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Technology Submission Modifications

Macharius Solaire

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Submission Name: DSA Infantry Armor MK-1
Link to Submission: Link
Summary of Modification: Replace the submission image with a working one. Update source link.
Reason for Modification: Old image host doesn't allow for 3rd party hosting.
Modification:

http://i.imgur.com/4HD7n30.jpg
 
Major Faction

Vora Kaar

S O V E R E I G N
Vora Kaar
Factory Judge
Character Bio
Submission Name: Helios, Eos
Link to Submission: Helios Sub, Eos Sub (listing both as they are a Set and were judged by the same Factory Judge
Summary of Modification: Remove from Archival
Reason for Modification: Removed from archival so that I may complete these.
Modification: Removal from Archival to be complete the submission.
 
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Jamie Pyne

Delicate
Jamie Pyne
Character Bio
[member="Kami Meran"]

I don't quite understand how a droid was approved with a starship laser cannon attached to it, but I will not increase the production of this to mass produced so that an army of droids can wield a starship laser cannon. This request is denied. You may request a second chance on this decision if you wish.
 
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Junko Ike

Baifa Monü Zhuan
Junko Ike
Character Bio
Submission Name: White Lotus
Link to Submission: White Lotus Blade
Summary of Modification: New Image
Reason for Modification: Image Broke
Modification: New Image
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Image Credits: Karness Muur's Lightsaber

Submission Name: Sasori Cracken
Link to Submission: Sasori Cracken
Summary of Modification: Changed item location
Reason for Modification: One items production was made for PC's only
Modification:
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Gear
  • Customizable Gear
DETAILED SPECIAL FEATURES
Gear: Designed by Sasori to hold pieces of equipment that can be used in the field for everyone. The specifics of it are common equipment that sasori has developed.

Customizable Gear: Smaller less produced pieces that can be stored along for special assignments. Wile they might not be standard there are straps designated for them.
 

Natalie LaForte

~The Ghost watches~
Natalie LaForte
Character Bio
Submission Name: Z2-MCD
Link to Submission: Z2-MCD
Summary of Modification: Making the weight something more appropriate
Reason for Modification: I had written that it weighs 80 tonnes when I meant 300 Kg
Modification: (Enclosed in spoiler)

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Zipper-2 Millitary Combatant Droid
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Standard war droid for IMF
  • Image Source: Deviant art
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Restricted Missions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: IMF
  • Model: N/A
  • Production: Mass-produced
  • Affiliation: TSA/IMF, otherwise Closed-Market
  • Modularity: Yes
    Internal reactor can be reduced in size for a passenger cargo of one, but this will come at the expense of either removing its shielding capacity or firearms.
  • Mounted weapons can be replaced but are not supported by the manufacturer
  • Various colour palette changes

[*]Material: Vanadium with Quadanium steel plating
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
  • Classification: Fourth Degree
  • Weight: 300 Kg
  • Height: 2.3m
  • Movement: Bipedal, repulsorlift
  • Armaments:
    ​2x mounted scatterguns (6 barrels, firing 12 pellets per round)

[*]Misc. Equipment:
  • ​Infra-red scanners
  • Forward facing shielding
  • Holo projector
  • Point defense laser capable of shooting small projectiles down
  • Self encased environment capsule* (When reactor size is reduced)

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Hive mind programming
  • Self destructive
  • Overdrive
DETAILED SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Hive mind programming - Only works when connected to a central computer unless produced. Variants which are not are generally more expensive.
  • Self destructive - In a pinch, the reactor will overload and create a beautiful firework show* that will damage nearby terrain and lifeforms.
  • Overdrive - Scatter guns can be overloaded with power, increasing their pellet size and kinetic energy at the expense of shielding and mobility systems to be ineffective.

Strengths:
  • Mobile - Can fire whilst using repulsorlift propulsion
  • Oppressive - The scatterguns provide constant fire with a high RPM (Rounds per minute)
  • Spaaaaceeee - Can actually be used in space due to its mobility, serving a duel purpose
  • Heavy - If for some reason the weapons are disabled, it can result to simply ramming any opponents.
Weaknesses :
  • Slow - Outside of using its thrusters, while firing, nearly all power is removed from the bipedal legs, slowing movement.
  • Ineffective at long ranges - Weapon pellets will be ineffective at anything longer than 10-15 meters.
  • Hive mind - destruction of its controller will render most models ineffective (Unless they were specifically designed to be used without such technology)
  • Noisy - These things are hulking metal beasts, they make a lot of noise.
  • Large - Really noticeable, stealth mission incompatible
DESCRIPTION
The Z2-MCD is a more mobile droid from the IMF. Boasting speed, defense and offense, the droid has several capabilities that others of its kind do not. Repulsorlift reactors coupled with bi-pedal legs give this model a good amount of mobility, enabling it to close the distance on its foes, or escape as needed. Between uses, the repulsorlift require a 10 second recharge with a maximum time of use being 5 minutes. Mounted on the front are scatterguns working on an overheat based system, enabling fire power to be constantly given out and then overloaded with power if needed. In saying that, the shielding systems and repulsorlift reactors become null as all energy is diverted to increase maximum damage output.

The droid is further supplemented by extensive defensive capabilities, including basic shielding, point defense lasers and in general, heavy armour plating with a weaker element used underneath.

Despite its many strengths, the door-to-door salesman won't inform you of the necessity of a central computer for standard models to work, although this gives security in that they can't be tricked or even controlled, shut down the central hub and suddenly these white and red robots will be powering down and rendered ineffective, and despite the near infinite firepower, anything longer than 10-15 meters will be getting scraped by the pellets.

If the weapons weren't shredding your body though, the voice will certainly breach the sound barrier. An ultra high pitch robotic voice was recorded to ensure foes would be constantly distracted when fighting.

Whether it be used as an enforcer, pseudo boarding weapon or even just as your household guard, the Z2-MCD provides a unique set of firearms capable of taking on larger foes.


Submission Name: Z3-MCD

Link to Submission: Z3-MCD
Summary of Modification: Making the weight something more appropriate
Reason for Modification: I had written that it weighs 95 tonnes when I meant 350 Kg
Modification: (Enclosed in spoiler)

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Upgrading an old submission
  • Image Source: Deviant art
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Restricted Missions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: IMF
  • Model: Z2-MCD
  • Production: Limited
  • Affiliation: IMF, Closed-Market
  • Modularity: Yes
    Internal reactor can be reduced in size for a passenger cargo of one, but this will come at the expense of either removing its shielding capacity or firearms.
  • Mounted weapons can be replaced but are not supported by the manufacturer
  • Various colour palette changes

[*]Material: Vanadium with Quadanium steel plating
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
  • Classification: Fourth Degree
  • Weight: 95 tonnes
  • Height: 2.4m
  • Movement: Bipedal, repulsorlift, jetpack thruster
  • Armaments:
    ​2x mounted MK-1 Fusion cannon
  • 2x mounted anti-personnel laser cannon

[*]Misc. Equipment:
  • ​Infra-red scanners
  • Forward facing shield barrier
  • Repulsorlift reactor
  • Nuclear jetpack booster
  • Holo projector
  • DMPCA
  • Magnetic legs
  • Self encased environment capsule* (When reactor size is reduced)

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Hive mind programming
Strengths:
  • Mobile - Can fire whilst using repulsorlift propulsion and thrusters
  • Oppressive - The fusion cannons provide constant fire with a high rate of fire
  • Synthesizer - The droid can regenerate ammunition for its fusion cannons, but only out of combat
  • Spaaaaceeee - Can actually be used in space due to its mobility, serving a duel purpose, though wouldn't fair well against dedicated craft
  • Heavy - If for some reason the weapons are disabled, it can result to simply ramming any opponents
  • Magnetic legs - The droid can make its legs magnetized to stay attatched to metallic objects if needed
  • Shielding - Able to block small projectiles with its personal energy shield or DMPCA
Weaknesses:
  • Slow - Outside of using its thrusters, while firing, nearly all power is removed from the bipedal legs, slowing movement.
  • Ineffective at long ranges - Weapon pellets will be ineffective at anything longer than 10-15 meters.
  • Hive mind - destruction of its controller will render most models ineffective (Unless they were specifically designed to be used without such technology)
  • Noisy - These things are hulking metal beasts, they make a lot of noise.
  • Large - Really noticeable, stealth mission incompatible
  • Annoying - The standard voice package is very high in pitch and annoying
  • Downgrade - Comparatively speaking, this model is statistically weaker at dealing damage than its predecessor, but has greater defensive capabilities
  • Spaaaaceeee - The repulsorlift system will not work in space, so it will rely heavily on the jetpack boosters, giving it a very low speed for the most part
DESCRIPTION
The Z3-MCD is a more mobile droid from the IMF and builds upon the predecessor, the Z2-MCD. Having, defense and offense, with the ability to boost its speed using either its repulsorlift or jetpack boosters, the droid has several capabilities that others of its kind do not. Repulsorlift reactors coupled with bi-pedal legs give this model a good amount of mobility, enabling it to close the distance on its foes, or escape as needed. Between uses, the repulsorlift require a 10 second recharge with a maximum time of use being 5 minutes. Mounted on the front are 2 MK-1 Fusion cannons, capable of dishing out a large amount of pellets.

The droid is further supplemented by extensive defensive capabilities, including basic shielding, a defense matrix and in general, heavy armour plating with a weaker element used underneath.

Despite its many strengths, the door-to-door salesman won't inform you of the necessity of a central computer for standard models to work, although this gives security in that they can't be tricked or even controlled, shut down the central hub and suddenly these white and red robots will be powering down and rendered ineffective, and despite the near infinite firepower, anything longer than 10-15 meters will be getting scraped by the pellets, however the anti-personnel laser cannons will still be able to fire at longer ranges.

If the weapons weren't shredding your body though, the voice will certainly breach the sound barrier. An ultra high pitch robotic voice was recorded to ensure foes would be constantly distracted when fighting.
 
Major Faction

Jessica Med-Beq

Bombshell Genius
Jessica Med-Beq
Character Bio
Submission name: Gatling rapid-fire turbolaser
Link to submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/92249-gatling-rapid-fire-turbolaser/
Summary of modification: Modification of range from half standard turbolaser range to standard turbolaser range
Reason for modification: It has actually been used at ranges greater than half standard turbolaser range in the majority of threads it has been used in
Modification:
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Three dual-mounted Gatlings

Image source: [X]

Intent: To provide a rapid-fire turbolaser
Development Thread: If necessary
Manufacturer: Ringovinda Systems
Model: Gatling rapid-fire turbolaser
Affiliation: Open market
Modularity: Can choose whether to have one, two or three tubes in a turret: each tube is worth 4 turbolasers
Production: Mass-Produced.
Material: Alusteel turret, turbolaser components, ion accu-accelerator
Classification: Rapid-fire turbolaser
Size: Ship-Mounted
Length: 12 meters
Weight: 50 tons (single-tube turret; add 30 tons per tube in same turret)
Ammunition Type: Power reactor
Ammunition Capacity: Turbolaser standard
Effective Range: Turbolaser standard
Rate of Fire: 4x Turbolaser standard

Strengths:

- Common components with many turbolaser batteries (in maintenance terms, just more of the same for turbolaser users)
- Compatible with common turbolaser targeting computers
- High firing rate

Weaknesses:

- High power drain
- Effectiveness markedly decreases if fired from farther than half standard turbolaser range

Special Features: None
Description: The Gatling rapid-fire turbolaser drew its inspiration from the KDD2055 short-range turbolaser, with modern-day turbolaser technology; with modern technology, one can now mount such rapid-fire implements in shipboard use, firing four times as fast as standard turbolaser. But such power comes at rather steep costs: it drains as much power as 4 standard turbolasers (it effectively fires four bolts with the same power as one standard turbolaser) and, while allowing faster rates, also comes with another shortcoming: because the plasma spends less time inside the barrel, the resulting plasma bolts are more unstable, causing the bolts to lose focus if fired from further than half a standard turbolaser range. Targeting solutions are similar to those use on standard turbolasers, making the transition from older turbolaser units to this one seamless for the gunners.

Source: KDD2055 short-range turbolaser

Important note: Each tube is worth 4 standard turbolasers
 

Rusty

Purveyor of Fine Weaponry
Rusty
Character Bio
Submission Name: Mandalorian Penetrator
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/92189-mandalorian-penetrator
Summary of Modification: Change affiliation to "Mandalorian"
Reason for Modification: The faction the weapon was originally designed for no longer exists. However, there are still plenty of Mandalorians, and it seems a waste to let it languish in obscurity.
Modification:

Original: Affiliation: Mandalorian Crusaders (Sales to Mandalorians outside of the Crusaders may be approved if a Crusader vouches for the buyer)
Modification: Affiliation: Mandalorian
 
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Ellie Mors

B E A C O N
Ellie Mors
Character Bio
Charzon Loulan said:
Summary of modification: Modification of range from half standard turbolaser range to standard turbolaser range
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Charzon Loulan said:
Reason for modification: It has actually been used at ranges greater than half standard turbolaser range in the majority of threads it has been used in
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Your modification request has been denied.

Reason:
  1. Your weapon is a rapid-firing turbolaser, it was approved with the range you submitted it for because that was balanced - changing the range by doubling it is not.
  2. Abusing your submission in role-play is not a reason for a modification request.
 
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