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Submission Name: The Initium
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/57759-the-initium/
Summary of Modification: Updating it's description / The image hosting website I was using are greedy
Reason for Modification: The description was wrong and outdated. The picture needed to be changed.
Modification:
The Initium is an amalgamation of technologies developed by Alicia Drey and Circe Savan, who are joint partners in Emeritus Industries, the ship manufacturer that built this modified Star Courier from the orbital shipyards in the Tund system. It could also been seen as the successor to theScimitar, another modified Star Courier designed by the Dark Lord of the Sith Darth Tenebrous, which was used nearly five centuries previously.

It's Annihilator-class generator was taken from an Annihilator-class boarding shuttle that was designed by Alicia Drey. It's stygium crystals were obtained through a business transaction, when Darth Ayra met with Jaster Awaud. In return for the services of Chandrila Group, as well as a sum of credits, Ayra obtained the stygium she needed to power the Initium's cloak.

The design of the Initium included the Annihilator-class generator, so as to give it the ability to cloak. The antimatter generator at the back of theInitium powers the cloaking device, whilst supplying power to other systems including life support, impulse, hyperdrive, it's scanners and the portable dampening field invented by Alicia.

When the Initium is cloaked and has it's dampening field activated, the ship is nearly undetectable. Only the rare technology in the crystal gravfield trap would allow another ship to detect it due to the gravitational distortion the ship makes in realspace. The Initium focuses heavily on it's ability to be undetected and thus unnoticed by other ships. With no weapons or shields, a few choice shots from a starfighter or one precise hit from a capital ship would destroy it. Thus it was given a class 1.0 hyperdrive and an agility to evade another ships shots if it was detected.

It has a cockpit for flying and a small cargo bay area that could be used to carry small items or for somewhere to sleep. It was built by Emeritus Industries in secret on the order of Alicia Drey in the Tund system. Seeking to replace the Niathal-class transport she had brought from Jorus Merrill, the idea behind the Initium was conceived due to the clandestine nature of her work, leading a double life as a Sith Lord in secret and business woman/inventor in public. She once considered handing the ship over to Jaron Lesan, a Dark Jedi who aspired to become a Sith Lord, after he successfully extracted a Katak and Qixoni Lightsaber crystal for her research into melding crystals together with the dark side. However, the ship did not end up in his hands.

In 847 ABY, Alicia Drey passed away and was buried upon her homeworld of Chandrila. After completing the ancient Sith ritual of Transfer Essence upon a Jedi Knight called Ella Nova, the Initium became the property of the Jedi Knight whilst the Sith Lord lived on in her disguise. It is currently in her control.

Initium can be translated as "go in, make a start", which Ayra believed to be a suitable name at the time of it's construction.


Please replace top link with this link instead -> http://imgur.com/a/y1GOd.png
 
Submission Name: Modified Scion-class Stealth Corvette
Link to Submission: [ x ]
Summary of Modification: Changing ownership.
Reason for Modification: Ovmar hasn't been active in ages and I have been using the Scion in private threads with Cerbera for a while now. Realized I should reflect that in the submission as well.
Modification: Change affiliation from Jared Ovmar to Cerbera.
 
Submission Name:

Defiant class battleship.

Star Fighter, Cǎlder mit Arkhan (lit. Sword of Might)

Sajnen Star Fighter R. (Starchaser Sajna R.)


Link to Submission:

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/66128-daedalus-battleshipstarship-or-bc-304/?p=985829

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/66519-c%C7%8Elder-mit-arkhan-pronounced-call-der-mit-ar-can

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/67465-sajnen-star-fighter-r-pronounced-sae-nen/


Summary of Modification:

Images no longer on Photo Bucket site. Moved to imgur.com and links need to be updated on above submissions.

Reason for Modification:

Photo Bucket which I was using to host the majority of my images did a dirty on me. They now charge to use their services if one wants to link images uploaded on their website to somewhere else. Like in my case here on SWRP Chaos. Clearly not something I'm willing to do given there are many other free image hosting sites better than Photo Bucket out there. I've move my images to imgur.com and then relinked most of the images from my pages on SWRP with the new links pointing to imgur.com. However I cannot do it for things that were posted to the factory for example which are locked. Therefore any images on those pages now show a picture that shows like a speedo like picture and the comment saying 'Please update your account to enable 3rd party hosting."

Modification:

Need to modify all picture links on the above listed links to point to the same images that were there originally now on imgur.com
 
[member="Kyrana Gould"] Both have been archived.

[member="Krayzen Dratos"] Updated both, however I cannot remove prior manufacturers, only add new ones.

[member="Arisa Yune"] Updated.

[member="Sieb Tevv"] Updated.

[member="Jessica Med-Beq"] Updated.

[member="Yula Knezevic"] You have two requests that are the exact same link, please correct the second link so that I can update it.

[member="Ella Nova"] Updated however that image link appears to be bad.

[member="Cerbera"] Updated.

[member="Kixi Rajki"] I cannot update the images in the submission without the new image links. Please provide them.

[member="Charzon Loulan"] These are under review.
 
[member="Charzon Loulan"]

These submissions are changing weapon systems, weaknesses, and other information that effectively change the submission enough to warrant a resubmission. You are welcome to resubmit these for review, but I don't feel comfortable changing several aspects of a single submission so much so that it effectively changes the ship(s).
 

Klesta

The King of Ergonomic Assessments
[member="Jamie Pyne"] So there was a bug somewhere... I have to fill out the form in full once again.

Submission name: Chiloon-class fighter/bomber
Link: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/108153-chiloon-fighterbomber
Summary of modification: Affiliation change
Reason for modification: It has actually been used by other factions in IC threads
Modification:

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A Chiloon with a Mk84 about to be dropped

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To provide a ground attack craft
  • Image Source: Military.com
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Restricted Missions: N/A
  • Primary Source: A-10 Thunderbolt
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Ringovinda StarYards
  • Model: Chiloon fighter/bomber
  • Affiliation: Open Market
  • Production: Mass-Produced
  • Material: Ditanium hull, quadanium frame
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Fighter/bomber
  • Length: 12m
  • Width: 12m
  • Height: 3.5m
  • Armament: Average
  • 2 Kaeshana hypervelocity cannons (counts for 4 laser cannons)
    1 Guernica ordnance launcher (counts for 2 bomb bays)
  • Defenses: Average
  • Squadron Count: 12
  • Maneuverability Rating: Average
  • Speed Rating: Average
  • Hyperdrive Class: 1
SPECIAL FEATURES
Strengths:
  • Can drop heavy bombs
  • Slim flank profile
  • Ordnance modularity
Weaknesses:
  • No particle shields
  • Limited HVC ammunition
  • Short-range hyperdrive
  • Exposed engines
Description: The need for the Chiloon arose from the eponymous Chiloon Rift campaign, when it was found that the TIE Reaver was vulnerable to spinning and was too sluggish to be of much use. In the Chiloon, the cockpit is placed forward, with the Guernica bomb bay being behind the cockpit and the reactor right behind it. Saod Guernica can hold proton torpedoes, proton rockets, concussion missiles as well as various sizes of proton bombs, ranging from the standard (light) proton bomb to the heavy proton bomb (worth four standard proton bombs for bookkeeping purposes). On the wing blisters are the primary weapons of the craft: two 20mm hypervelocity cannons outfitted with HEAP (high explosive armor-piercing) 20x139mm shells, capable of penetrating up to 100mm of duracrete, with the wings housing hundreds of rounds of ammunition (ca. 400 rounds per tube). However, due to the finite supply of ammunition, the ammunition must be resupplied between each sortie. Due to its reliance on projectiles, the Chiloon also eschews particle shields. Also, its limited fuel tank means that it can only last so long in a hyperspace flight before it needs to refuel.

However, its exposed engines at the rear make it a liability in a stern chase: a skilled enemy can aim at the engines and swat out a Chiloon of the sky in a stern chase. That, even though the Chiloon is not the fastest nor the most maneuverable, it can keep up with the T-70 X-Wing (albeit barely). Nevertheless the Chiloon can accomplish a wide variety of aerial missions: dogfights, ground attack (strafing or bombing).


Consumables: 3 weeks
Crew: 1
Cargo capacity: 100 kg
Hyperdrive range: 5,000 light-years


Submission name: Yutan-class fighter/bomber
Link: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/103378-yutan-class-stealth-fighterbomber/
Summary of modification: Affiliation change
Reason for modification: The Commonwealth is dead IC
Modification:

star_wars_fighter_by_warp_zero.jpg


A one-seater Yutan

Image Source: [X]
Affiliation: Closed-market
Manufacturer: Ringovinda StarYards
Model: Yutan-class stealth fighter/bomber
Modularity: Ordnance, one or two-seater
Production: Limited
Material: Quadanium hull, ditanium frame
Classification: Stealth fighter/bomber
Length: 12m
Height: 3m
Width: 6m
Armament: Rating 14
2 Kaeshana hypervelocity cannons (counts for 4 laser cannons)
1 Guernica ordnance launcher (counts for 2 bomb bays)
Defense: 12
Squadron Count: 10
Special Features:
Manoeuvrability Rating: 3 (4 if cloaked)
Speed Rating: 3 (4 if cloaked)
Hyperdrive Class: 1
Strengths:
  • Modularity of ordnance
  • Large ordnance capacity
  • Slim flank profile
  • Strong hull
  • Can cloak
Weaknesses:
  • Limited ammunition
  • If the magnetic signature is detected, the cloaking device can be defeated
  • Large target if an enemy comes from the top or bottom
  • Short-range hyperdrive
  • No particle shields
Description: Named after the last capital of the Third Republic, the Yutan is the product of the Commonwealth's need for attack craft that can cloak so as to conduct surgical, stealth strikes. Its Guernica ordnance launcher allows it to be outfitted with a number of different weapons for flexible mission profiles: for example it can be used for bombing targets, engaging combat patrols. Thanks to its waste heat recovery devices, the Yutan can keep the life support and other avionics supplied with power so long as the engines or reactor still work. However, due to the short range of the hyperdrive (5000 light-years), it is best to operate the fighter a short distance from the home base or from a carrier. Due to the high energy consumption of the cloaking device, the fighter slows down when the cloaking device is in use. To cut on maintenance costs, 2 hypervelocity cannons have been installed, providing the tactical equivalent of 4 standard laser cannons. Because the Yutan depends so much on projectile weapons, particle shields are eschewed. Nevertheless, pilots can also use flares to get missiles off them. Also, the Yutans are available in two versions: one-seater for normal operation and two-seater, used for training purposes.

Consumables: 3 weeks
Crew: 1
Cargo capacity: 100 kg
Hyperdrive range: 5,000 light-years
Development Threads: (30 posts total)
Intent: To provide the board with an elite, cloaking fighter
Primary Source: N/A
 
[member="Jamie Pyne"]

Here are the new image links for each subsequent link. Please put in the exact order that I have put them in.

Defiant class battleship.
http://starwarsrp.ne...c-304/?p=985829

Image 1
http://i.imgur.com/ZPBvZRl.jpg

Image 2
http://i.imgur.com/KG0rKRf.jpg


Star Fighter, Cǎlder mit Arkhan (lit. Sword of Might)
http://starwarsrp.ne...-der-mit-ar-can

Image 1
http://i.imgur.com/CHIUvQI.jpg

Image 2
http://i.imgur.com/G1pEwyz.jpg

Image 3
http://i.imgur.com/ZiiIsN5.jpg

Image 4
http://i.imgur.com/r3MHkl0.jpg


Sajnen Star Fighter R. (Starchaser Sajna R.)
http://starwarsrp.ne...ounced-sae-nen/

Image 1
http://i.imgur.com/aCsmzyX.jpg
 
Submission name: C-9981-class artillery frigate
Link: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/113317-c-9981-class-artillery-frigate/
Summary of modification: Dimension size changes
Reason for modification: The old dimensions are the result of an oversight in the original submission process and the new ones reflect the dimensions of the original chassis
Modification:

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A C-9981 in flight

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Ringovinda StarYards
  • Model: C-9981-class artillery frigate
  • Affiliation: Open Market
  • Production: Minor
  • Material: Durasteel hull
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
SPECIAL FEATURES

[*]Navigation:

[*]Defenses:

[*]
Electronic warfare:

Strengths:
  • Heavy long-range firepower concentrated in one turret
  • High point-defense
  • Can land on planets
  • Electronic warfare capability
Weaknesses:
  • Slow and ponderous
  • Once the armor has taken a hit, another hit at that same location may penetrate the armor
  • Firepower consolidated in a single hardpoint: it is thus vulnerable to other corvettes and frigates capable of outrunning the main battery's traverse and also, if that hardpoint is destroyed, the ship loses its ability to effectively fight capital ships
  • Once the jammers are active, its own communications are jammed
Description: While the monitor recipe has proven its worth in the Serenno campaign, the Skor had one major flaw: the ammunition is limited, and hence could only last for a limited time on a battlefield. To this end, the venerable C-9980, which was used over Ord Radama, was extensively redesigned: its entire anti-capital ship armament was replaced by one hardpoint sporting a heavy long-range turbolaser or ion cannon that is typically used for surface-to-orbit fire. This arrangement gives rise to two subclasses, identical in all respects except for its main battery: the T-subclass, which has an Ison surface-to-orbit turbolaser installed, and the I-subclass, which has a Hoth surface-to-orbit ion cannon fitted, both of which have the same weakness of it having slow traverse and elevation speeds, causing the C-9981 to have the same weakness as the Skor or any other artillery ship of that kind: it is vulnerable to corvettes and frigates that can outrun its main gun's traverse. In addition, an enemy that can destroy its main hardpoint will make this ship nothing more than a glorified anti-starfighter ship provided that it survives the assault.

Also, with the freed space from assault concussion missile ammunition, a suite of electronic warfare implements have been installed, such as the hyperwave hammer array and frequency jammer, effectively preventing an enemy from communicating using subspace and hyperwave means, at the cost of jamming their own communications using these media, forcing the ship to rely on tightbeam transmissions from other sources to communicate. Even then it is not meant to be a ship to be deployed on the front line in battle.

With the tensor field generator and anti-concussion field allowing it to maintain hull integrity in flight, it also features another defense, hitherto little-known in space combat: explosive-reactive armor, which enhances its defense against kinetic weapons but also creates a weakness upon taking a hit: it creates a weak spot that can be exploited by other ships. Firing at that same spot again will likely penetrate the armor, which can cause some problems for commanders using those ships, and potentially cause a reactor breach.

Consumables: 3 months
Crew: 500
Passenger count: 200
Vehicle count: 2 MTTs and 12 main battle tanks (such as AATs)
Cargo capacity: 800 tons

If that doesn't work, I would like to archive the sub...
 

Yidhra

Mars Tsosûtiyakûtiyuska
Submission Name: Udraitor
Link to Submission: Here

Summary of Modification: Changing Affiliation to the Sith Empire
Reason for Modification: TRE went minor, Yidhra switched factions
Modification:


Affiliation: The Sith Empire (Yidhra, PCs with FA permission)
 

Gilamar Skirata

The most important step is always the next one
Submission Name:
BBC-105 Mythosaur-Class Super Carrier
Link to Submission:
LINK
Summary of Modification:
Due to some confusion, the Affiliation of the submission is being changed to The Mando'ade. Also the image should be switched with the new one in the spoiler
Reason for Modification:
Someone during a dominion tried to deny the faction use of its ship because the affiliation was outdated post a complicated name change. Also Photobucket started to suck.
Modification:
Change Affiliation from Mandalorians to The Mando'ade
Swap image

BBC-105 Mythosaur-Class Super Carrier
 
[member="Gilamar Skirata"] Updated the image however the starship cannot be transferred per factory rules.


Cira said:
If a Major Faction is recalled, merged into another Major Faction, or drops to minor, any Flagships created must be decommissioned and archived. No Flagships are transferable.
[member="Lord Mettallum"] Updated.
 
[member="Gilamar Skirata"] | [member="Cira"]

Because as of Factory 4.0, any submissions wishing to be modified will need to follow current factory standards. Previously submitted items, while grandfathered in their current state, are not granted permission to circumvent current standards if changes need to be made. Thus, in its current state, that starship exceeds the size limitations for a destroyer at 3.5km. It is categorized under flagship rules, and cannot be edited post-collapse of a major faction.
 

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