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Submission Name: T'zanith's Lightsaber

Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/61979-tzaniths-lightsaber/
Reason for Modification: I had optained this crystal for the saber long ago but forgot to add it into the saber.
Modification:
Add this one to the development threads
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/69664-into-the-depth/
And then add this one to the the power crystal 2 slot please and then add Improvement to awareness of opponent's movements to strengths please.
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Lorrdian_gemstone

Also am I doing this right?
 
Updated

[member="Darth Erebos"]
When doing multiple edits/additions, please quote the portion of the submission which needs an edit and edit the text within it, or otherwise spoiler the information which needs changing. Below are a few examples.

Manufacturer: Blas-Tech
Affiliation: Closed Market
Edited below
Manufacturer: Blas-Tech
Affiliation: Open Market
Alternatively from quoting you can just spoiler a copy-paste of the submission which needs to be edited with all changes made and I or another member of the staff may just replace the old version of the sub with your spoilered edit. Example below.
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(Just a longer hilt and color is here)

Image Source: Here
Intent: A personal weapon for Darth T'zanith, T'zanith Zebron
Development Thread:
Rule one stab with the pointy end - Lignan crystal obtained here.
http://starwarsrp.ne...into-the-depth/- Lorrdian Gemstone obtained here

Manufacturer: T'zanith Zebron
Model: Hand and a half hilted lightsaber
Affiliation: T'zanith Zebron
Modularity: The Hilt and crystals can be changed or added. (hilt will be made into a phrik one in the future)
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel hilt, Black cloth/ synth-leather woven around the hilt tightly for better grip, belt clip, focusing lens, power battery, ect. Lignan Crystal, Lorrdian Gemstone
Classification: Lightsaber
Size: One-handed and Two-handed usability
Length: Hilt: 36 cm blade:(1st setting) 125 cm (2nd setting) 60 cm Full length: (1st) 161 cm (2nd) 96 cm
Weight: 2 kg
Special Features:
Dual phase (Ability to switch between a longer and shorted blade at will, is the only other visible button on the saber and unless it is on won't do a thing)
water proof casing
Cross guard (Protects users hands while making some movements harder to perform. due to it being an "open" cross guard there is no way to cut into the hilt it'self from the sides that the cross guard exits the blade.)
Easy to hold grip
Can cut through everything faster than a normal lightsaber can.
Lock blade. (The saber stays on until it is turned off this allows it to be thrown if need be.)
Silenced blade (as part of the blades composition it is almost silent though it's hum is still present it is severely muffled.)
Longer than average hilt. (This feature allows for more crystals and changes to the blade than normal but also increases the weight by double the normal as well as makes it a little cumbersome to weild unless trained with it.)

Strengths
Dual phased
Nearly silenced
Cut's through most materials faster than normal sabers can
Improvement to awareness of opponent's movements

Weaknesses
Cumbersome hilt
Hard to do some moves with it
Twice as heavy as normal hilts

Description:
The composition of the hilt's inside crystals due to it's long hilt the blade can keep 3 additional power crystals within them.
Power crystal 1 = Lignan crystal Due to this crystal being above the color crystal the blade emitted has a black core instead of the usual white.
Color crystal = Red crystal
Power crystal 2 = Lorrdian Gemstone
Power crystal 3= none as of yet

As it is constructed the hilt was made longer with three blade emitters that emit a small "guard" the length of 6 centimeters each on either side to protect the wearers hand from any stray blows from other lightsabers. The hilt was wrapped in black cloth that resembles synth-leather so that it is easier to grip the hilt. It is built however so that the Hilt's chassis of durasteel can be removed and the insides tweaked or changed, such as removing the ignition button or putting in other crystals.
 
Submission Name: The holocron of Karness Muur
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/73938-the-holocron-of-karness-muur/
Reason for Modification: After reading through a much more extensive look at Muur the powers placed on the holocron aren't completely accurate. (Found the extensive look here)
Modification: The content of the holocron.





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IMAGE SOURCE: Google

Intent:To submit and flesh out the holocron of Karness Muur
Development Threads: total posts 40
Heart of a Graveyard ( obtained here 16 posts)
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/61717-heart-of-a-graveyard-os-dominion-of-belgaroth/
The Teachings of Karness Muur's Lightning ( First time unlocking it 10 posts) http://starwarsrp.net/topic/63104-the-teachings-of-karness-muurs-lightning-open-for-first-2/
Conversing with a Legend ( The second time and a more extensive lesson 14 posts) http://starwarsrp.net/topic/74193-conversing-with-a-legend/

Classification: Holocron
Size: Handheld
Length:13.5 cm3
Weight:1.5 kg
Manufacturer: Karness Muur
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Formerly Karness Muur, Lost for several millenniums and then found by Darth Erebos in the hands of a self proclaimed sith lord on Belgaroth. It is believed to have passed through the hands of other notable sith lords but as of yet that is unconfirmed.
Modularity: Information may be added or made inaccessible, requires submission modification or re-submission.
Production: Unique
Material:
​Alchemized Durasteel
Synthetic Crystal
Holocron Components
Content
Detailed lessons on the following.
Sith sorcery, The spells regarding the Rakghouls creation and manifestation of the plague have been made inaccessible or damaged.
Force Arcane arts
Alchemy and Sith alchemy
Force Lighting
Makashi
Shii-cho
Dark Side Healing
Dark Transfer
Force sense
Telekinesis

Telepathy/Empathy
Tutaminis
Force Maelstrom
Force Drain
Essence Transfer
A detailed personal take on Karness Muur and his legacy. (The Murr talisman's movement through time is not within this holocron.)
Karness Muur's Personality & full intellect are within the Gatekeeper.



Description:
An ancient Sith Lord, Karness Muur was known for his pioneering of sith sorcery, sith alchemy and mastery of the arcane force arts. He pioneered, developed and built up many of the abilities that would later be used by the sith on a whole. Made famous for his creation of both the Muur talisman and the rakghoul plague, Muur was feared throughout the sith empire and over the course of his life defeated and in some cases utterly destroyed any and all rivals that tried to usurp his power. Once such rival even went so far as to suppress his powers but through sheer cunning and wit, Muur regained his powers and utterly destroyed said rival.

Karness Muur was once a respected Knight of the Jedi Order. However, his lust for power caused him to study the nature of the dark side. He became one of the Dark Jedi during the Hundred-Year Darkness, alongside XoXaan and Ajunta Pall. He was one of the creators of creatures such as Leviathans as well. Muur fought in the Battle of Corbos and was amongst the surrendering survivors. Alongside Pall and XoXaan, Muur was exiled from the Republic and arrived on the planet Korriban with his fellow Dark Jedi. At the time he encountered Korriban's native species he carried a yellow-bladed protosaber, which he brandished in their presence as a display of his superior power.

Muur and his fellow Dark Jedi recognized the potent and untapped Force-sensitivity of the Sith race, and immediately sought to enslave them through the dark side of the Force. After conquering the Sith species, Muur like his fellows anointed themselves as Lords of the Sith, and were the very first to don the honorific title.

His death is still unknown and how his spirit was transferred into the Muur talisman also has been lost to the ravages of history.

Sources
Karness Muur
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Karness_Muur

THIS IS A CANON ITEM


 
Submission Name: Twilight Fox Armor
Link to Submission:
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/47222-twilight-fox-armor/
Reason for Modification: Retrieved Tarentatek Leather

Modifications:

Development Thread: http://starwarsrp.ne...-soul-searching, http://starwarsrp.net/topic/64726-the-fox-and-the-hound-vulpesen/page-2/ http://starwarsrp.net/topic/78021-threads-for-paymentas-for-invite/

Material: Shell Spider Silk, Nocur Oil (Formed into an adhesive), 2 kg of Phrik Dust, and a tarentatek underlay
Weight: 4.7 kg

Strengths:
Extremely light weight and flexible
High class defense against energy weapons
Comfortable to wear
Stylish for when Vulpesen is not in combat
Moderate defense against force attacks.

Weaknesses:
No protection from slug throwers or ballistic weapons (unless you count the rare chance that a bullet might hit the phrik buttons)
Only moderate protection from blades, though such is higher than most spider silk weapons due to the thickness of the coat.
No protection from blunt force. (If a person were strong enough, they could theoretically bludgeon Vulpesen through the coat with their saber.)
Sustained blows from a lightsaber or getting drilled in the same place from a blaster rifle will eventually wear away the layers of dust and oil. (About five seconds for a light saber. Thirty for repeated blaster bolts)
Clothes must be removed from afflicted area for force healing
 
Vulpesen said:
http://starwarsrp.ne...tas-for-invite/
The last thread linked is under 10 posts of development. All development threads in the factory need to be ten posts or greater to be accepted for use in submissions or modifications. Please reach the ten posts and notify me here and the changes will be made.
 
Submission Name: Imperator-class Turbolaser
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: It was brought to my attention that individuals have been using my submissions without my permission as members of factions unaffiliated with who or what this submission was intended to support. As such, I've created a corporation to handle the IC manufacture, licensure, and distribution of this submission.
Modification:
Manufacturer: Imperial State Hypernautics
Affiliation: Restricted Sales to Imperial Factions
 
T'yr Dellos said:
Submission Name: Imperator-class Turbolaser
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: It was brought to my attention that individuals have been using my submissions without my permission as members of factions unaffiliated with who or what this submission was intended to support. As such, I've created a corporation to handle the IC manufacture, licensure, and distribution of this submission.
Modification:
Manufacturer: Imperial State Hypernautics
Affiliation: Restricted Sales to Imperial Factions
Companies which are still in the reviewing process may not be used as a manufacturer. Once the company is approved I will make the necessary changes.
 
Submission Name: Infantry Blaster
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: I am no longer part of the one sith, as they no longer own alderaan
Modification:
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Image Source: http://images2.wikia...-Laserrifle.png
Intent: To create an all purpose infantry rifle for sith troopers
Development Thread: NA
Manufacturer: House Thul Estates
Model: Infantry Assault riffle
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: Grenades, Due to an Auxiliary Grenade Launcher
Production: Mass Production
Material: Durasteel, plastoids
Classification: Blaster
Size: Riffle
Length: 700-900mm
Weight: 7kg
Ammunition Type: Power cell
Ammunition Capacity: 100
Effective Range: 400m (blaster) 100m (agl)
Rate of Fire: Semi automatic/single shot
Special Features:
Side mounted Bayonet (mullien)
Cross hair target
Auxiliary grenade launcher
Adjustable stock length

Description:
The weapon was originally designed by house thul, to make money from the one sith. Via giving them a good all round infantry weapon.
It can fire various grenades via it`s agl (tech will be done for each one), each one operates with similar method to pump action shot gun.
They load it, pull back on the agl. That pierces the grenades launch system, then it fly`s about a hundred meters.
This is done through igniting the gunpowder in the grenade, then it boils sending then grenade flying.

It also has a bayonet down the side mounted so not to interfere with weapon action, the blade is made out mullinine.
So to keep it`s edge though the blade is not lightsaber resistant. This allows the weapon to be used as a spear if need.

The main blaster part is a normal blaster, capable of stunning as well killing.
It how ever sports an adjustable stock, so each one can be increased or shorten to the individual requirements
The cross hair aiming, means the if they are setting up a close ambush, then their are no glass sights, or laser lights to give them away to the enemy.

Submission Name: Infantry Armour
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: I am no longer part of the one sith, as they no longer own alderaan
Modification:
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Image Source: http://static3.wikia...ithtrooper2.jpg
Intent: To make a working armour for sith infantry, based on the revan era
Development Thread: NA
Manufacturer: House Thul Estates
Model: Infantry Armour MkI
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: Minor (colour only, always camouflaged pattern for terrain. If not come in silver, to be on show)
Production: Mass-Produced
Material: DuraSteel Body armour, and helmet,
Plastoids on arms and legs.
Transparisteel for visor
With an armour mesh under suit.
Classification: Medium Armour
Weight: 17kg
Quality: 7
Special Features:
Visor will protect from flash grenades, and has an infra red option
Comms link
Inbuilt Air supply
Med kit (nothing special, just one does of bacta and silk bandages)
Camra link to base, (so they can see, what he has seen)
Life sign monitor (nothing special, just lets command know if your alive or dead)
Description:
The armour is a up to date reproduction of the revan era armour. It designed to give infantry, a level of protection. Whilst giving command and control, eyes on the ground.
Thus if one member of the squad is being killed, from behind. Then the commander center can alert them to this.
Overall it is a good all round armour, though in fire fight, it can only take few hits from standard weapons before it will buckle.
Any heavy weapons will slice through it, and as such has no lightsaber resistance.

While the vital organs and head, have dura steel protecting it. The hands, arms and legs only have plastoids to protect them, so not to hinder movement to much.
Though this material, is not as capable of withstanding as much of attack, as the main body and head.
This said however, each one comes with it own med kit. This means any injured solider can get first aid, from any solider trained in this.
 
Submission Name: Wraith Vapor Armor Mk. II
Submission Link: Link
Reason for Modification: Niamh Raste "died" and the armor was returned to EIC. I write Niamh.
Modification: Change affiliation to Janira Fenni. Add this image in place of missing one. Source is here.
 
I believed the alchemy was done to make it lightsaber resistant, considering I saw no place in canon where the alchemy was required to sustain its natural qualities

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/24680-ael-spring-lines-terentatek-duster-the-cater-coat/
Terentateks are fully immune to Force powers. The Terentatek Duster imparts full immunity against a wide variety of Force powers, with the following exceptions:

A terentatek's hide was highly resistant—in some cases even immune—to the effects of the Force.


[member="Braith Achlys"]
 
Vulpesen said:
I believed the alchemy was done to make it lightsaber resistant, considering I saw no place in canon where the alchemy was required to sustain its natural qualities

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/24680-ael-spring-lines-terentatek-duster-the-cater-coat/Terentateks are fully immune to Force powers. The Terentatek Duster imparts full immunity against a wide variety of Force powers, with the following exceptions:

A terentatek's hide was highly resistant—in some cases even immune—to the effects of the Force.


[member="Braith Achlys"]
It was done to keep the force resistance, which both the writer of the submission and the submission itself have explained
 
Submission Name: Solarium Glasteel
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/65608-solarium-glasteel/
Reason for Modification:

The supply and demand of Solarium glasteel has gone up, allowing for an increase in production.
  1. Solaria Glasteel Panels
  2. Solaria Globe
  3. VT-Observation Satellite
  4. Salacia Consolidated's Algae Biofuel
  5. Ira-Class Civilian Atmospheric Station
  6. VT-Varactyl Class Escort Freighter
  7. SG-SC-03 'BIO-ARK'
  8. VT-Slith Class Frigate
  9. Tiefling Exploratory Craft
  10. VT-Hellion Class Missile Cruiser
  11. VT-Archon Class Repair Station


Modification:

Production to Mass

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Image Source: Pinterest
Intent: To make a nifty new strong glasteel that can polorize and absorb and store solar energy for green power.
Development Thread: Here
Manufacturer: Arceneau Trade Company | Browncoat Arms & Industrial | Mara Tibx | Mohc Extractives |Salacia Consolidated
Model: Solarium Glasteel
Affiliation: Open Market to ATC Customers
Modularity: Yes
Production: Mass
Material: Aurodium, Glasteel, Solar sail technology, lommite, Absorbital, Girondium and colium

Special features:

+ Blaster proof - Absorbital is a blaster proof substance that makes Solarium Glasteel blasterproof.
+ Clear solar sail technology - completely see through use of Aurodium allows the harvest and storing of solar energy, providing sustainable green energy. This also provides glare reduction.
+ Stronger than Glasteel and made phototropic to become more opaque near bright explosions, for example while traveling through hyperspace, and such.


Description:

Partnering with Salacia Consolidated, CEO Judah Dashiellhttp://starwarsrp.net/user/651-judah-dashiell/ and Danger Arceneau are paving the way by collaborating in the green market in order to maximize sustainability and a smaller carbon footprint. This would result in the crafting of an advanced form of glasteel combining aurodium, solar sailor technology, and typical glasteel methodology. Advancements by the two companies have created Solarium Glasteel.

Aurodium wires and sensors will be what will catch on as the solar panels. Laying them out in a gridlike manner mimics that of the solar sails seen on some starships. Solar sailers were a method of propulsion used by some starships. Although called "solar" sailers, they were more commonly propelled by tachyon streams and ultraviolet lasers rather than the photons and "solar wind" (high-energy plasma which escaped a star's gravity) of sunlight. Gathered on a sufficiently large surface (solar sails would unfurl to colossal diameters, rivaling the surface area of moons), the absorbed momentum would then accelerate the spacecraft. Once optimal velocity had been reached, the hyperdrive motivator would kick in and allow the craft to enter hyperspace.

Much like Solar panels, which were used to harvest solar energy much like the TIE fighters and most of their other variations. Now Browncoat Arms & Industrial was attempting to use the same technology but advance it -- interwoven in recycled materials that would then be lined with Aurodium.

This has resulted in an increase in solar cell performance by at least 40% percent, and it is increasing. Studies have discovered that a small molecule created with 144 atoms of aurodium or gold can increase solar cell performance by more than 10 percent. Refining this would only increase the performance, and that was a performance that Arceneau along with Salacia Consolidated were keen on expanding. A tiny bit of aurodium or gold upon the would be new glassteel could also reduce glare.

Most ships would use Transparissteel, a hard and completely transparent metal alloy. Transparisteel was much weaker than its opaque counterpart durasteel, but less than glasteel. Glasteel on the other hand was as strong as durasteel, and the transparent material was often used to form the large windows of space scapers, or more recently, space ships.

The new alloy would be a bit stronger than glasteel, but like transparissteel, made phototropic to become more opaque near bright explosions, while traveling through hyperspace, and such. A major component in the make-up of transparisteel was lommite. Loommite mines with Browncoat Arms and Industrial along with Mohc Extractives will provide a method to retain this ability. Not to mention, the light dusting of Aurodium and gold for that anti glare and solar energy charge up.

There was also the consideration of being able to add Absorbital, a blaster proof substance over as an additional coat. What would really make this work, however, were the Girondium and colium for the ultra-high efficiency solar wires and cells in conjunction with the Aurodium.

As the going green technology continued to developed the production could be upped based on supply and demand.


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http://starwars.wiki...m/wiki/Aurodium
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Lommite
http://starwars.wiki.../wiki/Girondium
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Colium
http://starwars.wiki...wiki/Absorbital
http://starwars.wiki.../wiki/Glasteel�

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Earth Studies:
http://phys.org/news...power-gold.html
http://www.energymat...e-news/em4255/�
 

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