: Dark Lord Velok
Model: Amulet of Tal'ra
Affiliation: N/A
Modularity: N/A
Production: Unique
Material: Aurodium, bronzium, gems, neuranium
Classification: Jewelry
Weight: 0.3 kilograms
Quality: Class It's A Necklace
Other Feature(s): N/A

One jewel to rule them all...
The Amulet of Tal'ra'kaar is identical to the Amulets of Tal'ra in every way physically. However, this particular amulet has one difference; on its own, the amulet is useless. When in visual range of a bearer of an Amulet of Tal'ra, however, Tal'ra'kaar shines brightly (literally). Not only does it allow the bearer to use the same mind-resistance ability as the Amulet of Tal'ra, but it also uses a Force Drain on the bearer of Tal'ra, taking their Force energy to power them. This Force Drain is not enough to kill, but it is steady, providing the wearer with a constant source of Force power. It is not enough to power, say, prolonged Force Lightning, but it can certainly be enough to turn the tide of battle.
 

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Submission Name: Darth Banshee Battle Armour
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Affiliation Change
Reason for Modification: Given to [member="Echo Kora"]
Modification: Affiliation: [member="Echo Kora"]

okay please let me know if got this right. :)
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
Submission Name: Sasori Gincho
Link to Submission: Sasori Gincho
Summary of Modification: More explaination, Increased Production, General clean up of spelling and grammar and clarification.
Reason for Modification: Increased dev
Modification: General Clean up, slight tweaking, increased production

Intent: To create a reactor for Sasori companies to utalize
Development Thread:

  • Bloodred Snow of the Netherworld - Isotope 5 (( Write a story about your character enduring personal sacrifice to save/help a stranger))
    Number of words: 5237
  • Gives up information from father to save an informant

[*]Candyman - Isotope 5 (( Write a story about your character enduring personal sacrifice to save/help a stranger))
  • Gives up catching the bad guys to save people from candigeddon

[*]Where did Lor Go - Isotope 5 (( Write a story about your character enduring personal sacrifice to save/help a stranger))
  • Brings Sasori and Saotome to Csilla at the cost of losing her status as a citizen and being kicked off the planet

Manufacturer: Sasori Research
Model: Isotope 5 Reactor
Affiliation: Sasori
Modularity: Different sizes
  • Power Cell: Small sized and built for use in blasters or lightsabers, the increased power running through can increase the damage output.
  • Power Generator: Portable and made to be used in the field or on smaller vehicles. Able to be set up as an emergency power supply that can be hooked up to converters to provide additional power.
  • Power Reactor: Ship and large vehicle sized for special projectors generally, some can be used for factories.
Production: Minor Production
Material:
  • Hybrid Plexisteel Casing
  • Internal Components
  • Isotope 5
Description:
After initial research was handed over to Draco by Sasori from their experiments in Illerium and Isotope five. Reviving the project to make a smaller more compacted reactor for Sasori to be able to use and experiment with for their products. The reactors being worked on to be in three major sizes. A lightsaber power cell, a power generator for droids, vehicles and starfighters and a reactor for ships that can be used to provide more power. The hard work they have been working on can be built up for the Sasori brand products.

The reactor is compacted and made to be strong with hybrid plexisteel as she worked with some of the things. Ayumi and Camellia had done a lot of work building up their honorable class starfighters to use the reactor the pair had developed. Those plans shared among the two and Ayumi working for Sasori let her get an idea of how to do it. More research and work with power supplies in their equipment was made to get it able to be set in vehicles, cases for transports and starfighters.

Sasori products using it for exploration can get a quick setup to their camps or as a back up power supply should reactors fail. The larger the things it needs to power the shorter the reactors duration but the smaller power cells designed to be used for lightsabers and for equipment packs. The smaller power cells are nice and can be varied with more being done to protect interests who might be able to use them to power special ships or things such as the Will of the Force or the Saratai.

As more work was poured into the reactors and technology Sasori was able to better understand it as well. Creating more streamlined processes for installing the isotope five reactors and power cells. Some even getting tested for products like making a lightsaber here or there. The future plans for different products were a big thing they could work with and authorize because they knew some other people would be liking the feeling and possibly be able to benefit from their work.
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Matsu Ike said:
The smaller power cells are nice and can be varied with more being done to protect interests who might be able to use them to power special ships or things such as the Will of the Force or the Saratai.
Is the Will of the Force and the Saratai a type of technology and/or submission?
 

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