Submission Modifications

[Siobhan Kerrigan]

Submission Name: Eyes of the Forest
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/123984-eyes-of-the-forest/
Summary of Modification: Add a piece of equipment.
Reason for Modification: The unit in question is a group of scouts, meant to be stealthy recon troops. At the time when I made the sub, I did not have any custom armour to equip them with. Thus they have generic light armour listed. I have since purchased an appropriate model which reflects their capabilities/mission in the marketplace, namely the Specter Scout Armor. Request was made here, and approved here.
Modification:

Replace the first line in Equipment: 'Light combat armour with sealed bodysuit, comlink (with encryption device) and rebreather, comparable in quality to Imperial scout trooper armour. Coloured to match terrain. Wear earpiece communicators with built-in translators.'

With this: Spectre Scout Armour. Comlink has an encryption device. Wear earpiece communicators with built-in translators.

 

[Darth Athora]

Submission Name: Commander Uvkithis
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/117272-commander-uvkithis/
Summary of Modification: Switching his allegiance
Reason for Modification: When Zahori left the Confederacy, her closest friends and allies left with her to the Sith Empire.
Modification:

Intent: A high-ranking officer of the Confederate Armed Forces

to

Intent: A high-ranking officer of the Sith-Imperial Legion

Loyalties: Confederacy of Independent Systems

to

Loyalties: The Sith Empire

Wealth: Moderate. As a high ranking officer of the CIS, he makes a pretty decent paycheck.

to

Wealth: Moderate. As a high ranking officer of the Imperial Legion, he makes a pretty decent paycheck.

Name: Commander Uvkithis

to

Name: Major Uvkithis

Also remove the banner at the top.

 

[Samka Derith]

All submissions have been updated as requested.

[member="Marina DeVoe"], I'm afriad your submission was made through the Factory, this is the Codex's modification section

 

[Marina DeVoe]

Ah, Ok, thanks [member="Samka Derith"]

I'll get the hang of this sooner or later.

 

[Priscilla Utorna]

Submission Name: Carina LaForte
Link to Submission: Carina LaForte
Summary of Modification: Updating appearance/playby/formatting/history
Reason for Modification: To be consistent with new roleplays
Modification: Enclosed in spoiler

Spoiler

Name: Carina LaForte
Loyalties: The Trade Federation, The Intergalactic Monetary Fund, Natalie LaForte, The Sorority for Liberty
Role: Sister to my character/Companion
Development Threads: Not applicable
Age: 30
Species: Human (Aldeeranian)

Appearance: Carina's style varies from day to day. Sometimes, it could be something as simple as a tank top with some jeans, at other times it could be a lightly armored and skin tight body suit. Her style shifts depending on what is needed for whatever she is doing. Her hair is a natural blonde, though has some green tints at the front. Most of the time, she can be seen wearing some sort of makeup and usually goes for the goth-emo eyeliner look, contrasting against her pale skin.

Personality: Carina is the ying to Natalie's yang, she is very opposite in her personality. She is calm, cool and collected and almost never lashes out, she is enthusiastic about assisting people and always sees the good in most. With that being said, she will not hesitate to turn her back on good if the situation requires it, especially if her sister is in need of assistance.

Force Sensitivity: Non-Force user

Weapon of Choice:
Mark II pacifier assault rifle (Primary)
Z-Light gun (Secondary)

Skills: Proficient in small arms weaponry, hand to hand combat and slicing/hacking technology, electronics

Wealth: Large amount of wealth

Combat Function: Although Carina prefers to not partake in combat, she is a good shot. Although she would prefer to settle it in the background or deal with it quietly, she will not be afraid to retaliate with her weapons if she is attacked and is very driven in protecting what she believes in. She does not give up easily. Especially in situations where Natalie or another family member is at risk, she would risk dying to protect them.

Notable Possessions: Not applicable

History: Carina was a bright individual growing up, in comparison to her sister. She excelled in computer sciences and one day hoped to be successful like her father. When her sister and her were disowned, she had no choice but to stay with her, growing an unbreakable bond with her which is what keeps the two together. Her previous history in computers made it easy for her to transition into making a living out of doing small-time jobs and assisting her sister with her criminal activities. She would prefer not to do this, however, since the two have no other way of living, she has very much been forced into this role. Being with her sister often means being involved in combat, although she does not excel in the heat of battle she will not shy away from it if her sister is in danger.

Originally, Carina was concerned about Natalie's involvement with several groups, including The Sith Ascendancy and a certain Miss Blonde, but she quietly accepted this and just tried to keep her out of trouble. When Blonde turned on Natalie, Carina provided her with transport and provided a stern telling off.

Currently, Carina holds a position on the directorate boards of both The Intergalactic Monetary Fund and the Trade Federation thanks to Natalie being the Chief Executive of both companies, though does not exercise any power, particularly because she dislikes corporate entities as a whole and her function is really just to distribute shares around somebody other than Natalie while ensuring that she never loses power. Carina has assisted in brokering several deals with galactic powers such as the Metal Lords, The Confederacy of Independent Systems and the Collective, however she mainly acts as security in most situations.


Intent: Provide a companion and story driver for my main character.

GIF courtesy of: https://giphy.com/explore/avril-lavigne, original video was an interview from ITV

 

[Jessica Med-Beq]

Submission name: Crown Nebula Hotel
Link to submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/122850-crown-nebula-hotel/
Summary of modification: Affiliation change, history change
Reason for Modification: The hotel is no longer run IC by Ithuvask, but by a PC
Modification:

Spoiler

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To provide a luxury hotel for Trandosha
• ​Image Credit: Bagh-e-Babur Restoration: Caravanserai by Luis Monreal on ArchNet.org
• Canon: N/A
• Links: Hotel Hell (where the hotel is introduced for the first time in an IC thread), Ta'jar Blood Gang (the former owners)

SETTING INFORMATION

• Structure Name: Crown Nebula Hotel
• Classification: Boutique hotel
• Location: Trandosha
• Affiliation: [member="Varindar Asyt"]
• Accessibility: Open to the public
• Security: Minimal
• Description: The Crown Nebula luxury hotel features a 50-seat restaurant, where a variety of cuisines is served, as well as 29 luxury rooms, complete with accommodations consistent with luxury hotels across the galaxy: a business center, running water across all rooms, with bubble baths (which, on Trandosha, is considered a luxury item, as is the case in desert regions on planets). All rooms are accessible via the central courtyard, whose main access is covered by the lobby. Guests can also be chauffeured to hunting grounds for free.

POINTS OF INTEREST
The centerpiece of the Crown Nebula Hotel is the central courtyard, surrounded on three sides by guest rooms over two floors, with fourteen rooms on the ground floor and fifteen on the second floor, with the remaining side, facing south, taken up by the lobby in the center, the business center to the right of the main lobby and the restaurant to its left.

In addition, a 25-meter-long swimming pool is located on the northeast corner of the property, comprising all the equipment that a standard short-course competition pool normally comprises, with twenty pool chairs and palm trees lining up the edges of the poolside areas.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Built as an egotistical project of its owner, Ithuvask, in 842 ABY, the Crown Nebula hotel is an example of boutique luxury hotel, designed using a hodge-podge of architectural styles with well-appointed rooms. For a while, the hotel lived on, but it earned a bad rap for mistreating employees, causing the hotel to go through 15 different managers since its opening, and the average tenure of sentient employees at the hotel is a measly three months. It has been found that the hotel lived under the Silver Jedi by essentially abusing the tax credits for hiring refugees, to the extent it is possible to do so in a hotel that size. At the height of the Great Galactic War, the revolving door was so severe that the staff at the time, mostly comprised of Vratix, Pau'ans and Utai, asked for SJ intervention.

After a moneylaundering scheme by a major slavery ring was uncovered, powered by its then-draconian cancellation policy, and later found to also include betting revenues from swimming races, Ithuvask no longer owns the inn and the hotel was purchased by the Silver Jedi Order, and hence the Silver Jedi Order virtually controls the luxury hotel industry on Trandosha as a result. The new general manager of the Crown Nebula ended up being the last receptionist of the hotel under Ithuvask's tenure.

 

[Zef Halo]

Submission Name: Stiletto Company
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/118200-stiletto-company/
Summary of Modification: Update status of 2nd Rifle Platoon Platoon Sergeant Zoran 'Tusk' Kitic cause he died.
Reason for Modification: One of the NPCs died on Thyferra during the invasion of TSE vs. GA.
Modification:

• Original Section:
  2nd Rifle Platoon (Stiletto Two):
  ​Command:
  PL: LT Scipio Alta
• PS: SSGT Zoran 'Tusk' Kitic

[*]​​New Section:

• 2nd Rifle Platoon (Stiletto Two):
  ​Command:
  PL: LT Scipio Alta
• PS: SSGT Harin Volk | Previously: SSGT Zoran 'Tusk' Kitic [KIA on Thyferra]

 

[Enyo Typhos]

1.

Submission Name: Neda Chazzak
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/115836-neda-chazzak/
Summary of Modification: Upgrade her a bit by giving her a repulse-hand (edits in Appearance and the Combat Function section).
Reason for Modification: ICly it represents a reward from Enyo Typhos since Neda is her chief lieutenant and has served under her for a long time and the Iron Fist Consortium has more resources now. Neda is already a cyborg, so it's not a radical change.
Modification:


Add this line to Appearances at the end:

As a reward for faithful service to the Consortium, her cybernetic arm was upgraded with a repulse hand.


In Combat Function, replace this paragraph:


Like with all Eisenkrieger, her cybernetics endow her with superior speed, strength and reaction time compared to a normal soldier. Similar to a Guavian minion, she has a mechanical reservoir that acts as a second heart, injecting a combination of chemical into her bloodstream that boosts adrenaline. An advanced combat implant enhances her nervous system. Like with all Eisenkrieger, she has a brain implant that gives her instant communication with the other cyborgs. Artificial eyes give her better sight and targeting. All in all, her cybernetics give her a 1.5x performance boost.


With this:


Like with all Eisenkrieger, her cybernetics endow her with superior speed, strength and reaction time compared to a normal soldier. Similar to a Guavian minion, she has a mechanical reservoir that acts as a second heart, injecting a combination of chemical into her bloodstream that boosts adrenaline. An advanced combat implant enhances her nervous system. Like with all Eisenkrieger, she has a brain implant that gives her instant communication with the other cyborgs. Artificial eyes give her better sight and targeting. Finally, her cybernetic arm was recently upgraded by giving it a repulse-hand, which gives her a brutal weapon in melee combat. All in all, her cybernetics give her a 1.5x performance boost.


2.

Submission Name: Eisenkrieger
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/115405-eisenkrieger/
Summary of Modification: Increase Deployment from Limited to Minor, add a few pieces of gear to Equipment.
Reason for Modification: ICly the increase is a reflection of the expansion of Enyo's power base. She started out with few resources and a small gang, but several successful raids in various threads, including invasions and skirmishes, have allowed her to expand her resources. She also runs a tier 3 corporation now. Availability remains Rare, as she does not have a huge army at her disposal.
Modification:


Increase Deployment to Minor.


In Equipment, replace this paragraph:

Equipment: Standard blaster weapons, standard slugthrowers, scatterguns, sonic blasters, shatterguns, disruptors, vibroblades, vibroaxes, grenades, limited number of repeating blasters/missile launchers/grenade launchers. Diathim Power Armour (stolen from Archangel), Blackhide Armour, or reinforced duraplast armour.


with this:


Equipment: The Eisenkrieger have access to blaster weapons, slugthrowers, scatterguns. On a more restricted basis, shatterguns, are utilised by precision shooters. Higher-ranking members can utilise rarer ranged weapons such as disruptors, particle beam blasters and cryoban weapons. Heavy weapon specialists carry grenade launchers, missile launchers or flamethrowers, while automatic riflemen carry heavy repeating blasters. Typical melee weapons are vibroblades and vibroaxes. Aside from this, they carry grenades, thermal detonators and standard misc. gear such as medkits, grappling hooks, binoculars and so on. In terms of body armour, they wear Diathim Power Armour (stolen from Archangel), Blackhide Armour, or standard reinforced duraplast armour.

 

[Lief]

Submission Name: Aurum
Link to Submission: Link
Summary of Modification: Add mention of the Player-Made Hyperlane it sits upon
Reason for Modification: I was unaware that Aurum sat along a Hyperspace Lane, and as such I'd like to mention it in the submission itself so folks are aware
Modification:

• System Features: Ner (G-Type Main Sequence Star) | Kol (Natural Satellite) | 32 Hour Rotational Period | 451 Day Orbital Period | Located in the center of the Habitable Zone | Sits along the Crusader's Way Hyperlane

Changes from the original:

Sits along the Crusader's Way Hyperlane - At the end of the System Features section.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Submission Name: The Crownguard
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: Update their equipment
Reason for Modification: Made some new armor and found some new weapons to outfit them with
Modification:
Equipment:

• Crownguard Battle Armor
• Vibro-Voulge / Vibro-Bardiche / Vibro-Fauchard
• Vibroshield
• SIF-141 Interchangeable Weapon System

 

[Darben Skirae]

Submission Name: Mia Nujik
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/118708-mia-nujik/
Summary of Modification: To archive the NPC
Reason for Modification: The NPC has been killed
Modification: Archive

 

[Onrai]

Submission name: Caldera
Submission link: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/124842-caldera/
Reason for Modification: OOC scorn
Modification: Archive the sub, please.

 

[Ugoto Chivaro]

Submission Name: Helix Syndicate Processors
Link to Submission: [Here]
Summary of Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.
Reason for Modification: I've decided this doesn't really work with the combat unit template, so I'll be switching it over to a group template and re-writing the thing.
Modification: Unlock and move to pre-codex.

 

[Onrai]

Submission Name: Drey's Cortosis Mine
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/82567-dreys-cortosis-mine/
Summary of Modification: Affiliation change
Reason for Modification: Affiliation has changed
Modification: Change affiliation from "Alicia Drey" to "Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing"

 

[Cyern Aarseth]

Submission Name: Lefay Flower
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/124399-lefay-flower
Reason for Modification: The character with whom the flower was affiliated will no longer be used, so with the purpose of utilizing this sub I would like to change its affiliation.
Modification: Switching the plant's affiliation to PCs [member="Asha Hex"] and [member="Esis Nas"] and to minor faction The Je'daii Order. (Minor changes in history and planet of origin will be made to make sense with the affiliation change)

 

[Zeradias Mant]

[member="Priscilla Utorna"] - There is no link to a sub. Please make sure your requested changes match the formatting of the sub template as well.

[member="Vanessa Vantai"] - Please provide a link to the new Affiliation.

[member="Vela Kryss"] - Species do not have designated affiliations, so a modification to the sub for that is not necessary. If you'd still like to make changes to other parts of the sub, I will need the changes provided her verbatim for me to edit into the sub.

All other subs have been updated.

 

[Priscilla Utorna]

Submission Name: Carina LaForte
Link to Submission: Carina LaForte
Summary of Modification: Updating appearance/playby/formatting/history
Reason for Modification: To be consistent with new roleplays
Modification: Enclosed in spoiler

Spoiler

Out of Character Information

• Intent: Provide a companion and story driver for my main character.
• Image credit: GIF courtesy of: https://giphy.com/explore/avril-lavigne, original video was an interview from ITV
• Role: Sister
• Links: N/A

Physical Information

• Loyalties: The Trade Federation, The Intergalactic Monetary Fund, Natalie LaForte, The Sorority for Liberty
• Age: 30
• Force Sensitivity: Non-Force user
• Species: Human (Aldeeranian)
• Appearance: Carina's style varies from day to day. Sometimes, it could be something as simple as a tank top with some jeans, at other times it could be a lightly armored and skin tight body suit. Her style shifts depending on what is needed for whatever she is doing. Her hair is a natural blonde, though has some green tints at the front. Most of the time, she can be seen wearing some sort of makeup and usually goes for the goth-emo eyeliner look, contrasting against her pale skin.

Social Information

• Name: Carina LaForte
• Loyalties: The Trade Federation, The Intergalactic Monetary Fund, Natalie LaForte, The Sorority for Liberty
• Wealth: Large amount of wealth
• Notable Possessions: Not applicable
• Skills: Proficient in small arms weaponry, hand to hand combat and slicing/hacking technology, electronics
• Personality: Carina is the ying to Natalie's yang, she is very opposite in her personality. She is calm, cool and collected and almost never lashes out, she is enthusiastic about assisting people and always sees the good in most. With that being said, she will not hesitate to turn her back on good if the situation requires it, especially if her sister is in need of assistance.
  
  

Combat Information

• Weapon of Choice:Mark II pacifier assault rifle (Primary), Z-Light gunhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/112684-z-light-gun/ (Secondary)
• Combat Function: Although Carina prefers to not partake in combat, she is a good shot. Although she would prefer to settle it in the background or deal with it quietly, she will not be afraid to retaliate with her weapons if she is attacked and is very driven in protecting what she believes in. She does not give up easily. Especially in situations where Natalie or another family member is at risk, she would risk dying to protect them.

Historical Information

Carina was a bright individual growing up, in comparison to her sister. She excelled in computer sciences and one day hoped to be successful like her father. When her sister and her were disowned, she had no choice but to stay with her, growing an unbreakable bond with her which is what keeps the two together. Her previous history in computers made it easy for her to transition into making a living out of doing small-time jobs and assisting her sister with her criminal activities. She would prefer not to do this, however, since the two have no other way of living, she has very much been forced into this role. Being with her sister often means being involved in combat, although she does not excel in the heat of battle she will not shy away from it if her sister is in danger.

Originally, Carina was concerned about Natalie's involvement with several groups, including The Sith Ascendancy and a certain Miss Blonde, but she quietly accepted this and just tried to keep her out of trouble. When Blonde turned on Natalie, Carina provided her with transport and provided a stern telling off.

Currently, Carina holds a position on the directorate boards of both The Intergalactic Monetary Fund and the Trade Federation thanks to Natalie being the Chief Executive of both companies, though does not exercise any power, particularly because she dislikes corporate entities as a whole and her function is really just to distribute shares around somebody other than Natalie while ensuring that she never loses power. Carina has assisted in brokering several deals with galactic powers such as the Metal Lords, The Confederacy of Independent Systems and the Collective, however she mainly acts as security in most situations.

 

[Onrai]

[member="Zeradias Mant"] Edit has been made to the request.

 

[Cyern Aarseth]

[member="Zeradias Mant"]

I'd still like to change minor aspects of the sub, such as its planet of origin and bits of its history.

Edits:

Spoiler

• Intent: To present a plant created by [member="Esis Nas"], for its usage in tea brewing.
• ​Image Credit: Daniel Ljunggren
• Canon: Murakami orchid.
• Links:

​Lachesis Nas
Aurum
Ceto

• Name: Lefay Flower
• Homeworld: Aurum.
• Other Locations: No.
• Classification: Magnoliophyta. Murakami orchid offshoot.
• Average Growth Cycle: 4 years.

​Upon planting a Lefay seed under the correct requirements, it will germinate approximately five weeks after and start its grow over the surface of the land. The plant reaches maturity two years after germination and will start to produce buds 8-10 weeks after maturity. However, the buds in turn take another two years until ready for blooming, when the plant sprouts its very first flowers. At this time, the plant is considered an adult and fully developed specimen.

Since that moment, the plant will produce flowers once every three years. The flowers stay fresh and alive for about a week and a half before withering and receding, allowing the blooming cycle to start again.

• Viability:

​Lefay flowers are extremely hard to grow and truly delicate things. This is the main reason why they are not found in the wild, they were designed to be viable only under the care of hands that know exactly what the plant needs.

In order to grow, it must be potted in specifically enriched soil and must be the only plant present in its habitat. The exact mineral needs of the plant are kept a secret by its creator and shared only with select few. Needing plenty of water, sunlight and care; only expert hands with knowledge of this well-kept information would be able to successfully grow and care for a Lefay flower plant.

The most surprising characteristic about them is that Lefay flowers are force-sensitive, they need to be influenced by the Force in order to live and thus only a force-sensitive would be able to keep one without it dying. There are certain metabolism processes that the plant requires to survive and that can only be triggered by stimulating it through the Force. For this reason, it is believed that if the plant was able to survive in the wild, it would do so only near a Force Nexus that could provide the needed stimuli to its roots and buds.

• Description: Lefay flowers are golden plants, with a strange glow about them. They are are highly distinguished by their sweet, enchanting smell and beautiful appearance, they would certainly be excellent decorative flowers were they not so monumentally hard to take care of.

• Average height: 30cm.
• Average length: Width of flowers: 15cm.
• Color: Bright gold, alabaster white, silver, pitch black, dark blue, rose gold or deep red(extremely rare), transparent (not yet seen).
• Nutritional Value: Lefay flowers can be highly nutritious if prepared correctly. They are rich in certain vitamins and minerals rarely found in other creatures that boost the metabolism and propitiate the healthy functioning of the body.
• Distinctions: The Lefay flower's main distinction is its force-sensitivity. The cells that compose it have a high midichlorian count that make it tremendously sensitive and reactive to the Force. Because of this, a Lefay flower not only needs the Force to live (since its stimuli triggers necessary chemical reactions to keep the plant alive) but it can be influenced through it. In this manner, a Lefay flower adopts determined characteristics that vary its properties and most importantly: its color. A Lefay flower influenced by Light-sided energies will adopt Birght gold, or alabaster white colors. A flower influenced by neutral Force will turn into varying shades of shimmering silver while the dark-imbued flowers take black or dark blue shades. If a special force treatment is administered, one that is extremely hard to perform correctly and most often than not ends in failure and the death of the Lefay flower, it can adopt a rose-gold color (light-side) or deep red (dark-side). This specimens are the best and most prized among their kind, but the difficulty of creating them can truly not be exaggerated. There is one last possible tone that the flower can adopt: becoming translucent, with a crystal-like appearance. This occurs when another type of special Force treatment, one needed to be practiced by at least two different force-users, imbues the plant with either Neutral energy or equal amounts of light and dark, resulting in a neutral plant. Just like the rose-gold flowers are the best possible result of light-imbuement and deep red the one of dark-imbuement, transparent flowers are the best version of neutrally aligned specimens and the rarest and most difficult to achieve (even more so than rose gold/deep red flowers).

​

• Strengths:

​High Value: Due to their rarity, beauty and effects, Lefay Flowers or its derived products can fetch amazingly high prices in the market.
Powerful, unique Brews: The brews made using the plants different components produce a variety of effects rarely seen, which many might find beneficial. (each brand will feature its own factory submission, detailing its effects, benefits and drawbacks)
Bonded: Like their genetic counterpart, the Murakami orchid, Lefay flowers bond to a force user and can communicate telepathically with them to an extent. Most specimens can only showcase feelings and sensations onto their bonded force-user, there are the rarer cases in which they can display more elaborate communication (this is more probable to happen with specimens that have lived for a long time, which given the feebleness of the flowers is rare).

• Weaknesses:

​Extremely Delicate: Lefay flowers are very delicate and easily harmed. Handling it with anything less than upmost care is enough to harm it and unlike other plants, healing an injured/ill Lefay is almost impossible to do.
Force-dependency: The flower needs to be stimulated either by a force sensitive or a force nexus in order to survive. If neither occurs, the plant progressively loses its properties until it dies.
Bonded: Lefay flowers sense their bonded force-user if they are in close proximity and open communication with them regardless of the current situation. If the force-user is harmed or is experiencing intense distressed while around the plants it can have serious, possibly fatal effects. Also, if the plant is ill or experiencing discomfort, it will project this feelings/sensations onto its bonded pair causing equal effects on him/her.
Hard to Prepare: Only [member="Esis Nas"] and [member="Asha Hex"] know how to prepare and treat the plant correctly to obtain the desired results and they still find it difficult to do without failing. If the process was not hard enough, killing a Lefay flower that has been bonded to its cultivator for its usage is very emotionally harming. This is the reason why they only use their ill/weak/too damaged plants for the creation of the teas and thus do not obtain the same strength of effects they would if they decided to utilize the healthy, strong and younger specimens.

After years of research on Murakami orchids and preparation, a Je'daii Padawan and amateur Xenobiologist known as Esis Nas set hands to task in order to create a unique flower, unlike any seen before. Through genetic engineering of the curious force-sensitive plants from from the Murakam system and the usage of the Force, Nas managed to create the Lefay flower, with the objective of providing the Je'daii Order with the many unique and special products derived from this plant.

Many of the first attempts in creating the flower were absolute failures, with it not producing the desired effects or having a much too short life-span. A lot of effort and resources were lost but at last, the endeavor bore its fruits in the shape of a beautiful, golden colored plant with all the properties its creator had envisioned it to have. However, soon after the successful creation of the flower and before its presentation, Esis' Master died and she abandoned the order, stricken with grief. During this time she pursued a doctoral degree in xenobiology and made the last corrections to her plants.

Nowadays, Esis has returned to the Order with the many Lefay flowers she has grown during her time away and keeps them in a personal greenhouse in the Silent Academy at Ceto. She has introduced the flowers and has been instructing on how to care for them the fellow Joutneyer [member="Asha Hex"], who now keeps her own flowers in Aurum.

 

[Lief]

Submission Name: Aurum Resubmission
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/124049-aurum-resubmission/
Summary of Modification: Edit the System Features to match the other planets in its System
Reason for Modification: I want them all to match, plus Aurum's position is altered since the other planets have been worked upon
Modification:

Change "Located in the center of the habitable zone" to "Located in the Habitable Zone | 5th Planet from Ner"

Can I also get "Kol (Natural Satellite)" changed to "Kol (Moon)"