Taeli Raaf
Bookworm
[member="The Gray Assassin"]
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Taeli Raaf
Bookworm
[member="The Gray Assassin"]
Alrighty so strength is usually dictated to be the size of an individual unit of the group, not the whole thing. In this case, you said there were only 150 men total. Do you have any threads focused on the expansion of this unit to a full size army group since that it is a bit of jump in numbers?
Alrighty so strength is usually dictated to be the size of an individual unit of the group, not the whole thing. In this case, you said there were only 150 men total. Do you have any threads focused on the expansion of this unit to a full size army group since that it is a bit of jump in numbers?
Lord Ajihad
I use Aristois
[member="Taeli Raaf"]
Actually, it just so happens I have one ongoing right now. The Black Empire is committing genocide on some backwater planet, and some of the citizens are being dragged off and forced to become soldiers.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/92763-blowing-the-house-down-black-empire/#entry1355498
Post seven is where they're being dragged off. Though I'm sure it'll need more development than that, which I'll likely do in later threads
Actually, it just so happens I have one ongoing right now. The Black Empire is committing genocide on some backwater planet, and some of the citizens are being dragged off and forced to become soldiers.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/92763-blowing-the-house-down-black-empire/#entry1355498
Post seven is where they're being dragged off. Though I'm sure it'll need more development than that, which I'll likely do in later threads
Submission Name: Jasmine Lancaster
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/59969-jasmine-lancaster/
Reason for Modification: Is no longer an NPC, but a PC.
Modification: Archive the submission.
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/59969-jasmine-lancaster/
Reason for Modification: Is no longer an NPC, but a PC.
Modification: Archive the submission.
Quietus
Hunting Again
[member="Erik"]
Done.
Done.
Bombshell Genius
Submission name: Jessica Med-Beq
Link to submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/89027-jessica-med-beq/
Reason for modification: Converted Jessica from NPC to PC status
Modification: Archive the submission
Link to submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/89027-jessica-med-beq/
Reason for modification: Converted Jessica from NPC to PC status
Modification: Archive the submission
Quietus
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[member="Charzon Loulan"]
Done.
Done.
Well-Known Member
Submission Name: Resu
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/399-resu/
Reason for Modification: Following some more events, new factions within the Resu have risen, new biological factors have occurred, and in general it just needs a touch up.
Modification: I would like to request it be unlocked for edits, the submission itself is quite extensive, and as the last time I did this, I'd like to handle it personally
AND
Submission Name: Realm of the Resu
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/398-realm-of-the-resu/
Reason for Modification: For much the same reasons as above, I didn't even update the system when I last updated the Resu, so it is especially behind the ball.
Modification: As with the above, I would like to edit both submissions side by side personally, if you would be so kind as to have them unlocked for me please
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/399-resu/
Reason for Modification: Following some more events, new factions within the Resu have risen, new biological factors have occurred, and in general it just needs a touch up.
Modification: I would like to request it be unlocked for edits, the submission itself is quite extensive, and as the last time I did this, I'd like to handle it personally
AND
Submission Name: Realm of the Resu
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/398-realm-of-the-resu/
Reason for Modification: For much the same reasons as above, I didn't even update the system when I last updated the Resu, so it is especially behind the ball.
Modification: As with the above, I would like to edit both submissions side by side personally, if you would be so kind as to have them unlocked for me please
B E A C O N
Submission Name: Sith Spirit of Silara Kuhn
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/64023-sith-spirit-of-silara-kuhn/
Reason for Modification: I'm writing the character again.
Modification: I would like to request the archival of the NPC submission, it no longer applies.
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/64023-sith-spirit-of-silara-kuhn/
Reason for Modification: I'm writing the character again.
Modification: I would like to request the archival of the NPC submission, it no longer applies.
Quietus
Hunting Again
[member="Silara Kuhn"]
Done.
Done.
Thoja Arlos
Grand Marshal Contemplation
Submission Name: 228th Black Operations Division - Field Operatives Sector
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/84782-228th-black-operations-division-field-operatives-sector/
Reason for Modification: Need to update the information due to change of faction and advancement in tech
Modification: I would like the unit to unlocked for edit as I'd like to add quite a few things
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/84782-228th-black-operations-division-field-operatives-sector/
Reason for Modification: Need to update the information due to change of faction and advancement in tech
Modification: I would like the unit to unlocked for edit as I'd like to add quite a few things
Komo
OOC account
Submission Name: The Firebats
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/68771-the-firebats/
Reason for Modification: Changed affiliation/loyalties
Modification: Change affiliation to just 'Greta Kohler'
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/68771-the-firebats/
Reason for Modification: Changed affiliation/loyalties
Modification: Change affiliation to just 'Greta Kohler'
Quietus
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[member="Thoja Arlos"]
Your submission will be moved back into the Judgement section for NPCs. After you have finalized your edits please tag me and I will assign a new CJ to re-judge the changes.
Your submission will be moved back into the Judgement section for NPCs. After you have finalized your edits please tag me and I will assign a new CJ to re-judge the changes.
Name: 228th Field Operatives
Intent: To take on Black Ops missions for The Galactic Republic
Affiliation: The Galactic Republic
Availability: Unique
Quality: A
Type: Infantry
Strength: 50
Description: When the 228th Black Operations Division was established, it was split into 3 sectors. The most elite, and classified, sector was the Field Operatives Sector (FOS). The FOS were men and women who had shown outstanding ability in the field, and were given high level training to accompany the new position. The FOS is relatively small, with only 50 operatives at any given time. They are led directly by General Thoja Arlos, and have access to specialist equipment, such as the Oblivion Semi Automatic Pistol. Each member is given a callsign, and the FOS is split into squads of 5. Each squad is led by an operative with 10+ years of experience in the 228th.
Links:
http://starwarsrp.ne...-stealth-armor/ (Still in development)
http://starwarsrp.ne...ting-of-agents/
http://starwarsrp.ne...tomatic-pistol/
http://starwarsrp.ne...n-combat-knife/
http://starwarsrp.ne...-assault-rifle/
Intent: To take on Black Ops missions for The Galactic Republic
Affiliation: The Galactic Republic
Availability: Unique
Quality: A
Type: Infantry
Strength: 50
Description: When the 228th Black Operations Division was established, it was split into 3 sectors. The most elite, and classified, sector was the Field Operatives Sector (FOS). The FOS were men and women who had shown outstanding ability in the field, and were given high level training to accompany the new position. The FOS is relatively small, with only 50 operatives at any given time. They are led directly by General Thoja Arlos, and have access to specialist equipment, such as the Oblivion Semi Automatic Pistol. Each member is given a callsign, and the FOS is split into squads of 5. Each squad is led by an operative with 10+ years of experience in the 228th.
Links:
http://starwarsrp.ne...-stealth-armor/ (Still in development)
http://starwarsrp.ne...ting-of-agents/
http://starwarsrp.ne...tomatic-pistol/
http://starwarsrp.ne...n-combat-knife/
http://starwarsrp.ne...-assault-rifle/
Quietus
Hunting Again
[member="Greta Kohler"]
Done.
Done.
Submission Name: The 6-4
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/98981-the-6-4/
Reason for Modification: Change the fact they solely work for the Commonwealth
Modification:
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/98981-the-6-4/
Reason for Modification: Change the fact they solely work for the Commonwealth
Modification:
Name: The 6-4
Intent: Janice Lastimosa's personal squad of elite Mercenaries she has come across and wants to fight with.
Affiliation: Janice Lastimosa, The Commonwealth
Availability: Unique
Quality: B
Type: Infantry
Strength: Squad size of 5
Description: The 6-4 is an elite group of Mercenaries that Janice Lastimosa brought together to make a elite squad. These Mercenaries have either fought with or against Lastimosa, and she gave them invites due to their skills. The 6-4 use standard Commonwealth gear as that is what Lastimosa has access to, but they are very battle tested. This group has become a family for Janice and the others as they all are Mercenaries so to them this is the closest thing they all can get now. They are Mercenaries, so they do need to get paid, and they solely work for the Commonwealth. Janice is the one to approve the contracts, they sometimes work for the military of the Commonwealth, but it is known they will work for private interests inside the Commonwealth as well .
The 6-4 is not exclusive, they tend to be inclusive, but there will only be five members no more no less. If one retires, dies, or leaves for any reason, Janice finds a new member to replace them. In the unit history, Janice has to replace three members due to death. The only member Janice will trust with any information about things outside the Commonwealth or her own history is Gates. The 6-4 also uses a repainted Scythe, the colors of the 6-4 are grayish blue and brown. All the members armors are the unit colors.
Roster:
Leader: Janice Lastimosa
Squad Leader
Tactician
Pilot
Second: Miranda Gates
Janice's Second in Command
Tech expert, Computer Expert
Cybernetic implants
Members:
Daryll Cobb - Heavy Weapons, Veteran, Engineer.
Fiona Ryan -Sniper, Linguist, Stealth Expert.
Tyrell Himata Rifleman, Explosives Expert,
Links: None at the time
Intent: Janice Lastimosa's personal squad of elite Mercenaries she has come across and wants to fight with.
Affiliation: Janice Lastimosa, The Commonwealth
Availability: Unique
Quality: B
Type: Infantry
Strength: Squad size of 5
Description: The 6-4 is an elite group of Mercenaries that Janice Lastimosa brought together to make a elite squad. These Mercenaries have either fought with or against Lastimosa, and she gave them invites due to their skills. The 6-4 use standard Commonwealth gear as that is what Lastimosa has access to, but they are very battle tested. This group has become a family for Janice and the others as they all are Mercenaries so to them this is the closest thing they all can get now. They are Mercenaries, so they do need to get paid, and they solely work for the Commonwealth. Janice is the one to approve the contracts, they sometimes work for the military of the Commonwealth, but it is known they will work for private interests inside the Commonwealth as well .
The 6-4 is not exclusive, they tend to be inclusive, but there will only be five members no more no less. If one retires, dies, or leaves for any reason, Janice finds a new member to replace them. In the unit history, Janice has to replace three members due to death. The only member Janice will trust with any information about things outside the Commonwealth or her own history is Gates. The 6-4 also uses a repainted Scythe, the colors of the 6-4 are grayish blue and brown. All the members armors are the unit colors.
Roster:
Leader: Janice Lastimosa
Squad Leader
Tactician
Pilot
Second: Miranda Gates
Janice's Second in Command
Tech expert, Computer Expert
Cybernetic implants
Members:
Daryll Cobb - Heavy Weapons, Veteran, Engineer.
Fiona Ryan -Sniper, Linguist, Stealth Expert.
Tyrell Himata Rifleman, Explosives Expert,
Links: None at the time
Alric Kuhn
Handsome K'lor'slug
Submission Name: Belegost
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/84868-belegost/
Reason for Modification: Better Picture
Modification:
Replace picture with this;
Replace Source with; "Bartok Castle for The last Knights" By Emmanual Shiu
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/84868-belegost/
Reason for Modification: Better Picture
Modification:
Replace picture with this;
Replace Source with; "Bartok Castle for The last Knights" By Emmanual Shiu
Quietus
Hunting Again
[member="Alric Kuhn"]
Done
Done
Quietus
Hunting Again
[member="Janice Lastimosa"]
There is an issue with your requested modification. Your request itself is not clear:
"Change the fact they solely work for the Commonwealth"
Is this to change it to that they DO or DO NOT work solely for the Commonwealth.
Furthermore the following contradicts itself:
You need to decide if their sole contractor is the Commonwealth or not. If the SOLE CONTRACTOR is the Commonwealth, then they DO NOT take work outside of the Commonwealth, even if said work does not go against the Commonwealth itself. The very definition of a sole contractor is that you ONLY take work from THAT specified contractor and nothing else.
If you want them to retain the ability to take other jobs beyond the Commonwealth, then I think what you are looking for is naming the Commonwealth as a major contractor - as in, the majority of their work comes from jobs charged by the Commonwealth, but they also take work elsewhere.
Figure out what it is that you want and let me know.
There is an issue with your requested modification. Your request itself is not clear:
"Change the fact they solely work for the Commonwealth"
Is this to change it to that they DO or DO NOT work solely for the Commonwealth.
Furthermore the following contradicts itself:
You need to decide if their sole contractor is the Commonwealth or not. If the SOLE CONTRACTOR is the Commonwealth, then they DO NOT take work outside of the Commonwealth, even if said work does not go against the Commonwealth itself. The very definition of a sole contractor is that you ONLY take work from THAT specified contractor and nothing else.
If you want them to retain the ability to take other jobs beyond the Commonwealth, then I think what you are looking for is naming the Commonwealth as a major contractor - as in, the majority of their work comes from jobs charged by the Commonwealth, but they also take work elsewhere.
Figure out what it is that you want and let me know.
Oh that slipped past me, yes I want them to work solely for the Commonwealth I'll edit it. I have edited it [member="Silencia"]Silencia said:
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