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Sor-Jan Xantha

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Submission Name: Atrisia
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/117067-atrisia/
Summary of Modification: Request RPJ unlock and move thread so that it can be extensively updated.
Reason for Modification: The sub is approaching 1 year old (10 October 2017). In addition to the planet changing hands from Galactic Alliance to the First Order, there's substantial thread development and Codex subs completed in those 12 months that need to be codified into an expanded entry for the planet.
Modification: Request RPJ unlock and move thread so that it can be extensively updated.
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
Ravenfire
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Character Bio
Submission Name: Noverskaa
Link to Submission: [x]
Summary of Modification: Updating the planet with new subs as well as new information.
Reason for Modification: After a few months several additions needed to the sub.
Modification:
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Noveskaa
  • Demonym: Noveskaars
  • Region: Mid Rim
  • System Name: Novesk
  • System Features: The planet has 2 moons around it that have yet to be explored. It has one star. in the system's habitable zone. It is a standard rotational period or 24 hours and a orbital period or 365 days.
  • Coordinates: AC25
  • Major Imports: Materials and weapons.
  • Major Exports: The planet has a lot of crystals and mineral deposits that have yet to be discovered (no RMs). The wood of the trees are as strong as the Wroshyr trees. Animals are also an export from Noveskaa as people use them as pets or even part of terraforming projects
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Standard
  • Climate: Tropical Wet-dry
  • Primary Terrain: Grassland, Oceans, Forests, marshes
  • Major Locations:
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The waterfall of peace - It has been believed that some ancient being of power affected this site with there power. When and how is unknown as almost all records from the planet have been lost and even Flow walking has never been able to pin down who did it as whoever it continues to shift for every person who performs the force power. It is unknown why this phenomena occurs it is possible because there was more than one person pouring energy into the nexus or it is possible whoever created it was a force entity that never wanted who it was revealed.


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The valley of the Oceans. From what scientist can tell this area was caused during an Ice age on the planet. This valley looks like waves hence the name the valley of the oceans. A survey was taken of the area which showed that there were useful resources underneath the area. Yet it was agreed that no one is to destroy these monuments where not to be destroyed or face the penalty of death.


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This tree is named the crystal tree. It is unknown how said tree was formed or why it exists. What is known is that the crystal is harder than any substance ever found. As such cannot be mined or moved from it's current position. But it was once again agreed that the tree is a monument and as such should not be harmed.


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These two buildings are the new complex from Mirdirmorut. These are being used to create new technologies. Most of which is biological processes. This is also the main home of Tom Taff as vice president of the corporation. He watches the new developments into biological process with glee. This is thanks to Mandal arms and their subsidiaries.

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Lesorskaa City - Tom also realised that the Town was built by mirdirmorut and should be protected by them to as such with the expansion came 6 AA towers with targeting computers and defence packages from mirdirmorut all run from the office by the AI genesis. The security forces took up policing jobs within the town and it became a safe place to stay. One of the first shops within the town was actually Taff's Taffy.

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The Lizards Keep - Created on Noverskaa by The Family as part of the deal with Mirdirmorut, Vork decided to take up this operation knowing he would be able to deal with the Silvers, Mandalorians and The Sith if need be and as such he has added a lot of defences as well as several vehicles that were purchased by The Family from Mirdirmorut the company that basically owns the planet.

POPULATION

  • Native Species: no native sentients.
  • Immigrated Species: Humans 80%, Other races 20%
  • Population: Minimally Populated
  • Demographics: Is it primarily human inhabitants with only a decent percentage of aliens.
  • Primary Languages: Galactic Standard Basic
  • Culture: Because of the heavy Mandalorian influence in the system, Noveskaars culture is centred around efficiency and practicality. A good idea is a good idea regardless of where it comes from, and the emphasis on meritocracy is high, and corruption is low. However due to the isolation of the small villages on the planet, it isn't very often people meet. Although everyone who does meet often agrees that it better to be isolated then bunched up. Noveskaa sometimes holds hunting events to try and lower the populations of certain animals.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Council
  • Affiliation: Mirdirmorut and secretly The Family
  • Wealth: Medium - This is due to most of the materials on the planet are under the ground. Most of these spots are where the few natural sites exist. Thus the wealth of the planet is low and thus people use the trees on the planet to build there houses. However with The Family's deal with Tom and Mirdirmorut the amount of goods and supplies being traded have made it so the wealth has risen on the planet.
  • Stability: medium - it is a planet of peaceful law abiding citizens. All outsiders are safe as the Council now rules the planet. Due to Tom being a member of the planet's council and head of their defence forces, Mirdirmorut Security mostly controls the planet. As for Family controlled turf, it is a secret and as such Vorks men act as a police force as well that generally try to act similar to Mirdirmorut security forces.
  • Freedom & Oppression: Under the Councils leadership most things are fine. However under The Family's rule on their areas, people can do whatever they want as long as it doesn't harm the Family in any way shape or form.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: The miltiary on the world is controlled by the council and is run generally by Tom and Mirdirmorut which allows people to sign up whenever and generally use droids for most of their patrols. It is a world complete with some decent defences. As well as a decent navy as they are protected by Mirdirmorut. However parts are run by The Family and Vork. They use their own forces to allow Noverskaa to have an easier time policing the planet and don't have a visible fleet within the system due to Mirdirmorut's fleet already being significant.
  • Technology: The level of technology present is the same of that within the galaxy at large. This is due to mostly Mirdirmorut and Tom and Mykes influences as they try to make sure it keeps up with current galactic standards.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Before this planet was discovered by Mirdirmourt and the Taff's it was a planet barren of civilisation which had an abundance amount of animals on the planet. Due to this it was occasionally used as a hunting reserve by a few knowable people who never remained on planet for long enough to build any homes or towns. Shortly after the galactic war it was largely forgotten about and was removed from a lot of archives much in the same way Kamino was in the Jedi archives. No one alive currently knows why this was. Due to this the system was largely forgotten.

Rex and Tom Taff where doing surveys on the system coming across the planet. When they landed Rex saw how over joyed Tom was at the amount of life present. As such he called in Mirdirmorut scientists as well as Kaine Australis. The surveys of the planet showed large amounts of mineral and crystal deposits however majority of these are under the natural wonders on the planet. The surveys done on the planet and animal life showed that the trees on the planet were as strong as the Wroshyr trees. They also found a location where every animal on planet congregates in peace. The location was then noted down for further research. As such Mirdirmorut set up an outpost on planet to continue their research on the animal and plant life.

The two of them agreed it was decided although the planet would come under Clan Australis. As they are under Clan Australis most of the settlements are members of the clan as such they took there culture and values with them. In efforts to keep up with the rest of the Clan and the galaxy as a whole, the company Mirdirmorut created several holonet stations as well as setting up comm buoys within the area to keep up to date with what the Clan, the ME and the galaxy at large is doing. Once every planetary year Mirdirmorut hold a feast where the Clan members are able to meet and catch up as well as swap or purchase weapons, armour and other hard to get goods. Kaine and Rex spoke of the defences of the planet due to it's proximity to SJO space. As such several missile satellites were put in orbit as well as a fleet of ships to cover the area. From that some members of Clan Australis felt safe enough to call this planet their home. As such the population is still minimal.

However when Rex left the galaxy at large for five years Tom took over control and decided he was not authoritarian enough to keep complete control of the planet and stepped down to focus on [member="Mykes Vatak"] as well as his company and the galaxy at large. However in his place a council was made to which he was voted to as head of security to allow his company to keep the world safe. He agreed to this and continues to fill this role. However before Rex came back to the galaxy as a whole Tom made a new town for the planet to be it's capital. This was Lesorskaa City with decent enough defences. This has been the site for more than a many wedding since including Tom's own wedding.

When Rex came back however he didn't retake control and was followed by a sister. All members of the Taff family were present in the Valley of Oceans when Rex was killed by his then apprentice and his Brother Rowin Taff finally left his body. With this and other reasons, Tom left the ME with a dissatisfaction making it so that Clan Australis no longer had control of the planet instead allowing it to be neutral.

Since then Tom as well as the council have secretly made a deal with a rather large crime family and one [member="Ahtemis"] . This was in an effort to allow themselves so protection and control from the crime family. This was also due to several rebel factions who were branded as sith lovers who had been affected by Rowin Taff. However they in truth were no longer happy with the council at all. However these sources were soon silenced and Noverskaa went back to normal.
 
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Siobhan Kerrigan

Sic transit gloria mundi
Siobhan Kerrigan
Character Bio
Submission Name: Eyes of the Forest
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/123984-eyes-of-the-forest/http://starwarsrp.net/topic/123984-eyes-of-the-forest/
Summary of Modification: Update Equipment. Change Availability from Uncommon to Rare.
Reason for Modification: Got new stuff. Availability reduction reflects their status as an elite unit of scouts.
Modification:

In Availability, replace this:
  • Availability: Uncommon

with this:

Availability: Rare


In Equipment, Standard, add:

 
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Elpsis Kerrigan

Igni Irae
Elpsis Kerrigan
Character Bio
Submission Name: Tephrike
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/122549-tephrike/
Summary of Modification: Update Major Exports by specifically listing materiels.
Reason for Modification: Planet creation template states that materials and ores should be specifically listed. The submission of my planet sub preceded the introduction of this rule, but I mentioned raw materials being an important resource, which was one of the reasons why Tephrike was first colonised centuries ago. So in compliance with rules, I want to codify some (non-restricted) materiels that will flesh out the place a bit more and make it potentially interesting for explorers.
Modification:

In Major Exports, change:


this:


  • Major Exports: Technically N/A. Potential exports: Wild animals, timber, drugs, raw materiels.

to this:


  • Major Exports: Technically N/A. Potential exports: Wild animals, timber, drugs, raw materiels (Durasteel ore, Phobium, Agrocite).
 
Major Faction

Ronan Vizsla

Ashes
Ronan Vizsla
Character Bio
Submission Name: Ne'tra Fleet
Link to Submission: [x]
Summary of Modification: Add another person to the notable characters list. Right underneath Ronan plz.
Reason for Modification: There is a new person with an official function.
Modification:
  • Tamara Vizsla - (*) - Senechal to the Spirit of Fire, Flagship of the Fleet. In charge of meeting newcomers, assisting them with settling into the life on the fleet and Clan.
 
Major Faction

Elpsis Kerrigan

Igni Irae
Elpsis Kerrigan
Character Bio
Submission Name: Nyssa Vykaris
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Additions to Possesions, Skills, History and Personality
Reason for Modification: Update character a bit.
Modification:


In Notable Possessions, add:


Nyssa possesses a suit of Centurion Battle Armour. She owns a crossguard lightsabre with a dual phase mode, bifurcating cyclical ignition and other standard lightsabre systems.



In Skills change:

this:
  • Force Sense

to this:
  • Force Body



In Personality, add:


Nyssa often comes across as grumpy and taciturn. Being someone with a strong martial ethos, she does not respect people who back down from a confrontation. Having been raised on admittedly biased accounts of the Great Hyperspace War and other events, Nyssa is very scornful of Jedi. She and Elpsis come across as a bit of an odd couple as their personalities seem to clash a good deal. However, they are there to help each other out if need be. In a way, Elpsis respects Nyssa more because the Pureblood has not suddenly claimed that she's turned a new leaf and walked through the revolving alignment door. Nyssa's more cynical outlook on the galaxy complements Elpsis' more idealistic views. She has recently taken an active role in providing combat training for young Fire Acolytes. Unsurprisingly, her training methods are very harsh. She is a blunt sort and does not mince words, even in the presence of superiors.


One of Nyssa's idiosyncracies is that she is more than a little xenophobic towards Sith who are not Purebloods. In her opinion, non-racial Sith are not 'true' Sith, but poseurs who appropriated and bastardised her people's proud culture. Her views are more than a little ironic because even 'Purebloods' like her are hybrids rather than 'pure' Sith. However, her family were Sith nationalists, and old beliefs are hard to shake. While she has tried to move away from the more self-destructive aspects of Sith ideology and has discovered that her family's own adherence to it was not as pure as she thought, Nyssa is quite proud of her heritage. Her family claimed that they could trace their line back to a warlord who fought under the banner of the legendary King Adas. Ironically, another ancestor might have been a Sith Je'daii, but the records say little about this heretical Vykaris! She has somewhat bigoted views about alien races she considers 'weak', such as Twi'leks, Eldorai, Zeltrons or Togruta, though individual feats of bravery can change her opinion. She does not respect people who back down from a confrontation or who seem to lack conviction.



In Historical Information add:


Nyssa has accompanied Elpsis on several adventures, including a trip to Maena. She also participated in the Firemane expedition to Tephrike. Despite being treated with distrust from some members of Firemane, she proved to be effective, reliable and brave under fire. In recognition for her efforts, she was given an officer's commission and promoted to the rank of Lieutenant. This has made her a full member of the Order of Fire. However, Nyssa is an ambitious type and intends to rise in the ranks.
 

Enyo Typhos

Control
Enyo Typhos
Character Bio
Submission Name: Sandstriders
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Update equipment.
Reason for Modification: Acquired some new gear, replacing some stuff.
Modification:


In Equipment, change:


this:


to this:

ACS-004 Olympian Battle Armor (purchase request here, permission here), Verpine energy shield.


In Equipment, change:

this:

Scattergun.


to this:


In Equipment, change:


this:


to this:


In Equipment, add:

 

Kaida Taldir

Duty
Kaida Taldir
Character Bio
Submission Name: Kazal's Dune Raiders
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Update Equipment.
Reason for Modification: Got new custom suff.
Modification:

In Equipment, replace:

this:

with this:


In Equipment, replace:

this:

Grenade launchers.


with this:


In Equipment, replace:


this:


with this:

 

Kaida Taldir

Duty
Kaida Taldir
Character Bio
Submission Name: Exemplars
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Update Equipment. Change Deployment to Minor.
Reason for Modification: Got new stuff. Expand unit a bit. ICly the Shadow Knights have more resources now and are a more fleshed out organisation. Thus they can afford to have more soldiers and Kaida can expand the unit a bit.
Modification:

In Deployment, change this:

  • Deployment: Limited
to this:

  • Deployment: Minor


In Equipment, replace

this:


with this:

In Equipment, add:

 
Major Faction

Zark San Tekka

defy the tyrannous stars
Zark San Tekka
Character Bio
Submission Name: Titus Valerius
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Archival
Reason for Modification: Decided to build this character into a PC instead.
Modification: Archive please, sorry to waste people's time.
 
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