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Submission Name: Al-Khali

Link to Submission: Al-Khali
Summary of Modification: Submission updated to new template with some expanded details
Reason for Modification: It is several templates behind and there is room to expand on some of the details
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

SETTING INFORMATION
  • Structure Name: Al-Khali
  • Classification: A laboratory
  • Location: Odacer-Faustin
  • Affiliation: Seras Goto
  • Accessibility: Difficult
    Secluded between a mountain and repositioned with heavy construction. THe academy itself is now hanging off the mountain itself with heavy struts and supports. Bracers on the lowest levels of the ground and structural protrusions to make it as isolated as possible with only two points of entry. The plasma bridge that can be deactivated from the academy/lab and the landing pads which are defended.
  • The walls themselves are designed to be slick and high with a solid construction to ensure most species can't grip on them. Security monitors and auto turrets along the perimeter in case of dangerous attackers across the gap.
  • Once inside the airlocks and magnetic locks are thick and heavy blastdoors that seal and section off the academy and lab areas, functioning more like a ship or sub where each riim has its own C02 scrubbers and life support as well as minimal defenses. Defensive towers for anti air and infantry turrets are around.
  • A defensive shield/cloaking device is used to protect the academy/lab from attacks or hide it from others seeking its location on the planet. While within the silence shroud keeps others from being able to communicate and alert to its location and presence.
  • Defenders are leftover soldiers and creatures from the Black Rose along with medical doctors who make up the main bulk of the academy/lab's staff and personnel. Experiments are kept in cages and stasis fields but in case of problems can be released should Seras vitals perish. Her own version of a cinder to ensure anyone who kills her won't have the benefits of her lab.
  • Kudzu: A sithspawn created on the planet by the remnants of the black rose and Janick Beauchamp to create a special sort of defense. Thick and vine like but able to survive in the freezing temperatures as well as dissolve and eat the organic matter of experiments or invaders.

[*]Description: Once the ancient site of a sith temple thousands of years before the battle of Yavin, then later built upon by a sith academy. THe ancient bones of the academy and temple are still visible with security and refits done to make it into a whole new facility. Heavy sealed blastdoors to keep out the cold but also keep experiments in or out. Animal paddocks that are no longer used but still echo with the sounds and memories. Everywhere within the facility the it is sterile and clean. Made to be a lab more then housing hundreds of people. Seras has taken care to ensure the defenses were up to date with some special surprises on the world itself.
POINTS OF INTEREST
The Crags: The area around the academy that were created as a moat. With jagged rocks jutting out that would handle things falling over and provide a deep ravine for a first layer of protection against the sickness. THe deper down it goes into the rock the more dangerous it becomes as black waters that haven't been touched by the sun are heated. Currents crash against the rocks and smash with artificial generators to keep the waters choppy and run off hoses to suction and keep it from being overflown.

The Dorms: Converted for use by the stormtroopers and staff to use. Defensive autoturrets and precautions are set up to protect from an outbreak with biometric sensors at the doors and filters for the air supply. With the inclusion of new sithspawn creatures that have been brought from the black rose Seras has a few more in terms of defenders. THe old dorms can house her medical doctors once the Black Rose and One Sith fell.

The Library: The ancient and burned library has proven unusable for recovering scrolls or texts but once the rotted wooden body was removed and it was secured a large staging area for administration and processing. Over time with some improvements it also served as a means to access the base of the weather control tower. A device used to keep the area of the planet where Al-Khali is within a near constant state of blizzard and snow.

Ritual Chamber: Uncovered from within the library and used to create a pit. The screams of victims and prisoners who are kept there to be used in things coming up from the air shafts. THe ritual chamber after some improvements sits at the center fo the inverted medical center. A massive spire dug down deep within the rock and stone under Al-Khali where Seras medical stage is able to create bioweapons.

Paddocks: The ancient animal paddocks that housed at one point tauntauns and have been converts. With equipment for monitoring the academy internal network and outside sensors. THe continued improvements to the security systems including the use fo the shroud, shielding unit and or its cloaking device. New regulators for the geothermal tap that serves to power the facilities back up supplies.

The Cradle: The Roanoke cradle, a shell of steel and exposed electronics that keeps their prisoner ship. The towers on the top of the cradle being able to be defended with droids and auto turrets. THe cradle itself serves after retrofits as a power station. Able to be filled with and improved upon. it makes using the ship to leave the planet next to impossible but it does give a defended frame where the power for the facility can be generated.

Landing Pad: The main entrance to the academy and base cleaned off and made for shuttles and personal ships to land. Defensive autoturrets ready and able to defend on the area as it goes towards the large staircase. Defensive towers to protect ships coming and going from the facility. It isn't large mostly able to hold three shuttles or two freighters itself.

The Wall: Built on the edge of the academy and creating another additional layer of protection. The wall reaches twenty feet high and has towers interspaced with monitors and sensors to track movement inside and outside. Autoturrets that are set up for the exterior and then a number facing inwards where they can be used to defend the courtyard itself.

Central tower: The ruined tower has been cleaned away, the ruins and death it brought not forgotten but immortalized in a statue of a sith lord who hold four faces on his head. One displaying Darth Drear, the second displaying Darth Scaborous and the third displaying Seras before she had her life preservation suit. The fourth face is a mirror that looks down upon each sith who comes as a sort of motivational incentive that they can be added to such a thing. The Al-Khali statue is one fo the primary focuses of the academy and marks were it goes down into the ancient temple.

Medical Lab: Built as an inverted tower deep into the mountain and serving as an underarea of the sith temple. The medical labs are where the most dangerous experiments take place within the facility. Which says something considering the visible ones are some of the most horrible.

Geothermal Tap: A primary source for power generation and deeper in the levels of the mountain. Allowing the academy and lab to store and run on its own power in case the main power plant fails.

Weather Tower: Designed on the mountain at the highest point near the shield, the tower is designed to enhance the harsh blizzards of the planet. Serving as a dangerous means of disrupting the cloaking field but it also makes landing near the academy much harder.

The Black Orchid: THe flagship fo the black rose, kept within a section behind the facility. THe organic ship itself is able to land on and leave the planet when not in use. The ship itself provides little to the facility aside from a means of escape or getting down and docking with the lower level of the mountain.
SECURITY: High
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Built one thousand years before the Galactic Cold war. Darth Drear used the structure to discover the secrets of immortality through the use of the murakama orchid. A flower with both sentience and force sensitivity that when tinkered with sith alchemy created a ravenous hive minded infection that could spread across all species and sought to devour the galaxy. His ritual was never completed or rediscovered until Darth Scaborous found the chamber and continued to ritual with a jedi.

After the fall of the academy the world was blocked off, the danger of spreading the virus more or less a universally agreed upon bad move. That wouldn't stop graverobbers seeking secret sith treasure after a thousand years or so. Also a possibility of course and the stray sith or jedi seeking information for what really happened. The harsh snowy terrain proving a dangerous place until thousands of years later Seras arrived with a plan for the ancient academy.

With it still standing and what information they could get on its layout she decided to create it more like an underwater or space base on a planet. Working to make each section its own contained area with biometrics and scrubbers to detect signs of the virus or other infections. They began to slow process pretending to be a repair crew fixing the damaged quarantine beacon to keep people away. After of course sabotaging it to lure three jedi to the world.

She needed someone to play distraction while her people worked to slowly dig and set charges. Working to cut into the mountain around them and severs the academy from the range they were on through what she planned to become the crags. The rooms getting a thick heavy turadium blast door sealed with a biometric scanner to detect signs of the infection and ensure no one infected is admitted into the areas they have been and begun to fix up.

Filters and bioscanners in the ventilation systems allowing clean air to pump and be recycled within the network as they built it. Defense turrets deployed in every room in case of breach or outbreak. Flametroopers working to purge each section before construction droids are sent in to put up and reinforce with floor and wall bolts the blast doors. Remote droids to scout through the vents and watch for dangers or seal them off.

Slowly as the sith construction droids moved through the crags and wall were created to seal the academy off and snow was moved and set into filters to be melted down for a small supply of water that could be recycled for use with the prisoners. The ancient entry arch was kept with a new inscription being added upon it as they worked to make the ground safe for some use. Aside from infected there would become the need to deal with graverobbers.

That came with some small concealable automated anti air turrets that could be placed around and target anything coming to explore the academy that wasn't authorized. The research base was to be a secret and as far as the galaxy was concern the only thing on the world was death and sickness. Seras sought to keep this illusion with only a plasma bridge to connect the base to the rest of the world and to easily secure it. The controls within the insulated rooms on the lower rung.

As the Black Rose grew and developed under Venefica the research done at Al-Khali continued, Seras Goto's offices compared to others allowed it to remain isolated away from the others in the galaxy. Despite what was around the galaxy and around the facility she was able to keep it with Venefica by getting closer to the sith lord. Transferring soldiers as the Black Rose seemed to go into an identity crisis with Sanya trying to make the darksiders into lightsiders and Seras retreated back to Al-Khali.

Her seclusion with what soldiers she could get when they fell. Gathering one of the mobile labs Sanya developed for them to use on the world. The massive academy that had been converted going dark as far as communications were determined and staying out of the visble need. Seras could continue to work on the world in peace away from prying eyes. Most of the experimentation coming from it on what they could find with the doctor using her skilled members who had some extra protection from the remnants of black rose soldiers.

THe work between Venefica and Seras continued, the two remaining Black Rose members. She would head out to the different empires while Seras remained within Al-Khali getting it improved upon. Finding need needs and systems, eventually with the rise fo the Sith Empire though Al-Khali was secluded and hidden away behind the weather and a cloaking device. Other improvements being smuggled in and set up around the facility to ensure that its secrecy was maintained along with new holding areas for experiments.

Residents:
 
Submission Name: Kaeshana
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.ne...orai-homeworld/
Summary of Modification: Modify population.
Reason for Modification: This population figure was already incorrect given the way the RP worked out here. Since then there's been a rebellion, a long term occupation, further evacuations and departures and further population wastage. A massive downgrading of the population is in order.
Modification:
Population: Due to the combined effects of the exodus, cataclysm, rebellion, occupation, departures, wastage and miscellaneous deaths only about 50 million Eldorai remain on their home planet. The remainder have left for the stars or perished.
 
[member="Allyson Locke"] said to resubmit

Submission Name: Al-Khali
Link to Submission: Al-Khali
Summary of Modification: Submission updated to new template with some expanded details
Reason for Modification: It is several templates behind and there is room to expand on some of the details
Modification:

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

SETTING INFORMATION
  • Structure Name: Al-Khali
  • Classification: A laboratory
  • Location: Odacer-Faustin
  • Affiliation: Seras Goto
  • Accessibility: Difficult
    Secluded between a mountain and repositioned with heavy construction. THe academy itself is now hanging off the mountain itself with heavy struts and supports. Bracers on the lowest levels of the ground and structural protrusions to make it as isolated as possible with only two points of entry. The plasma bridge that can be deactivated from the academy/lab and the landing pads which are defended.
  • The walls themselves are designed to be slick and high with a solid construction to ensure most species can't grip on them. Security monitors and auto turrets along the perimeter in case of dangerous attackers across the gap.
  • Once inside the airlocks and magnetic locks are thick and heavy blastdoors that seal and section off the academy and lab areas, functioning more like a ship or sub where each riim has its own C02 scrubbers and life support as well as minimal defenses. Defensive towers for anti air and infantry turrets are around.
  • A defensive shield/cloaking device is used to protect the academy/lab from attacks or hide it from others seeking its location on the planet. While within the silence shroud keeps others from being able to communicate and alert to its location and presence.
  • Defenders are leftover soldiers and creatures from the Black Rose along with medical doctors who make up the main bulk of the academy/lab's staff and personnel. Experiments are kept in cages and stasis fields but in case of problems can be released should Seras vitals perish. Her own version of a cinder to ensure anyone who kills her won't have the benefits of her lab.
  • Kudzu: A sithspawn created on the planet by the remnants of the black rose and Janick Beauchamp to create a special sort of defense. Thick and vine like but able to survive in the freezing temperatures as well as dissolve and eat the organic matter of experiments or invaders.

[*]Description: Once the ancient site of a sith temple thousands of years before the battle of Yavin, then later built upon by a sith academy. THe ancient bones of the academy and temple are still visible with security and refits done to make it into a whole new facility. Heavy sealed blastdoors to keep out the cold but also keep experiments in or out. Animal paddocks that are no longer used but still echo with the sounds and memories. Everywhere within the facility the it is sterile and clean. Made to be a lab more then housing hundreds of people. Seras has taken care to ensure the defenses were up to date with some special surprises on the world itself.
POINTS OF INTEREST
The Crags: The area around the academy that were created as a moat. With jagged rocks jutting out that would handle things falling over and provide a deep ravine for a first layer of protection against the sickness. THe deper down it goes into the rock the more dangerous it becomes as black waters that haven't been touched by the sun are heated. Currents crash against the rocks and smash with artificial generators to keep the waters choppy and run off hoses to suction and keep it from being overflown.

The Dorms: Converted for use by the stormtroopers and staff to use. Defensive autoturrets and precautions are set up to protect from an outbreak with biometric sensors at the doors and filters for the air supply. With the inclusion of new sithspawn creatures that have been brought from the black rose Seras has a few more in terms of defenders. THe old dorms can house her medical doctors once the Black Rose and One Sith fell.

The Library: The ancient and burned library has proven unusable for recovering scrolls or texts but once the rotted wooden body was removed and it was secured a large staging area for administration and processing. Over time with some improvements it also served as a means to access the base of the weather control tower. A device used to keep the area of the planet where Al-Khali is within a near constant state of blizzard and snow.
Image Credit: http://avp.wikia.com/wiki/USS_SulacoAvP Wiki: Uss Sulaco[/url

Ritual Chamber: Uncovered from within the library and used to create a pit. The screams of victims and prisoners who are kept there to be used in things coming up from the air shafts. THe ritual chamber after some improvements sits at the center fo the inverted medical center. A massive spire dug down deep within the rock and stone under Al-Khali where Seras medical stage is able to create bioweapons.

[URL="https://i.imgur.com/stUnyln.jpg"]Paddocks
: The ancient animal paddocks that housed at one point tauntauns and have been converts. With equipment for monitoring the academy internal network and outside sensors. THe continued improvements to the security systems including the use fo the shroud, shielding unit and or its cloaking device. New regulators for the geothermal tap that serves to power the facilities back up supplies.
Image Credits: https://www.reddit.com/r/robotech/c...s/Reddit.com: Robotech Shadow Chronicles[/irl

The Cradle: The Roanoke cradle, a shell of steel and exposed electronics that keeps their prisoner ship. The towers on the top of the cradle being able to be defended with droids and auto turrets. THe cradle itself serves after retrofits as a power station. Able to be filled with and improved upon. it makes using the ship to leave the planet next to impossible but it does give a defended frame where the power for the facility can be generated.

Landing Pad: The main entrance to the academy and base cleaned off and made for shuttles and personal ships to land. Defensive autoturrets ready and able to defend on the area as it goes towards the large staircase. Defensive towers to protect ships coming and going from the facility. It isn't large mostly able to hold three shuttles or two freighters itself.

[URL="https://i.imgur.com/n2hW2q6.jpg"]The Wall
: Built on the edge of the academy and creating another additional layer of protection. The wall reaches twenty feet high and has towers interspaced with monitors and sensors to track movement inside and outside. Autoturrets that are set up for the exterior and then a number facing inwards where they can be used to defend the courtyard itself.
Image Credits: Shacknews: Red Alert 3

Central tower: The ruined tower has been cleaned away, the ruins and death it brought not forgotten but immortalized in a statue of a sith lord who hold four faces on his head. One displaying Darth Drear, the second displaying Darth Scaborous and the third displaying Seras before she had her life preservation suit. The fourth face is a mirror that looks down upon each sith who comes as a sort of motivational incentive that they can be added to such a thing. The Al-Khali statue is one fo the primary focuses of the academy and marks were it goes down into the ancient temple.
Image Credits: Star Wars Wikia: Emperor Palpatine's Surgical Reconstruction Center

Medical Lab: Built as an inverted tower deep into the mountain and serving as an underarea of the sith temple. The medical labs are where the most dangerous experiments take place within the facility. Which says something considering the visible ones are some of the most horrible.
Image Credits: #d Lab Center

Geothermal Tap: A primary source for power generation and deeper in the levels of the mountain. Allowing the academy and lab to store and run on its own power in case the main power plant fails.

Weather Tower: Designed on the mountain at the highest point near the shield, the tower is designed to enhance the harsh blizzards of the planet. Serving as a dangerous means of disrupting the cloaking field but it also makes landing near the academy much harder.

The Black Orchid: THe flagship fo the black rose, kept within a section behind the facility. THe organic ship itself is able to land on and leave the planet when not in use. The ship itself provides little to the facility aside from a means of escape or getting down and docking with the lower level of the mountain.
SECURITY: High
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Built one thousand years before the Galactic Cold war. Darth Drear used the structure to discover the secrets of immortality through the use of the murakama orchid. A flower with both sentience and force sensitivity that when tinkered with sith alchemy created a ravenous hive minded infection that could spread across all species and sought to devour the galaxy. His ritual was never completed or rediscovered until Darth Scaborous found the chamber and continued to ritual with a jedi.

After the fall of the academy the world was blocked off, the danger of spreading the virus more or less a universally agreed upon bad move. That wouldn't stop graverobbers seeking secret sith treasure after a thousand years or so. Also a possibility of course and the stray sith or jedi seeking information for what really happened. The harsh snowy terrain proving a dangerous place until thousands of years later Seras arrived with a plan for the ancient academy.

With it still standing and what information they could get on its layout she decided to create it more like an underwater or space base on a planet. Working to make each section its own contained area with biometrics and scrubbers to detect signs of the virus or other infections. They began to slow process pretending to be a repair crew fixing the damaged quarantine beacon to keep people away. After of course sabotaging it to lure three jedi to the world.

She needed someone to play distraction while her people worked to slowly dig and set charges. Working to cut into the mountain around them and severs the academy from the range they were on through what she planned to become the crags. The rooms getting a thick heavy turadium blast door sealed with a biometric scanner to detect signs of the infection and ensure no one infected is admitted into the areas they have been and begun to fix up.

Filters and bioscanners in the ventilation systems allowing clean air to pump and be recycled within the network as they built it. Defense turrets deployed in every room in case of breach or outbreak. Flametroopers working to purge each section before construction droids are sent in to put up and reinforce with floor and wall bolts the blast doors. Remote droids to scout through the vents and watch for dangers or seal them off.

Slowly as the sith construction droids moved through the crags and wall were created to seal the academy off and snow was moved and set into filters to be melted down for a small supply of water that could be recycled for use with the prisoners. The ancient entry arch was kept with a new inscription being added upon it as they worked to make the ground safe for some use. Aside from infected there would become the need to deal with graverobbers.

That came with some small concealable automated anti air turrets that could be placed around and target anything coming to explore the academy that wasn't authorized. The research base was to be a secret and as far as the galaxy was concern the only thing on the world was death and sickness. Seras sought to keep this illusion with only a plasma bridge to connect the base to the rest of the world and to easily secure it. The controls within the insulated rooms on the lower rung.

As the Black Rose grew and developed under Venefica the research done at Al-Khali continued, Seras Goto's offices compared to others allowed it to remain isolated away from the others in the galaxy. Despite what was around the galaxy and around the facility she was able to keep it with Venefica by getting closer to the sith lord. Transferring soldiers as the Black Rose seemed to go into an identity crisis with Sanya trying to make the darksiders into lightsiders and Seras retreated back to Al-Khali.

Her seclusion with what soldiers she could get when they fell. Gathering one of the mobile labs Sanya developed for them to use on the world. The massive academy that had been converted going dark as far as communications were determined and staying out of the visble need. Seras could continue to work on the world in peace away from prying eyes. Most of the experimentation coming from it on what they could find with the doctor using her skilled members who had some extra protection from the remnants of black rose soldiers.

THe work between Venefica and Seras continued, the two remaining Black Rose members. She would head out to the different empires while Seras remained within Al-Khali getting it improved upon. Finding need needs and systems, eventually with the rise fo the Sith Empire though Al-Khali was secluded and hidden away behind the weather and a cloaking device. Other improvements being smuggled in and set up around the facility to ensure that its secrecy was maintained along with new holding areas for experiments.

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  • Submission Name: Kageja iv Akmuo | Sentries of Stone
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Submission Name: Al-Khali
Link to Submission: Al-Khali
Summary of Modification: Submission updated to new template with some expanded details
Reason for Modification: It is several templates behind and there is room to expand on some of the details
Modification:

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

[*]Canon: Odacer-Faustin Sith academy
[*]Links:

SETTING INFORMATION
  • Structure Name: Al-Khali
  • Classification: A laboratory
  • Location: Odacer-Faustin
  • Affiliation: Seras Goto
  • Accessibility: Difficult
    Secluded between a mountain and repositioned with heavy construction. THe academy itself is now hanging off the mountain itself with heavy struts and supports. Bracers on the lowest levels of the ground and structural protrusions to make it as isolated as possible with only two points of entry. The plasma bridge that can be deactivated from the academy/lab and the landing pads which are defended.
  • The walls themselves are designed to be slick and high with a solid construction to ensure most species can't grip on them. Security monitors and auto turrets along the perimeter in case of dangerous attackers across the gap.
  • Once inside the airlocks and magnetic locks are thick and heavy blastdoors that seal and section off the academy and lab areas, functioning more like a ship or sub where each riim has its own C02 scrubbers and life support as well as minimal defenses. Defensive towers for anti air and infantry turrets are around.
  • A defensive shield/cloaking device is used to protect the academy/lab from attacks or hide it from others seeking its location on the planet. While within the silence shroud keeps others from being able to communicate and alert to its location and presence.
  • Defenders are leftover soldiers and creatures from the Black Rose along with medical doctors who make up the main bulk of the academy/lab's staff and personnel. Experiments are kept in cages and stasis fields but in case of problems can be released should Seras vitals perish. Her own version of a cinder to ensure anyone who kills her won't have the benefits of her lab.
  • Kudzu: A sithspawn created on the planet by the remnants of the black rose and Janick Beauchamp to create a special sort of defense. Thick and vine like but able to survive in the freezing temperatures as well as dissolve and eat the organic matter of experiments or invaders.

[*]Description: Once the ancient site of a sith temple thousands of years before the battle of Yavin, then later built upon by a sith academy. THe ancient bones of the academy and temple are still visible with security and refits done to make it into a whole new facility. Heavy sealed blastdoors to keep out the cold but also keep experiments in or out. Animal paddocks that are no longer used but still echo with the sounds and memories. Everywhere within the facility the it is sterile and clean. Made to be a lab more then housing hundreds of people. Seras has taken care to ensure the defenses were up to date with some special surprises on the world itself.
POINTS OF INTEREST
The Crags: The area around the academy that were created as a moat. With jagged rocks jutting out that would handle things falling over and provide a deep ravine for a first layer of protection against the sickness. THe deper down it goes into the rock the more dangerous it becomes as black waters that haven't been touched by the sun are heated. Currents crash against the rocks and smash with artificial generators to keep the waters choppy and run off hoses to suction and keep it from being overflown.

The Dorms: Converted for use by the stormtroopers and staff to use. Defensive autoturrets and precautions are set up to protect from an outbreak with biometric sensors at the doors and filters for the air supply. With the inclusion of new sithspawn creatures that have been brought from the black rose Seras has a few more in terms of defenders. THe old dorms can house her medical doctors once the Black Rose and One Sith fell.

The Library: The ancient and burned library has proven unusable for recovering scrolls or texts but once the rotted wooden body was removed and it was secured a large staging area for administration and processing. Over time with some improvements it also served as a means to access the base of the weather control tower. A device used to keep the area of the planet where Al-Khali is within a near constant state of blizzard and snow.

Ritual Chamber: Uncovered from within the library and used to create a pit. The screams of victims and prisoners who are kept there to be used in things coming up from the air shafts. THe ritual chamber after some improvements sits at the center fo the inverted medical center. A massive spire dug down deep within the rock and stone under Al-Khali where Seras medical stage is able to create bioweapons.

Paddocks: The ancient animal paddocks that housed at one point tauntauns and have been converts. With equipment for monitoring the academy internal network and outside sensors. THe continued improvements to the security systems including the use fo the shroud, shielding unit and or its cloaking device. New regulators for the geothermal tap that serves to power the facilities back up supplies.

The Cradle: The Roanoke cradle, a shell of steel and exposed electronics that keeps their prisoner ship. The towers on the top of the cradle being able to be defended with droids and auto turrets. THe cradle itself serves after retrofits as a power station. Able to be filled with and improved upon. it makes using the ship to leave the planet next to impossible but it does give a defended frame where the power for the facility can be generated.

Landing Pad: The main entrance to the academy and base cleaned off and made for shuttles and personal ships to land. Defensive autoturrets ready and able to defend on the area as it goes towards the large staircase. Defensive towers to protect ships coming and going from the facility. It isn't large mostly able to hold three shuttles or two freighters itself.

The Wall: Built on the edge of the academy and creating another additional layer of protection. The wall reaches twenty feet high and has towers interspaced with monitors and sensors to track movement inside and outside. Autoturrets that are set up for the exterior and then a number facing inwards where they can be used to defend the courtyard itself.

Central tower: The ruined tower has been cleaned away, the ruins and death it brought not forgotten but immortalized in a statue of a sith lord who hold four faces on his head. One displaying Darth Drear, the second displaying Darth Scaborous and the third displaying Seras before she had her life preservation suit. The fourth face is a mirror that looks down upon each sith who comes as a sort of motivational incentive that they can be added to such a thing. The Al-Khali statue is one fo the primary focuses of the academy and marks were it goes down into the ancient temple.

Medical Lab: Built as an inverted tower deep into the mountain and serving as an underarea of the sith temple. The medical labs are where the most dangerous experiments take place within the facility. Which says something considering the visible ones are some of the most horrible.

Geothermal Tap: A primary source for power generation and deeper in the levels of the mountain. Allowing the academy and lab to store and run on its own power in case the main power plant fails.

Weather Tower: Designed on the mountain at the highest point near the shield, the tower is designed to enhance the harsh blizzards of the planet. Serving as a dangerous means of disrupting the cloaking field but it also makes landing near the academy much harder.

The Black Orchid: THe flagship fo the black rose, kept within a section behind the facility. THe organic ship itself is able to land on and leave the planet when not in use. The ship itself provides little to the facility aside from a means of escape or getting down and docking with the lower level of the mountain.
SECURITY: High
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Built one thousand years before the Galactic Cold war. Darth Drear used the structure to discover the secrets of immortality through the use of the murakama orchid. A flower with both sentience and force sensitivity that when tinkered with sith alchemy created a ravenous hive minded infection that could spread across all species and sought to devour the galaxy. His ritual was never completed or rediscovered until Darth Scaborous found the chamber and continued to ritual with a jedi.

After the fall of the academy the world was blocked off, the danger of spreading the virus more or less a universally agreed upon bad move. That wouldn't stop graverobbers seeking secret sith treasure after a thousand years or so. Also a possibility of course and the stray sith or jedi seeking information for what really happened. The harsh snowy terrain proving a dangerous place until thousands of years later Seras arrived with a plan for the ancient academy.

With it still standing and what information they could get on its layout she decided to create it more like an underwater or space base on a planet. Working to make each section its own contained area with biometrics and scrubbers to detect signs of the virus or other infections. They began to slow process pretending to be a repair crew fixing the damaged quarantine beacon to keep people away. After of course sabotaging it to lure three jedi to the world.

She needed someone to play distraction while her people worked to slowly dig and set charges. Working to cut into the mountain around them and severs the academy from the range they were on through what she planned to become the crags. The rooms getting a thick heavy turadium blast door sealed with a biometric scanner to detect signs of the infection and ensure no one infected is admitted into the areas they have been and begun to fix up.

Filters and bioscanners in the ventilation systems allowing clean air to pump and be recycled within the network as they built it. Defense turrets deployed in every room in case of breach or outbreak. Flametroopers working to purge each section before construction droids are sent in to put up and reinforce with floor and wall bolts the blast doors. Remote droids to scout through the vents and watch for dangers or seal them off.

Slowly as the sith construction droids moved through the crags and wall were created to seal the academy off and snow was moved and set into filters to be melted down for a small supply of water that could be recycled for use with the prisoners. The ancient entry arch was kept with a new inscription being added upon it as they worked to make the ground safe for some use. Aside from infected there would become the need to deal with graverobbers.

That came with some small concealable automated anti air turrets that could be placed around and target anything coming to explore the academy that wasn't authorized. The research base was to be a secret and as far as the galaxy was concern the only thing on the world was death and sickness. Seras sought to keep this illusion with only a plasma bridge to connect the base to the rest of the world and to easily secure it. The controls within the insulated rooms on the lower rung.

As the Black Rose grew and developed under Venefica the research done at Al-Khali continued, Seras Goto's offices compared to others allowed it to remain isolated away from the others in the galaxy. Despite what was around the galaxy and around the facility she was able to keep it with Venefica by getting closer to the sith lord. Transferring soldiers as the Black Rose seemed to go into an identity crisis with Sanya trying to make the darksiders into lightsiders and Seras retreated back to Al-Khali.

Her seclusion with what soldiers she could get when they fell. Gathering one of the mobile labs Sanya developed for them to use on the world. The massive academy that had been converted going dark as far as communications were determined and staying out of the visble need. Seras could continue to work on the world in peace away from prying eyes. Most of the experimentation coming from it on what they could find with the doctor using her skilled members who had some extra protection from the remnants of black rose soldiers.

THe work between Venefica and Seras continued, the two remaining Black Rose members. She would head out to the different empires while Seras remained within Al-Khali getting it improved upon. Finding need needs and systems, eventually with the rise fo the Sith Empire though Al-Khali was secluded and hidden away behind the weather and a cloaking device. Other improvements being smuggled in and set up around the facility to ensure that its secrecy was maintained along with new holding areas for experiments.

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Submission Name: Loyalty
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/99266-loyalty/#entry1437255
Summary of Modification: Revamped several portions of the Character sheet
Reason for Modification: Evolution of character
Modification:
Name: Sarah
Loyalties: Ultimatum
Role: A close friend of Ultimatum who acts as a guard, consular, and talking companion for the droid.

Development Threads:
First met: Of Him Harpers Sadly Sing
Mentioned in a number of threads since

Age: 75 years
Species: Maelibus


Appearance: About standard for species, most of her skin appears to be molten gold, except around her face where it has seemingly tarnished with black flecking. Her body is covered in spines and scales. Her claws are sharp and filed cleanly.

Personality: Calm most of the time, Sarah cannot recall her original name or life. The Maelibus has shown a pension for poetry and drama, which she tends to use in her regular speech. Her song filled voice, which comes naturally to her species, is utilized it in entertainment and to have some control over those who hear her, though Ultimatum has proved to be immune to this ability.


Force Sensitivity: Non-Force User
Weapon of Choice: Claws and Voice
Skills: She is capable of enchanting most organics with her voice, for more information read the Wookieepedia page on the species.
Wealth: None


Combat Function: Not likely to take part in combat.

Notable Possessions:
She keeps the Nox Holocron in her protection for Ultimatum.
The only object that is truly hers is a dark red cloak that Ultimatum gave to her, she believes that it was the droid’s beforehand.


History:
Her history before meeting Ultimatum is an entire blank. She was an interrogator in a secret facility for an unknown person, who questioned Ultimatum along with a few other prisoners. Unfortunately for her, one of the prisoners broke free of his restraints and caused the release of the others including Ultimatum. One of the other prisoners blasted Loyalty in the face, leading to some of the skin to turn black, which caused her enough pain to fall unconscious. Before she could recover yet another prisoner crushed her ribs, causing her to bleed into her lungs, which would have led to death had Ultimatum not taken it upon himself to carry her out of the prison and get her medical attention as soon as possible after the escape. Originally the droid had intended on saving her to find out who had ordered his capture.

However the damage done to her brain from lack of blood was far too extensive. It was a miracle that she had survived so long as it was. The damage to the brain has led to her loss of all previous memories and entirely changed the brain passage ways. While reconstructive surgery repaired damage to integral portions of the brain, though they were unable to repair some parts that have led to a loss of Old Declarative Memory. Upon her awakening from the procedures Ultimatum found that she appeared to attach to her immediate surroundings, some form of imprinting. Those in her immediate surroundings became the object of some form of deep connection. Fortunately Ultimatum and the medical droid were the only two. Even so, her connection with Ultimatum became far more intimate than was show for the other droid. Ultimatum has theorized that it was something from before the escape that made him of some sort of importance to her, as if the person behind the kidnapping and interrogations had been particularly interested in him which caused the strange phenomenon.

No matter the reason, the Maelibus proved herself loyal to the point of attacking Legion, a close friend of Ultimatum, for an imagined slight against her new master. While Ultimatum disapproves of her rather extreme methods and has taught her to attempt to be more civil minded , he appreciates her ability to look beyond herself to the point of death. She has shown a few other traits that concern the droid. Occasionally she has taken to walking among the droids that work wherever Ultimatum is and leaving intricate carvings on the one that she believes is most akin to the AI. It has struck Ultimatum as incredibly odd if not unnerving and yet more proof of how she has been rather broadly affected by the accident. She is sometimes impulsive, more so than most normal organics. Ultimatum has seen imaging that suggests that her brain is actually healing over time, it would probably take her whole life before the mind is fully healed, but it is possible that parts of her faculty will return as time goes on, but her memories are less likely to. She chose the name by herself, loyalty to what she believes is the greatest cause in the galaxy. Not just Ultimatum, but the survival of all organics. Believing that organics are doomed to end themselves, Ultimatum was the one hope for them in her mind.

Later advanced in Ultimatum's medical technology allowed him to reconstruct her brain to a fully functional form. While not regaining any memories, it allowed the newly self-named Sarah to fit into larger society beyond Ultimatum's influence. Before the droid's sudden disappearance, he gave Sarah a message to wait on Nar Shadda for his eventual return, ordering her to keep the Holocron until such time as he required it. She traveled to the world as ordered and created a persona of a singer in one of the many local cantinas, spending her time waiting for the return of her master turned friend. Almost a year later, Ultimatum would return, following a clue left for him in a data cache from his older self. The two were reunited after some minor difficulties and Sarah decided once more to take up the mantle of ally to Ultimatum.

Intent: To create a character that will be part of Ultimatum’s story
 
Submission Name: Geister
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Update equipment.
Reason for Modification: Acquired some new gear. Improving format.
Modification:



In Equipment, replace this:


'The cyborgs are equipped with an array of weapons, though they favour close range combat, which is reflected by their gear. They all carry lightsabres or in some cases shotos. Furthermore, they are trained in the use of vibroblades, Force pikes and electrostaffs.


Personal energy shields provide some protection against enemy attacks. Likewise, they are equipped with sealed light or medium body armour. This is commonly made of duraplast, reinforced to provide resistance to the ion and electrical attacks that are the bane of droids and cyborgs. For stealthy operations, they can make use of no-shows and other sensor scramblers. The Geister have access to Mirage Cloaking Devices and suits of Blackhide Armour, enhancing their stealth and providing personal protection.


They favour disruptor pistols, shatterguns, Ssi-Ruuvi paddle beamers, sonic blaster pistols, scatterguns and blaster-based small arms as ranged weapons, but lack heavy weapons such as repeaters, rotary cannons or rocket launchers. To reduce weight and allow for surprise attacks, wrist weapons are common. Some have received sniper training, but these are only a few. In short, their equipment is geared towards close range combat. They also carry a variety of explosives, including glop, cryoban and gas grenades.'


With this:

 
[member="Seras Goto"] - You are still missing a number of image credits or they do not contain links. I will not update this without those for all of your images. If you have one or two that you don't know the original source of, do you best to find *something* you can link to where it exists beyond imugr. Try tiny eye to reverse image search: https://www.tineye.com/

Updated all others.
 
[SIZE=9pt]Submission Name:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Kista’s Creations [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Link to Submission:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Here [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Reason for Modification:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] The Company is fully moving from Mandalore to Alderaan. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Modification: [/SIZE]
  1. [SIZE=9pt](HQ) Office building, New Aldera City (Alderaan)[/SIZE]
  2. [SIZE=9pt]Primary Factory , New Aldera City (Alderaan) [/SIZE]
  3. [SIZE=9pt]Secondary Factory, New Crevasse City (Alderaan) [/SIZE]
 
Submission Name: Typhos Clone Family
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Hyperlink a character mentioned in the Members section of the submission.
Reason for Modification: When I made the submission, I did not have an NPC sub for Valerian, one of the organisation's members, so there was no hyperlink. I have since made the sub and it was approved.
Modification:


In the Members section,

replace Valerian with Valerian
 
Submission Name: Dergan Adolphous Twigg
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/112076-dergan-adolphus-twigg/
Summary of Modification: Updating Twigg's physicality and equipment.
Reason for Modification: Twigg is probably going to be used in an upcoming PvP event. Because of recent IC changes, I feel his bio should be updated to reflect that.
Modification:

Height: 7'5
Nicknames/Callsign: ALPHA 4, Twigg

In appearance, replace six foot, seven inches with seven foot, five inches.

Add at the end of equipment, Project AFTERLIFE Augmentations.
 
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