Submission Modifications

[Darth Vyrassu]

[Member=Valiens Nantaris]

Far left of the map, and no, current location is too close to other factions to legitimately be there

Current location is far right of map

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Moving the planets is wise.

However, I think some changes to the planets would be wise to explain how they are out this far away from the old Sith Empire.

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

I'll send you a more detailed paragraph on each in a pm [member=Valiens nantaris]

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[Member=Valiens Nantaris]

I just looked again, all 3 planets had no affiliation with any Sith Empire other than Vyrassu's Jen'ari Empire back in 205 - 255 ABY

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]
Well yes, but how they were found and settled will need to be explained. Just have a quick look over and send me something to put in the existing history.

 

[The Red of Sinner]

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/35495-eclipstica/?hl=eclipstica

I need to make a few small edits to this submission. I need to add a few planets to the system it is in, I also want to add a name to the Moon that this planet orbits with around the Sun.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Romeo Sin"]
So put them in your next post and I'll edit them into the thread.

 

[The Red of Sinner]

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

Sorry, I didnt think of that.
Original:
"Moons: There is one moon, it orbits the sun. Not named.
System Features: There are no planets other than Eclipstica here, there is a red ring that spirals around the planet though. Because the moons orbts the sun, the planet only has a eight hour period of light on the planet."

Edits:
Moons: Iana: like any moon, it it barren, and grey. Twice the size of Earth's moon.
Systems Features:Eclipstica has a red ring that spirals around the planet though. Because the moons orbts the sun, the planet only has a eight hour period of light on the planet. Other than Eclipstica in the fifth row, and sharing it's orbit with it's solar opposite Maleficara which is also number five, there is Metatron as planet number four, three planets so close to the sun that are so hot, they are just floating molten boulders. Necro Minecore at planet number six, Eyon at seven, and Crucifier at eight.

 

[Gravi'gor'attaque]

Submission Name: Gravi's Rangers.
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/71759-gravis-rangers/
Reason for Modification: Would like to further expand the faction.
Modification: Add "Gravi's Rangers Infantry". I'm sorry for the super minor detail, but I'm attempting to further expand on the faction and keep this an individual unit, rather than the entire faction.

Thanks!

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Gravi'gor'attaque"]
You mean change the sub name?

 

[Gravi'gor'attaque]

Yes, please.

Again, sorry for the super small detail.

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Gravi'gor'attaque"]
Unit has been renamed to Wheat's Louisiana Tigers as requested.

 

[Sanya Val Lerium]

Submission link:http://starwarsrp.net/topic/70065-sekalus/
Edits:
Under the spoiler dasya temple can you remove the broken image and replace it with this
(http://www.wallpaperhi.com/thumbnails/detail/20130423/fantasy%20art%20temples%20tagnotallowedtoosubjective_www.wallpaperhi.com_98.jpg)
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Spoiler

Also can you add in this one under it please
(http://overmental.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/TFA-art.jpg)

Spoiler

Reason for edits: looking through the submission I realised that the image that I did use has broken and taken down v.v

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Sanya Val Lerium"]
I don't see a broken image, just one which is working?

I can add these two in or replace one if you'd like but I don't see where the dead link is.

Please let me know.

 

[Sanya Val Lerium]

[member="Valiens Nantaris"] it shows up broken under dasya temple grasslands for me. If you can still see it could you try reverse search it and replace it then just add in the second image. I know I'm been a pain in the bum but yeahhhh.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Sanya Val Lerium"]
I'll replace the image if you want, but I'm not going to do the legwork you should be doing.

 

[Sanya Val Lerium]

[member="Valiens Nantaris"] I can't see the image to have the original swapped so I'll ask someone else's to find it and link it here for you.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Galven Solomon"]
Where in your submission is this going?

Is this replacing a section? Please post the entire submission with new bits already included.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Kaileann Vera"]
Done, apologies for the delay.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Gilamar Skirata"]
Done. C+ is not a valid quality. We work on an A B C D E rating only. If you wish to upgrade to B you will need to provide RP links showing their use.