Technology Submission Modifications

[Udrusa Chagteath]

Submission Name:​ Azuria - The Saber of Udrusa
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/120998-azuria-the-saber-of-udrusa/#entry1690454
Summary of Modification:​ Change of the lightsaber's external construction look
Reason for Modification:​ For reasons of both artistic change and practicality in combat.
Modification: Replacement of the original image source with this.

Thank you!

 

[Ellie Mors]

Reason for Modification: Need to update the naming convention and tags to be in-line with other Helix Syndicate products.

Your submission will need to be reviewed and judged like a completely brand new submission if this is moved and unlocked, it will not be immediately re-approved.

Do you still wish to have this moved to the pre-factory?

 

[Ugoto Chivaro]

[member="Nadja Keto"]

There would be no reason to deny it, so yes, please.

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

Submission Name: Longbow Plasma Railgun
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/110031-mk78m2-longbow-plasma-railgun/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate.

Submission Name: Shortbow Plasma Railgun
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/116647-mk82m4-shortbow-plasma-railgun/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate.


Submission Name: CFE-G2MK7
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/110362-cfe-g2mk7/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate.

 

[Mereel Vaun]

Submission Name: Second Son's Armor
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Mereel's boots can magnetize to metallic surfaces in order to keep him from floating off into space when doing extravehicular activities in his armor.
Reason for Modification: I realized that a life support unit in space isn't too great if you can't walk on magnetic surfaces while in space.
Modification: Magno-grip boots added under "Special Features"

 

[Jak Sandrow]

Submission Name: JSA-VAR
Summary of Modification: Changing the production from Unique to Semi-Unique, and adding Ever Dawnracer as a PC who is able to use this weapon.
Reason for Modification: [member="Ever Dawnracer"] gave me fudge brownies.
Modification:

Changing

• Affiliation: Jak Sandrow
• Production: Unique

to

• Affiliation: Jak Sandrow, Ever Dawnracer
• Production: Semi-Unique

 

[Ellie Mors]

All requests approved, they are currently being updated.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Att: There is now a max of 3 modifications per request, and 3 active requests per writer at any given time.

As your requests are fulfilled you may request more modifications. (i.e; if you make 3 modification request posts, and one of them gets updated, you may request 1 more)

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

[SIZE=11pt]Submission Name: Semira Shield System[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Link to Submission: [/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]Here[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright ([/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]x[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]) as an affiliate.[/SIZE]

 

[Ellie Mors]

Updated

 

[Maelion Liates]

Submission Name: The Archangel Processing Machine
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17218-the-archangel-processing-machine/
Summary of Modification: Change production from Unique to Minor.
Reason for Modification: Archangel has grown to be a tier 4 company, and has even developed a Mk 2 of the device. The intention was always to make it minor production when the company was expanded and its locations grew. Now Archangel is able to build large factory ships and has multiple locations it has the funds to create more of these devices.
Modification:
Production: Minor.

 

[Kier Grey]

Submission Name: FO-XD Prototype Death Trooper Armour
Link to Submission: FO-XD Prototype Death Trooper Armour
Summary of Modification: Changing Image Source/Apperance of Armour
Reason for Modification: More distinct First Order design, separating it from the Galactic Empire design.
Modification: See spoiler

Spoiler

^Image Code

Source
^Source URL Hyperlink to replace the existing ones.

"A sketch of the FO-XD Prototype Death Trooper Armour"

^Replacement Flavour Text

 

[Ellie Mors]

Updated

 

[Onrai]

Submission Name: All-Terrain Personal Walker
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11242-all-terrain-personal-walker/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change, affiliation change
Reason for Modification: Picture doesn't work, new company, Fringe is dead
Modification:
Replace picture with https://sociorocketnewsen.files.wordpress.com/2014/02/lw-6.jpg?w=580&h=788
Replace manufacturer with Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing
Replace affiliation with Open-Market

Submission Name: GRD-98 Grapple Droid

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17688-grd-98-grapple-droid/​

Summary of Modification: affiliation change
Reason for Modification: Tech not specialized enough for the Sith
Modification:​

Replace affiliation with Open-Market​

Submission Name: SKD-84 Combat Droid​

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/19858-skd-84-combat-droid/​

Summary of Modification: affiliation change
Reason for Modification: Tech not specialized enough for the Sith
Modification:​

Replace affiliation with Open-Market​

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Vanessa Vantai"]

Replace picture with http://starwarsrp.ne...ersonal-walker/

This links to the submission rather than an image link.

 

[Onrai]

[member="Therran Graush"]

Just fixed it and added the correct picture link.

 

[Zef Halo]

Updated.

 

[Kier Grey]

Submission Name: Project: AFTERLIFE
Link to Submission: Project: AFTERLIFE
Summary of Modification: None Intended (Clarification)
Reason for Modification: Clarifying the language around the strength increase when comparing it to a Baseline Human, reading over the grammar of the sentence of the 'Endurance & Strength' Strength while ignoring the description's increased depth or comments made with the judge during review leaves the exact increase in my opinion ambiguous with possibility for misunderstanding or confusion on the part of the reader regarding the subject's strength increases up from their pre-augmentation strength performance.
Modification:

Spoiler: Modification

Endurance & Strength: Each subject who receives the procedure exhibits massive increases in muscle mass and density providing strength comparable to the most powerful baseline Human athletes. Their muscular strength is further enhanced with a Rybcoarse-derived polymer bonded to their muscles which triples their already impressive output; giving physical power that considerably exceeds what their appearance suggests. The subjects' skeletons are reinforced with a Stygian-Polymer to handle the increased stress placed on them by their Rybcoarse polymer-bonded muscles, these enhancements leave each subject an average 20-30 kilograms heavier than their pre-procedure weight.

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

Submission Name: Destron X Ion Engine
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/116819-destron-x-ion-engine/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate.

Submission Name: Howlback XII Ion Engine
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/115791-howlback-xii-ion-engine/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own technology.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate.

 

[Maelion Liates]

Submission Name: ARD X-1 Human Replica Droids

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/38960-ard-x-1-human-replica-droids/
Summary of Modification: Increase production to minor.
Reason for Modification: The processing machine which produces them has been modded to minor production. The company is also now Tier 4, which means it has the resources to produce more of these droids.
Modification:

Production: Minor.