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Janice Lastimosa

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Submission Name: The 6-4
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/98981-the-6-4/
Reason for Modification: No long Affiliated with the Commonwealth
Modification:
Name: The 6-4

Intent: Janice Lastimosa's personal squad of elite Mercenaries she has come across and wants to fight with.

Affiliation: Janice Lastimosa



Availability: Unique



Quality: B



Type: Infantry



Strength: Squad size of 5



Description: The 6-4 is an elite group of Mercenaries that Janice Lastimosa brought together to make a elite squad. These Mercenaries have either fought with or against Lastimosa, and she gave them invites due to their skills. The 6-4 use slug throwers, like the Trandoshan, and Tusken Raiders as they were easy to come by, and cheep. But even with old weaponry, they are still battle tested. This group has become a family for Janice and the others as they all are Mercenaries so to them this is the closest thing they all can get now. They are Mercenaries, so they do need to get paid, they will work for the highest bidder, but once they set a contract, they will never betray it.



The 6-4 is not exclusive, they tend to be inclusive, but there will only be five members no more no less. If one retires, dies, or leaves for any reason, Janice finds a new member to replace them. In the unit history, Janice has to replace three members due to death. The only member Janice will trust with any information about things outside the Commonwealth or her own history is Gates. The 6-4 also uses a repainted U-wing, they were able to get off the black market, the colors of the 6-4 are grayish blue and brown. All the members armors are the unit colors.



Roster:



Leader: Janice Lastimosa

Squad Leader
Tactician
Pilot

Second: Miranda Gates

Janice's Second in Command
Tech expert, Computer Expert
Cybernetic implants

Members:

Daryll Cobb - Heavy Weapons, Veteran, Engineer.
Fiona Ryan -Sniper, Linguist, Stealth Expert.
Tyrell Himata Rifleman, Explosives Expert,









Links: None at the time
 

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Ugohr Poof said:
Submission name: Rings of the Lord
Link to submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/88414-rings-of-the-lord/
Reason for modification: The unit has acquired battlefield experience
Modification: Increase in quality level from C to A (elite)
Pertinent development threads:
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New submision:

Name: Rings of the Lord
Intent: Background units for Ugohr Poof
Affiliation: Galactic Alliance
Availability: Unique
Quality: A - Elite
Type: Armored minesweepers
Strength: At full strength, the unit would comprise 12 tanks
Description: A volunteer unit of minesweepers raised on Ringo Vinda, the Rings of the Lord were trained in motorized minesweeping and in tank combat due to the nature of the tanks they use, that didn't want to sit around waiting for Ringo Vinda to be attacked on the ground to fight the One Sith. Because of their dual minesweeping-armor duties, they are making use of the Zamboni minesweeping main battle tank so that they can carry out both duties without having to change vehicles. As for transportation from a planet to another, they use two Kamek-class medium transports, each of which carrying six tanks apiece. Of course, an armored unit is not without its sidearms: whereas all the non-Force-sensitives were equipped with a M837 "Riposte" blaster sidearm, Ugohr, as the sole Jedi serving in the unit, uses an orange lightsaber with a black core instead.

With 48 sentients that actively fight and man the tanks, plus a 20-sentient-strong reserve, and another 20 droids that tend to the equipment and the needs of the sentients that fight within the unit, they were but, since the Galactic Alliance has very few minesweeping units, they constantly hop from battlefield to battlefield, with their former base of Ringo Vinda not being considered as a base anymore. The 68 sentients are a mixture of humans, Jawas and Gungans.

Having served with distinction on Malastare and Coruscant, as well as Dahomey, they remain, to this day, the elite (and perhaps only) minesweeping unit in the Galactic Alliance's ground army.
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I appreciate the effort that has gone into this, but you can only promote one quality level at a time. This is approved for promotion to "B" quality. Keep in mind, as well, that the higher in quality you go, the smaller the quantity in strength. "A" quality is reserved for your absolute elite specialists, and not for every rank and file in the group.
 

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[member="Darth Seraphic"]

I have seen your mod request and I am not ignoring it. We have rules regarding mod requests and edits on approved Submissions relative to requiring permission from the original submitter to do so. I am discussing with my team your rights to do this considering the status of the original submitter in this particular case. Please bear with me.
 

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Veiere Arenais said:
Submission Name: 501st Legion
Link to Submission: Click Here.

Reason for Modification:
Change of Ownership,
Change of faction Affiliation.

See here and here.

See here for the In-Character change of Command over the 501st Legion.

Modification:
Change of Ownership from [member="Darth Arcis"] to [member="Veiere Arenais"].
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I see you have permission from [member="Judas Foster"] in one of the aforementioned linked threads.

You have not identified what the new faction affiliation is, however. Additionally, if you could write up a summary of the IC events that took place and made this change of ownership and affiliation possible so that I can add it to the history of the submission.
 

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Janice Lastimosa said:
Submission Name: The 6-4
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/98981-the-6-4/
Reason for Modification: No long Affiliated with the Commonwealth
Modification:
Name: The 6-4

Intent: Janice Lastimosa's personal squad of elite Mercenaries she has come across and wants to fight with.

Affiliation: Janice Lastimosa



Availability: Unique



Quality: B



Type: Infantry



Strength: Squad size of 5



Description: The 6-4 is an elite group of Mercenaries that Janice Lastimosa brought together to make a elite squad. These Mercenaries have either fought with or against Lastimosa, and she gave them invites due to their skills. The 6-4 use standard Commonwealth gear as that is what Lastimosa has access to, but they are very battle tested. This group has become a family for Janice and the others as they all are Mercenaries so to them this is the closest thing they all can get now. They are Mercenaries, so they do need to get paid, they will work for the highest bidder, but once they set a contract, they will never betray it.



The 6-4 is not exclusive, they tend to be inclusive, but there will only be five members no more no less. If one retires, dies, or leaves for any reason, Janice finds a new member to replace them. In the unit history, Janice has to replace three members due to death. The only member Janice will trust with any information about things outside the Commonwealth or her own history is Gates. The 6-4 also uses a repainted U-wing, they were able to get off the black market, the colors of the 6-4 are grayish blue and brown. All the members armors are the unit colors.



Roster:



Leader: Janice Lastimosa

Squad Leader
Tactician
Pilot

Second: Miranda Gates

Janice's Second in Command
Tech expert, Computer Expert
Cybernetic implants

Members:

Daryll Cobb - Heavy Weapons, Veteran, Engineer.
Fiona Ryan -Sniper, Linguist, Stealth Expert.
Tyrell Himata Rifleman, Explosives Expert,









Links: None at the time
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If they are no longer affiliated with the Commonwealth then why are they still using Commonwealth gear?
 

Janice Lastimosa

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Silencia said:
If they are no longer affiliated with the Commonwealth then why are they still using Commonwealth gear?
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Made the extra modification of changing their gear. [member="Silencia"]
 

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Darth Seraphic said:
[member="Silencia"]

I understand! :)
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We will be sticking by the rules. In order to fulfill a sub mod for a submission that is not your own you need explicit permission from the original creator to do so. This does not mean that your creations cannot exist on the planet for story purposes, they just won't be recorded in the planet submission.
 

WolfMortum

OOC Account
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[member="Silencia"]


Silencia said:
I see you have permission from [member="Judas Foster"] in one of the aforementioned linked threads.

You have not identified what the new faction affiliation is, however. Additionally, if you could write up a summary of the IC events that took place and made this change of ownership and affiliation possible so that I can add it to the history of the submission.
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Thank you for your reply!

Sorry I haven't responded sooner, this time of the year has me all over the place.

Submission Name: 501st Legion
Link to Submission: Click Here.

Reason for Modification:
Change of Ownership,
Change of faction Affiliation.

See here and here.

See here for the In-Character change of Command over the 501st Legion.

Modification:
Change of Ownership from Darth Arcis to Veiere Arenais.
Faction Affiliation change to: Silver Jedi Order

Summary of Events:

During the battle of Atrisia, the 501st Legion led under Darth Mephirium were stationed to protect the civilians and the goals of the Sith Lord and his fellow Council. With the impending retaliation from the Galactic Alliance due to the presence of the Sith upon the world, Cyril Grayson (Darth Mephirium) called to Veiere Arenais for support, the Jedi Knight having become a loyal friend during the last great battle of Mimban under the Galactic Republic and the Jedi Order there.

The Attack of the Galactic Alliance proved too great to deter and in an act of desperation, the six Sith Lords conjured a force storm to keep the Alliance at bay while the royal family along with Cyril Grayson and his allies encountered rival force users. In the fight that ensued, Cyril Grayson gave his life for the effort but not before forfeiting all his command codes and power of authority to Veiere so that the Jedi could continue to fight for the peace that Cyril had sought to achieve.

The 501st Legion were commanded then to evacuate all personnel and abandon the war-front, Veiere believing that, following the death of his brother in arms, the continued battle would only result in further death and destruction of the world.

Upon returning to Commenor, his home-world, the confirmation of the madame president's abduction then sparked a whole new conflict and in seeking Commenor's allies out, Veiere reached out to distant friends in the Silver Jedi Order. There the 501st Legion he knew could replenish and recover from the recent conflicts, the Chimaera be seen to necessary repairs while under Veiere's command, seek to establish the whereabouts and the return of [member="Lady Kay"].
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I do hope this is sufficient though of course, do tell if I am missing anything and I'll get right on it ASAP.

Thank you, again :)
 

Darth Seraphic

Defeated
Darth Seraphic
Silencia said:
We will be sticking by the rules. In order to fulfill a sub mod for a submission that is not your own you need explicit permission from the original creator to do so. This does not mean that your creations cannot exist on the planet for story purposes, they just won't be recorded in the planet submission.
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I understand very much so, Uh...just one problem... His account is deleted? Or locked? He wants to know how he can confirm he has given me permission?
 
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Fatty

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Submission Name: Realm of the Resu
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/398-realm-of-the-resu/
Reason for Modification: Coordinates are old/incorrect/not-reflective-of-the-map, and should be corrected. Also, would like to make an addendum to the title to make searching for the planet easier on the Map index.
Modification: Change the "Coordinates" field to reflect the coordinates of 8, 27.

Additionally, add to the submission title "(Resu)", so that it reads - Realm of the Resu (Resu) - as the title of the topic submission.

Thank you!
 

Valessia Brentioch

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Submission Name: Valessia and Sumiko's Home
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: Retitle the thread as Sumiko and Valessia are no longer a couple, and would like to have sub reflect that.
Modification: Change the name of the sub to Valessia's Home and removal of "Giving Valessia and her girlfriend Sumiko Tanaka a more official permenant residence. " From Intent.
 
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Garett Van

First Order Planetary Defense Forces
Garett Van
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Submission Name: Viera Illerian
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/99362-viera-illerian/
Reason for Modification: Wish to add her Armor to her items she has. Also change in role as well
Modification:



Name: Sergeant Viera Illerian

Loyalties: First Order, 242nd Armored Battalion

Role: Company Sergeant for Dorn Company 1st Combat Engineer Battalion, 409th Regiment, 4th Guards Division.

Development Threads: N/A

Age: 42

Species: Corellian

Appearance: Viera is 5'2, Blonde hair, Brown eyes. Normally wearing her pilot coveralls, she is very rarely seen not on duty. No scars. She doesn't show her age, she tends to look around mid thirties. Her hair is about shoulder length and her covers her left eye most of the time with her hair. Viera doesn't wear the normal goggles most walker pilots use as well.

Personality: Viera is a no nonsense, get the job done NCO. She makes sure she her skill as an NCO is known. She can have a bit of a temper when it comes to aliens, like most First Order soldiers. Viera also will speak up if her orders aren't acceptable. For the most part though she is someone that no one want to be on her bad side.

Force Sensitivity: Non-Force User

Weapon of Choice: SE-44C outside of her walker

Skills: Skilled walker pilot, Veteran NCO

Wealth: Average for a soldier

Combat Function: Company NCO for Lt. Garett Van

Notable Possessions: BDU

History: Viera, grew up on Corellia, but at eighteen she moved out to the First Order,and joined the army as a walker pilot, this was true calling as she learned the skill fast, but still took the required time to pass basic training. As a private she was just the average pilot, it took her ten years in service to be promoted to Sergeant, She then served under the radar of most of her officers, ten years. After ten years, that is when she met Garett, and took him under her wing. She made sure where ever he was transferred she soon followed. Ever since she has been Garett's NCO.



Intent: Have a NCO that will follow Garett through his military career
 

Aela Talith

The Righteous
Aela Talith
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Submission Name: The 5th Legion
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: Updating the submission to be more in line with current status.
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Name: The 5th Legion
Intent: To give Aela an army.
Affiliation: Aela Talith, The SIS
Availability: Uncommon
Quality: B, Veteran
Type: Armored Infantry
Strength: 6,000
Description:
The 5th Legion is an army whose sole dedication is to follow Aela Talith into combat.

The Legion, as it were, is entirely compromised of former Sith Troopers, that is soldiers who defected from the One Sith or other darkside groups and came to join the Alliance. Here they were rigorously vetted, tested, and then eventually either allowed to assimilate into the Alliance or join the fight against their former masters. Those who picked the latter option were assigned to Aela Talith's 5th Legion.

Though this system is now in place, it was not how the Legion actually began. Aela had never insisted upon the forming of an army to fight alongside her, nor had she ever requested it, she had simply always chosen to go with whatever unit was at the forefront of the battle, where she would always be found. Eventually however, her acts within these battles themselves and her nature of never killing, but always taking prisoner her enemy began to garner her some respect. This respect came from both the Soldiers of the Galactic Alliance, and those prisoners that Aela managed to take. As time went on, some of those prisoners offered to defect and join the Alliance, and it was those prisoners who would eventually form the 5th Legion, and army that would always follow Master Talith into battle.

The army was small at first, but it grew as time went on. More prisoners defected, and as the Galactic Alliance won battle after battle and the news of the New Jedi Order and it's kindness spread so did the rate of former Sith Soldiers that joined the Legion.

Eventually the unit was properly formed, a rank structure being formed and proper military support being given to the Legion itself. They received dedicated ships, equipment, and of course variably training in Alliance tactics. The numbers of the Legion quickly scaled and their combat effectiveness was soon put to the test. Aela, being the pseudo commander of the 5th Legion was placed at the head of the Command Structure, though not technically within the military the Alliance recognized that Jedi Leadership, as it had been for thousands of years, would have to be recognized in order to form an effective fighting force.

This eventually meant that the Legion came together as a whole, fighting alongside Aela and ensuring that she always had backup even in the worst combat situations.

Though the Legion as a whole does not yet have much of a history, as the war between the One Sith and the Galactic Alliance begins to grow and become more chaotic, it is expected that the Legion's combat record will skyrocket, with Master Talith nearly always taking part in the Vanguard of all Alliance combat actions. This role as the spearhead of the Alliance means that serving within the Legion can be extremely dangerous.

Since the original induction of the 5th Legion as a fighting force for the Galactic Alliance the Unit has seen numerous combat instances. The Legion fought on Lujo, Coruscant, conducted raids on several other worlds and was included in half a dozen different galactic operations. The 5th Legion has become a true veteran fighting force. Their knowledge and continued service renders them as one of the most experienced Military Units currently serving the side of good.

Recently the 5th Legion’s command purview has shifted from the Galactic Alliance Defense Force to the Strategic Intelligence Service. This shift in command was undertaken for two reasons. The first of which was the need for the SIS to maintain it’s own military fighting force, allowing them to better strike where and when necessary without the coordination of the GADF. The second reason was the moving of the 5th Legion’s Jedi Commander to the SIS.

When Aela moved to a position within the SIS she recommended the 5th Legion be acquired as the SIS’ main military fighting force, allowing the group to both stay with their Commander as well as serve the greater good of the Alliance.

Structure:
Structurally, the army is quite simple. There are a total of six thousand soldiers within the Legion.

This is further broken up with each thousand soldier being divided into a single Regiment. That means there are six regiments within the Legion itself, These regiments are split numerically, each called 1st regiment, 2nd regiment, and so on. Each of them have their unique identifiers and simply symbol, a slash in numeration corresponding with which number regiment they actually are. This split is then further divided by placing each Regiment into separate Companies.

Each Company consists of two Battalions of five hundred soldiers each. These battalions are separately named, and have their own unique identifier that is once again a simple symbol.

The Battalions are then individually split into four separate Companies, with each company having it's own name, assigned number, and once again symbol that would easily allow someone within the Legion to identify them as to where they were from. The Companies are then split into Platoons of sixty mean each, which is where the personal identifier stops. Though each Platoon has a separate signal assigned to it these are usually only used within the company itself, and on a Legion level the platoons are simply given numbers.

Of course the Platoons are then split up as well into Fireteams and Squads, but these differ from Company to Company and can change depending on the commanding officer of that particularly Platoon. Aela tries to give as much freedom to the men as she can, knowing that she is neither an expert in military discipline or structure.

Dev Thread: Here
Equipment:
5th Legion Armor
SI-17 Stealth Blaster
SI-74 Anti-Tank Rifle
VT-Needle Disruptor
VT-Bolt Blaster
VT-RAM Disruptor
VT-SDC 13
Tir Stunner
 

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Fatty said:
Submission Name: Realm of the Resu
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/398-realm-of-the-resu/
Reason for Modification: Coordinates are old/incorrect/not-reflective-of-the-map, and should be corrected. Also, would like to make an addendum to the title to make searching for the planet easier on the Map index.
Modification: Change the "Coordinates" field to reflect the coordinates of 8, 27.

Additionally, add to the submission title "(Resu)", so that it reads - Realm of the Resu (Resu) - as the title of the topic submission.

Thank you!
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