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Ask: Factory Talk Thread

Shawn Michaels

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Question, could I make two factory subs/dev threads for one thread that I retrieved a restricted material from? For instance, I'm making a pair of lightsabers and a set of armor from songsteel. Could I use the one thread i'm in to get it for both submissions?
 
Intent: To bring Balaya's original armor in line with factory restrictions

Development Thread: If Needed

Manufacturer: Thule Forge

Model: Black Blade Commander Armor

Affiliation: Sith Empire

Modularity: Yes

Production: Unique

Material: Turadium, Crystasteel, Durasteel, Sullust leather, Zoosha Fabric, Flexsteel, Zeyd-cloth, Shell Spider Silk, Armorweave

Description:
Boots: Black heeled thigh high boots made of Sullust leather; and weaved Turadium and mandalorian iron with spiked heels that contain retractable durasteel spikes for latching onto ledges and supporting her weight upside-down. The boots have a small lining of Zoosha Fabric that ends in tiny straps with loops for vials of poison and stimulants extending to a black Sullust leather thong weaved with more Turadium and mandalorian iron and small synth crystals over the more sensitive areas. With the upgrade of her wardrobe Balaya has made the boots modified with the heels getting a sharper blade that ejects more barbs to produce a better hold and can be detached and launched for a makeshift weapons. There has also been a pristine thin layer of Crystasteel over it adding more protection.
Heel: Ejection systems with barbed spike made for locking and bracing. Can be fired used as a weapon if standing above someone as it is made for puncturing into a ships hull.

Thong: Balaya's black leather and iron thong is a tease with a g-string in the back and a near visible triangle of leather and metal in the front with a flap of pearls and gems and crystals that can focus the force covering her lower regions from view. The threads of the thong create a illuminescence when it gets dark and she has been in the sun. The zooha fabric that covers the entirety of her body separates here and actually splits into two more sheaths that go down her legs.

Belt: A flexsteel belt wraps around the waist and holds an attachment of whips knives and utilities items including a Kyber Dart. Riding along the length of her clothing a spine protector travels from the neck collar down to the thong and the down two small metal lines to the backs of her boots with two sheaths for the Sc'rath blades. The spine protector leads up to a Sullust leather bra lined with mandalorian armor and Turadium.

Bra: The bra has small clasps for her lightdaggers on the back straps that vine between her breasts and come down with ease. While the cross hatched strings holding the bra tight squeeze a sholto lightsaber. The neck collar is made of Shell spider silk and can deflect blaster fire and vibroblades with another layer of Zoosha Fabric covering the chest and forearms. Two small cross wires lined with a three stone pendent, one is a crimson Veda pearl with two smaller maroon synth crystals that could be used in a lightsaber and act as a focus for force powers extend from the collar and drops to the collar bones. The bra itself has been modified to look more eloquent with designers from Extravagant Jeweled Brassieres and has kept the same specs as before with iron and Turadium but has gotten a small shielding generator built in that can stop for a time most projectiles and covers her entire body when activated making her shimmer with a reddish hue and it maintains from delicate threads woven a luminescence. The entire bra has a thin layer of Crystasteel over it adding protection and support. The middle rod holding the bra together is attached by a lightsaber hilt that is nestled comfortable between Balaya's breasts.

Gloves: Her gloves extend to the end of her forearms and are made of shell spider cloth weaved with mandalorian iron and Turadium. The right forearm has a clasp for her special lightsaber with an extended blade crystal. The gloves have been modified to have a thin layer of Crystasteel and luminescence to them in the dark while the fingers have signet rings and ornate jewels set into the steel and leather showing worlds that have been ruled and taken over.

Left Glove: The left glove has a set of the talons of her claw made from the heavier alloy in micro shards similar to how a crush gaunt functions without the strength enhancement. The talons have been increased in their size and strength as well as along the length of them given several jewels from captured planets. The underside of the glove now has a small launcher for Kyber darts and other poisons but mostly the small datapad containing small amounts of information and when she puts in the proper code grants her full control of the Dun Mok via slave circuits.

Right glove: The right glove has a elbow length leather sheath for her hand with a small launcher on the wrist for firing Kyber darts and a below the wrist blaster for sneak attacks. The glove like the other parts of her clothing has been modified and the launcher for the lightsaber made to act like a crossbow sending the saber whistling through the air and into the chest of an enemy. at the tip of the launcher is a device that activates the saber as it passes through and along the length of the glove are jewels and ornate bracelets with symbols from the Tapani Royal houses.

Head: Her hair has a broach of tiny crystals, jewel's, gems and diamonds falling over the left eye and down to her bangs framing her face and falling past her chin in tiny Solloops with crystals in the loop. The rest on the hair is held up in a bun by Zenji needles. Scattered in her hair are braids and jewels from slain jedi and their padawans with each coming from the killed child. Balaya has made an extra length of hair it seems from just the killed. On her forehead is a small ornate crown from Korriban she found that was from the original sith empire and has down the back of its two sides silka beads that run into her hair and slip through some braids making them look like apart of her hair.

Accessories: The chest and arms are covered with a top layer of Zoosha fabric and the clasps rest on the near invisible clothing. From her wrists a small circlet threads to a black cloak that rides along the length of her shoulders and connects to her neck on the top before forming a small mask that covers the throat and can be pulled over the mouth giving a delicate and eloquent look to the outfit. With the upgrades to her outfit Balaya has made around the talisman a beautiful leather and metal sheath that it looks like in is attached to and replicated it on her other arm exactly so it looks like part of her shoulder pauldrons and gloves both sides being decorated with jewels and gold. The replicated talisman is fake and serves no other purpose then simple decoration.

Hips: From her hips a small set of holsters hold two blasters for when eloquence is no longer needed and blood must be spilled. The duel blasters fire projectiles instead of energy bolts and can pierce most medium armors.. The holsters connect to thigh straps where
  • Right hip: A small dagger that has a canister of acidic liquid for punishment and torture
  • Left hip: A strap with several stiletto blades for use
Cloak: When Balaya travels to a planet she wears an Obsidian black cloak made of Zeyd-cloth with a lining of Shell Spider Silk for protection. The cloak has a second layer sown into the middle so it still looks eloquent like a coat made for royals but has the function of an all temperature cloak protecting from weather conditions.

Classification: Multipurpose

Weight: 25kg

Quality: 7

Other Feature(s):
Mobile armory:
  • Sith lanvarok
  • Flamethrower
  • Wrist mounted dart launcher
  • Blaster pistols
  • Wrist mounted blaster
  • Sc'rath blades
  • Molecular stiletto knives
  • Beskad
  • Battle axe
  • Lightwhips
  • Electro whips
  • Lightsabers
  • Shoto saber
  • Clawed hand
  • Poison tipped dagger

Equipment:
  • Wrist mounted datapad
  • Comlink
  • Synthetic crystals
  • Caries vials
  • Sith Poison Vials
  • Reinforced underwire

Alright I still have some work to do and edits to make but I am working to bring it in line with the factory. Ashin let it go for the time but my sith is going to be getting more active and a number of the materials are restricted now. I did an inventory or it and how it has come to be and will be working on the descriptions but would like to work with one if I can.
 

Nyxie

【夢狐】
Hey, my internet is acting up since I'm away from home for unforeseen circumstances requiring an exterminator. I'll make this brief.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/15939-alacheis-battle-armor/
I am wondering why my character's armor (plastic and titanium as with SW's other brilliant hybrids of non-similar materials lmao) weighs in at full at about 33.2 kilograms (73.2 pounds) and is primarily a limb-covering armor of the 4th grade with only minor platelets over specific parts of the harness that could even remotely be considered core body protection, all while the plates being listed as anti-ballistic (yes, my character is almost 7 feet tall, but read on and compare...),

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/16696-distas-embrace-heavy-armour-and-melee-items/
And this armor (thick durasteel plated in bronzium with electrum trim) which is basically plate mail weighs 20-22 and appears to cover... well, just about everything, and covers it solid... and it's grade 8. Oh, did I mention it weighs a minimum of 44.1 pounds? But wait, there's more! It's listed as multipurpose!

Is metal lighter than plastic in the galaxy far, far away? A type of steel lighter than titanium, even? Almost twice the coverage for about 66% the cost?! This is not the only armor I have seen with outstanding protection and only modest weight in comparison. I'm not trying to bash on other peoples' creations. To make a long story short, I feel short-changed considering it was a grader who told me to bump up the weight on mine, and I would humbly like one of three things:

Either I be allowed to upgrade my armor's protection grade from 4 to 5.5 and the grade 2 woven skin-suit to grade 3.
Or the weight of mine be reassessed properly so that all these creations compare more smoothly.
Edit: Or option three : don't approve things like they're candy? That stuff's pretty darn heavy irl!

Edit: Unless Durasteel is, like, lighter than carbon ceramic, in which case I admit damn if I'm not shut down quick. And yes, someone said he's a dwarf. True as that might be, it's still mathematically much more mass and considerably heavier materials, so it shouldn't be so light and easy to get around. The same goes for several others also already approved. :/
 
@[member="Asemir Lor'kora"]

Most likely, she was posting it here to get second opinions before actually posting it.

@[member="Balaya Zambrano"]

You're not gonna try and walk around with all those weapons at once, right?
 
Okay so long time ago I made this:

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9882-girth-of-gluttony/

However, upon its completion I neglected the detailing of what Droid Star Fighters it possessed. I was wondering if a role play would be needed for the construction of these Droid fighters designed specifically for this ship alone would be required? Also, since this ship is carried over in the grandfather system, if ever did I attempt to update it would I be required to bring it down to current stats for a ship of its size? The only thing I would be interested in editing in it would be the message at the top of the submission, the (WIP) Tag, and detailing what fighters are used for it.

Would all this be okay to accomplish or should it be left alone as is, and I just make a fighter that I would believe to fit the dimensions of what I would want for this ship?
 
@[member="Darth Voracitos"]

If you want to modify a submission, take a gander o'er here and specify what kind. You don't have to create an entirely new set of fighters, but the Sith Empire has a few Droid Starfighter models in their armory.
 
@[member="Balaya Zambrano"]

I hadn't realized you were posting your submission here for second opinions.

@[member="Balthazaar"]

You could, but you'd have to do it in a uniquely Star-Wars fashion. You'd also have to do it in such a way that it's not a copy of the Protoss. Ultimately, it'd be up to the decision of the RPJ that reviews your submission.
 
@[member="Balaya Zambrano"]

You might consider toning that down a little. I understand the title 'Walking Armory', but with that kind of gear loadout, you might as well bring the kitchen sink. If the average person carries a primary and a secondary weapon, then have two of each is a good functional 'Walking Armory' type. For specific scenario, you might walk around with 8 weapons or more, but for most day-to-day situations, it's wholly impractical to carry that many weapons.
 
Would a dev thread be required for a combination of my bodysuits armored sections (corset, bracers, mask) being used in combination with the Fringe's iron skin as the undersuit. I know Jacen made his armor by throwing the durasteel plates on it.

It would also have the basic sheaths for the swords, belt for saber and a cape cause capes are cool.
 
@[member="Shinjū Aÿasha"]

To the first, so long as both have been approved then no; they're in conjunction with one another, but they're still separate pieces of armour both of which are pre-approved.
 

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