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Submission Name: Cathedral of Ashira
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Archive submission
Reason for Modification: As per this sub mod, Tygara is being evacuated, and the existing settlements and structures are being dismantled.
Modification: Archive sub.
 

Sawa Ike

The Dark Matriarch Darth Shōjō
Submission Name: Onna
Link to Submission: Onna
Summary of Modification: Editing Description
Reason for Modification: The description was pointed out to have small things. So fixing it
Modification: Description Changed
Discovered by Sawa after the death of Akiko Qui. THe young woman having to watch her back and discovering a darkside of the Emperors Yovshin. THe Onna fled after being discovered, treated as rogues and masterless yovshin for decades until they were found. Sawa fought them and eventually killed their leader now that she was different. Taking them over instead of leaving them to disappear. The Onna, Sawa Ike's personal guard, tasked with protecting the energy vampire at all costs. After Sawa's rediscovery of Nine, many of her memories regarding her former friend were triggered upon seeing her face when she was discovered in her personal stasis chamber by Sawa while re-exploring Castle Morpheus with Maple Harte. Though greatly tempted to destroy Nine within, Sawa held back just before she could do so, remembering the overdose of painkillers she had given Nine, accidentally triggering the transformation. The Onna would have exterminated Nine but for Sawa's mercy, instead merely guarding The Psy-Pires within their stasis units in Castle Morpheus. But some of the Morpheus Knights awoke from stasis, a predetermined trigger set by Nine, once she snuck out on her own, prompted against her will by her own instincts as a Psy-Pire. The Onna were brutally overwhelmed by the Knights, but used the experience to teach themselves to hunt Psy-Pires. Thei potnetial and skill with it as they set about hunting her and her knights. Sawa with her anger and hatred towards [member="Nine Lives"] used them as a means to imprison her. SHe would be returned to the Fortress of the Dawn, where she could eternally watch over her once again. Instead of her being sealed away and unsure about it the dark lord herself would ensure that all of her children who had escaped would be killed. Ni-Ne made to survive and suffer with her old friend. Now the unit became a few thousand stationed only at the ruined fortress and the small village below it. Not enough to win a war but keeping and maintaining the area would serve their masters purposes. WIth her efforts to reconstruct now that [member="Shoma Ike"] was named the heir apparent the Onna have stepped up on Atrisia. Enforcing the small borders of the village and its farm lands while training and conscripting villagers who can hold weapons.
 
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[member="Janick Beauchamp"] - Didn't change the image because it was larger than codex current guidelines (1000x750, not the other way around). You are welcome to submit an appropriate edit, or leave the old image (as it's the same picture and you are not required to change old images).
 
Submission Name: Point Nadir
Link to Submission: Point Nadir
Summary of Modification: Adding info that's been developed through RP, adding some links
Reason for Modification: See above
Modification: Please move it to Pre-Codex. I have to write a bunch of stuff and it'll be easier for everyone.
 
Submission Name: The Blackblade Guard (Resubmission)
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: Change the picture
Reason for Modification: Wanna change the picture
Modification:

Change picture to this

Image Credit: Click - LeadZero@DeviantArt.com

And could you float the image to the right if possible?
 
Submission Name: Glory Hounds
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Update equipment. Change Deployment from Mass to Minor.
Reason for Modification: Acquired some new gear. Deployment downgrade reflects their status as an elite unit.
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Deployment: Minor


In Equipment, Armour, add the following:


In Equipment, Rifles, add the following:


Add:

Misc:
 
Submission Name: Tel'erra
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Change hex location from h-16 to H-37
Reason for Modification: To be accurate with the past hex change to the map
Modification: Change hex location from h-16 to H-37
 
Submission Name: Thyrsian Sun Guards
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: Trimming the Equipment line.
Reason for Modification: I'm wanting to save on future headaches and modification requests by linking the Equipment portion of this Submission, to account for any new and approved items from the Factory.
Modification: To replace the text in the Equipment line: Variable Walking Armouries (Ranging from Combat Knives to Light Weapons) [Faction Armoury Link.]
 
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[member="Khonsu Amon"]
Unfortunately I cannot do this modification as we don't allow equipment links like that. If you have individual weapon/gear updates they will have to be done into the sub itself. We appreciate the thought, but cannot allow it.
 

John Ash

Only by Fire do we become Ash.
Submission Name: Ashhearth, Capital of the Pii System
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Change the name and link of 1 affiliation
Reason for Modification: To reflect the change in name of the faction in the affiliation.
Modification: Change the affiliation from Pii System to Ashhearth Association. New link is here.
 
Submission Name: Granite Guard
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/112095-granite-guard/
Summary of Modification: Update equipment.
Reason for Modification: Acquired some new gear.
Modification:


In Equipment, Armour, replace:


In Equipment, Heavy Weapons, add:

In Equipment, Melee, replace:

add:
Power Hammer


In Equipment, Explosives, add:

In Equipment, Sidearms, replace:
 
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